Miss_Jess vs afropimp
 

Battle Rules:

6 -12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 03:51 PM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 03:21 PM.

Miss_Jess has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 03:23 PM.

u done got in my in my veiw and now deth sees ya
fill ur body wirh shells from tha des eagle
im evil// like tha devil from hell
got a news flash miss jess is male// o well
after this battle ull no it was a mistake
u ll be all on my nuts and ask me out on a date
how u be nown as a fly weight
im tha truth no hata
yo pussy so ruff its like beatin off wit sand paper
ill let them vote then post up lata
and i still will win// u owe me money you have been pimped by afro pimp

Girls don't fuck with you wimp cuz your dick is as "big" as a shrimp
You're Weak like a weazel,better get some training ya "pimp"
Important newsflash: chicks certainly don't dig that afro hair
Look around,you're still square boi no matter what you wear
Don't be silly,ya not gettin any head with that mini willy
No excuses boi,it didn't shrunk cuz the weather is chilly
Self-service will save you money hunny,at least do it well
Slower than a snail,sounds like a defintion of your sperm cel
Your mouth drops,blue balls appear when i start shakin my booty
Dream on,you're way outta my league,i don't go for fruity

uppin for vote ggod battle honest votes

Voted For: Miss_Jess

u done got in my in my veiw and now deth sees ya (well theres a typo actually a couple)
fill ur body wirh shells from tha des eagle(iguess together it's ok)
im evil// like tha devil from hell (wack really really wack)
got a news flash miss jess is male// o well (oh well what and do some rescreach cause she difently a girl)
after this battle ull no it was a mistake (wha wqas a mistake explain yoiur lines more)
u ll be all on my nuts and ask me out on a date (you just called her a guy so you called your self gay)
how u be nown as a fly weight(ok idk where you were going with that)
im tha truth no hata (not in a battle come on)
yo pussy so ruff its like beatin off wit sand paper (yea one good line!!! lol)
ill let them vote then post up lata (ok i guess but what that gotta do with any thing)
and i still will win// u owe me money you have been pimped by afro pimp (good closer)

over all kinda simple and boring and wack

Girls don't fuck with you wimp cuz your dick is as "big" as a shrimp (ok ok)
You're Weak like a weazel,better get some training ya "pimp" (wack i didn't get it)
Important newsflash: chicks certainly don't dig that afro hair (ha nice)
Look around,you're still square boi no matter what you wear (ok ok)
Don't be silly,ya not gettin any head with that mini willy (damn oh shit lol nice)
No excuses boi,it didn't shrunk cuz the weather is chilly (oh damn she going raw off on your ass)
Self-service will save you money hunny,at least do it well (i think i get it but its needs work)
Slower than a snail,sounds like a defintion of your sperm cel (no not this on bad thumb down)
Your mouth drops,blue balls appear when i start shakin my booty (go somwhere wit it)
Dream on,you're way outta my league,i don't go for fruity (damn nice close)

afro you just got beet by a girl lol

Voted For: afropimp

YO good battle. Nice drops by both. Wasnt feelin Afropimp in tha beginnin but towards tha in he had som hot shit. Jess you shit was good. I just got tired of them dik jokes. AN i mean quick. Im given it to pimp cuz he killed you wit dat Sand paper line...classic shit.SHe had you wit structure an wordplay. Good job 2 both. V/Afropimp

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This was feedback posted for Miss_Jess
 

can't vote..but in my opinion jess got this way ta elevate gurl...keep it up....

thats some bullshit there...bbw your a fuckin herb...i'll merk your ass in do-tyme...fuckin homo...

uppin this stuff, i'll return da favor, just drop ya votes....

This was feedback posted for Miss_Jess
 

LoL jESS Merked yo azz i cant vote cuz thats tha 1st lady of Lv
But way 2 hold it down ma

Voted For: afropimp

this battle goez 2 pimp bcuz he had structure personalz n punchez.....jess only had punchez but they wuz weak wich made her shyt bad so weak abttl eu 2 but afro won this

Plz return a favr n vote 4 my battlez thnxs

Voted For: Miss_Jess

i cant vote on this (crew) but miss u had a good verse. punches were alright and kinda funny. you do have a really good structure tho. kinda repetitious but otha than that GOOD JOB!



Crew vote removed

u posted vote u sed u didnt vote cuz crew mods handle dat pleaze uppin for votes

yeah my bad on that one sent a pm to strobe so he shuld handle it. i meant to just post feedback but i wasnt payin attention. my bad!

uppin for votes all honest no t cuz shes a femcee

uppin for votes all honest no t cuz shes a femcee

uppin for votes, its 2-1 for afro cuz one vote for me doesn't count (crew)

This was feedback posted for Miss_Jess
 

this was aight and shit, ill battler Jess if she up for it.

This was feedback posted for Miss_Jess
 

neither of you spit hot you both threw weaker punches then a overweight boxer in the 80th round.this was bad flow to afro as well as struture vocab to jess this is basically a tie cuz noone did any damage

Voted For: Miss_Jess

this battle was wackkk..

but i gatta say miss_jess got this 1...her structure was better and she had better personals + punches...the other guy had a verse that got me sayin "huh??????????????????"...he didnt focus on the battle and his verse was wack he didnt have atleast a punch...miss_jess got this 1 cos she came up better than the ohter dude...well miss jess u gonna have to change style a lil cos in a battle shaking ur booty???..i dont think its a used shit in battle nah mean?...but as u came up with better verse u got this 1...

Voted For: Miss_Jess

ayt afropimp dat verse jus....i dunno was very weak........
both didnt have many punches really structure was decent on both verses flow equal but overall miss_jesscame stronger
had more wats da word.......tried harder....
miss_jess gets my vote

i didnt vote cuz i couldnt still think that both were aight.

Voted For: Miss_Jess

Miss jess.......structure was good......flowed nice......multies worked well........punches were decent.....and so was personals...

afropimp.......structure was rubbish....flow trailed......multies were there but didn't really fit.....punches were weak....no pesonals...

vote...:Miss_Jess