MARVOLoUsJ1009 vs lyricalflowz23
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 lines...go ova u lose
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feedin...

yo ima set da due date till 2morrow cuzz im tired as fukk rite now...

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 03:27 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 02:59 PM.

lyricalflowz23 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 02:59 PM.

after dis ima keep da link in my sig just da proves he's dead...
n u gay,said marvj i just smoked ur "Ass" in da booty thread..

'strobe' like a coast guard cuzz my "flow" caused a few spitta's da "sink"..
n dogg everybody 'saw' u get merk twice by a nigga name "winc"

get W's off dr's but watch me put a spark 2 ya fans,u garbage & fam!
do ya self a favor step up ya "game boy" cuzz u real far from "advanced"

ya audio's should be trash cuzz u aint even nice at dis u gota average text
think im soft? well u "dont know who u fukkin w/" like da "blind ppl haven sex"

u not fukkin with me im lyrically gifted i merk folks,u win off of jerk votes..
u only battle dudes with da title unda they sreen name "this is my first post"

u hott? then y u flop when u drop shit, number "1" homie u not sick
dis gon be ya "3"rd lost n by da way let him r.i.p n get off "2" pac dick

its easy as 123 datz y u envy me,j is who dis fag pretends da be
u might have "lyrical" skill & "flowz" but u gota wait till u "23"

but tell ya moms prick,how u a undercover fag dat be on dick
u like men w/ "giant" balls & a guy name "barry" is who u "bond" with

i said 10-15 line but dat shit aint even i spit 16 n i aint even notice..but if u wanna get me dqed dat some bitch shit but do whut u do

yeah yeah.............................................. ........vote ppl

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

I was readin over the battle and I just noticed straight from the beginning that marv was feeding and went over the line limit. Didnt he agree to the rules of the battle that he made up there...weird.

Anyways,

Lyricalflowz23...You was damn tight with them personals...there was a bunch of them. I specifically liked the one about him pre-writing. Even though your name is lyricalflow your flow seems to be off to me...If you can do that shit on a mic good then word to ya but I wasnt feelin it much. I thought the verse also was pretty creative. The elevator line came off pretty wack though. You could use some more multies I think also. Nice metaphors and similies though to spice up your verse. Good drop.

MarvolousJ1009....The gay lines you gotta take out, all they do is hurt your verse. You had some nice punches in there also I liked the one about the sink, wether or not people get it. It also hurt you saying that you run to strobe when something happens though. I didnt think you came as hard or as creative as lyrical, he was tearin you up with the personals. I seen the one you had with him and winc, just wasnt hard enough. Flow was better than his though and that always helps it sound better and makes it easier to read. I just didnt think you were on top of how hard he came. Good drop by both of you though. ONE

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

close battle but Lyrical flows came harder marvolous you good and shit but he came a herder in this battle...nice structure nice punches and good personals

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yo how da fukk can i feed of his verse u dickhead when they dont even show da person's verse till both of dem drop n i went ova wun fukin line i aint od is 15 lines even??

nigger?? dogg whut drug is in a ya system rite now can u say dat word in da street without gettin ya jaw knocked out ya mouth

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

ehhh...

marv: you had some nice punchlines, some nice personals.. a well rounded verse... orginiality was there and that is what i was looking for...

lyricalflow:ehhh.. i heard alot of thos epunches before.. specially that 1009 crack.. i was hoping to see some hype ish na mean? your verse was a little played.. definatly not the hardest iv seen you come.. it was an average RapVerse.com verse.. was kinda dissapointed, cause iv seen better from ya..

i gotta give it to marv for originality alone.. No Hate..

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

lyrical alot of good punches and disees with a good flow got you this you hit real hard on this verse8/10
marv that first line looked like a feed but i dont know it was whacked anyways good punches and disses too this was also a goos verse your flow was a little bit streched though and that hurt you but your usual it was hard a 7.8/10
damn this was a good battle but flow hit hard on them personals and had better flow so he gets my vote.....barely

strucutre- lyrical
flow-lyrical-
punches- lyrical..
personals- lyrical


it wasn't really that close.... Lyrical showed punches, personals and good flow...

easily took the battle..

marvlous.... you have to work on the structure and verse flow... nice lines though no hate....

v/ Lyricalflow

I can't seem to vote on this for some reason, the box isn't there, just the reply button.

But anyway Lyrical 23 Took this one with tight as hell punches and good flow. As that other guy said MARV lost it on the gay lines, if you'd had stook with the proper ones, you would have done aight. But as I said, Lyrical 23 won this straight out.

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

umm not the best verses ive seen from either of you.

punches-flowz.....harder punches overall, j's were kinda played
multis-marvolous....flowz u didnt really have any multis
structure-flowz...j's line length fluctuated just a lil more
personals-flowz...the links and personals were just plain better
flow-marvolous...flowz verse got a lil repetitive in some places

overall good verses from both but flowz took more categories and by more so ... v//lyricalflowz23
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

aight this battle was ok but i think marv edged it

Marv...u haad sum gud wordplay and ur personals wus aight but the flo was off ....on sum parts....ur structure i liked....overall id say about a 7/10

lyrical...ur verse was smooth but i didnt think u tried but anyways u had sum gud wordplay...ur vocab was aight and personals was ok didnt really like em though overall it was jus decent or 6.8/10

Vote=marv

yo go hit this battle up between me and dragon heres the link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

Lyrical gets my vote...he had harder punches than MARV..his structure was in place..and tha flow was good too..tha vocab was good and easy to read...

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not voting, i just wanna see the battle score and responses..

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

Ill do this by lines i like.

Marv

get W's off dr's but watch me put a spark 2 ya fans,u garbage & fam!
do ya self a favor step up ya "game boy" cuzz u real far from "advanced"

u not fukkin with me im lyrically gifted i merk folks,u win off of jerk votes..
u only battle dudes with da title unda they sreen name "this is my first post"

ya audio's should be trash cuzz u aint even nice at dis u gota average text
think im soft? well u "dont know who u fukkin w/" like da "blind ppl haven sex"

but tell ya moms prick,how u a undercover fag dat be on dick
u like men w/ "giant" balls & a guy name "barry" is who u "bond" with
The "this is my first post" one was hot, liked that, and the rest were good punches...

lyricalflowz23(please change this name, lol)

I have winstreaks longer than your moms, and your sisters hair combined,
you couldn't have a pretty verse, if you had it customly designed,

That was the only line I was feelin in that..most of them are played punches ppl used on him, the "elevate with a elevator" line was wack as hell, c'mon dog...and yall had the same Booty Thread concept...gay....but anyway
v/Marv for better punches in his verse.

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

marv hasd better personals n not so played punches i've seen alot of variations of most of these punches but ya'll put them together fairly nice,marv got the originality for good punches,
lf23 you punches were aight but severly played out.....your finisher could've been better to...i found it simple with not alot of punch...not much in your verse connected.....
but decent battle overall......i was jus feeling marvs more....

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

lyricalflow cuz he had more persnals and harder punches... flow and structure were good too...
Marv you had strong punches and good structure an d flow but lyrical had more personals and thats why he got my vote...

v/LuricalFlow23

I don't know whats up but i can't vote..... otherwise i would give it to Lyrical, hmmm, you guys both had sic personels, I love personels, but I think Lyricalflowz just came at you harder wit them, and his punches hit like mad, J you was str8, sic verse, I was like mad feelin it in some ryhmes and then wasn't really in to it in others, you had more meta's both of you had some sic wordplay, it was hella close battle, but lyrical owned the multis, and his flow was tight, J was to but it was just a little lacking, Lyrical man you gotta use hyperlinks it makes your structure better, either way, it was still good structure, a little better then J's, opener was a definate tie, but the closing has to go to Lyrical, fo real tho honest, no h8, i'm a good judge, pz

Take it to strobe cuz this sude be a win if i could vote..... unless i dont got enough posts, that would just be wack

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

This battle was so fuckin wack!
both of yall niggas are straight garbage.
Lyricalflows came less garbage.
Marv, just came completly horrible, I mean..

ya audio's should be trash cuzz u aint even nice at dis u gota average text
think im soft? well u "dont know who u fukkin w/" like da "blind ppl haven sex

^wtf was that shit?
that was some of the most wackest waskiest wacky wack wack shit I ever seen, and you prolly thought that shit was dope when you typed it too, didnt you?
I GOT NEWS FOR YOU!
IT WASNT DOPE!

you aint even worth my time, im done with this cat, ENOUGH SAID,
now that im done "exposing" ur "ass" it now belongs in the "Booty Thread"

^That shit was ultimate trash too, but atleast it had some sort of wittiness.
or some shit, yall niggas are wack
and yalls punchlines are so fuckin basic.
like I said before, v/lyrical, for being less wack and a wack ass battle.