-..Jono..- vs 2~pacalypse
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines (5 Bars) Minimum
15-20 Lines (10 Bars) Maximum
"Both" spits due "30" minutes "After" "Check-in"

"Check-in" due in "5-minutes". holla


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 09:06 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

-..Jono..- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 08:39 PM.

2~pacalypse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 08:43 PM.

Hey Juno, Thats Quite A Nice Rhyme//
But How You Gonna Diss Me Using The Exact Same Line??//
You Took My "Hit-Soft" Line And Made A Little Change To It//
I Checked Your Status And It Took You 5 Min. To Spew~It//
Common, Its A Cypher It Aint That Hard To Spit A Quick Minute//
Dissin' Me About Guys When You Actually Like The Ass-Hole, You Actually In~It//
Dont Waste My Time Typin' Up 8 1/2 Bars//
You Finished 1/2 Way, Bitch You Aint No Star//
You In Really Big-Trouble, Your Ride Has Ended//
You're A Faggot Ass Rapper, Please Dont Get Offended...

Uppin you gonna spit?

Aint no way my lines don drop n hit, it takes a big pussy to be startin shit
You a crip for life n keep coppin "Bitch", 92 treaty states its over you fake 2~pacalypse
Cop ressurection one more time, n than you "Might" have a chance at a real rhyme
20 flap of those "Lines" fucked your rhymes, I more choose to get High off My "Lines"..

Of homies keepin ask where i came from, n the block that i Rep
you treatin this rap game like the C, i teach the "Walk" you teach the 2-step
give it up homie, aint no way you comparin to me cus im "Positive" your "Minimal"
ill chop you up in a One word Syllable, your career is like n asians eyes barley fuckin "Visible"..

To everyone else, how you keep diggin for "Pre-written" lines outta your purse
if there was n award for whos freestyles the worst, 2~pacalypse takes first
than again he jus mite be cursed, if he ever tried to bite a line from my verse
its hard to be a real nigga, when you got both these "Fists" up your skirt..

is where your rap career answer lies, n if your lucky like "B.I.G" ill make you "Hypnotized"
or how bout jus mesmorized, trippin you out cus youd only win if i "Pre-wrote-your-Rhymes"
You wanna be the "Hero" one Negro to Negro, ima inject these Sedated lines n i tend to be leathal
You aint no hercules bitch, cus you managed to keep yourself from "Zero" to "Zero"..

Hollah..-..Jono..-

This was feedback posted for 2~pacalypse
 

Damn... pac aint Write Enough, Jono Wrote Alot, Ok battle...

Fuck that secound shit:

Shove Ya || Mind Thru Ya Spine || So You can " Back Track ya Thoughts "...Leave This Bitch..Skinner than ||" Jews In the Holocaust "||

.....||" Thrash Ya Spleen...N-2(into) Ya Kid-Knees(kidneys) "|| Till Ya ' Bladder Leaks From En'V'(Envey)...No Way Your ILLER than ME....!!...and Im Quick to Bring Ya ||" Verses To a Pause "|| like ' Shy(chi) Kids In the Mess Hall '......
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Stop and pause...Death Is Comming Soon.....

||" Snatch ya Dreams..."||To really ' End This Nightmare ' Leave ya Vision Impared Win(when) The Punch Hits...N'Rarely Miss...U Stop'n(stop in) This?Nah!.Cus E Could ||" Ghost Write Ya Verse "|| and You Still Couldn't ' Beat My Diss '

E'have Ya ' TRI-ING(trying) To Understand ' Y(why) ya Lost...Like I Cut Ya Inaitls and ||" Handed Ya Mind a Struggling Thought(NM...aka nevamind) "||..E*Got N ' Cut....Rolled and Bought '..As if He was Nick-A-Teen(Nicatine..Cigerattes)..U In I*A?O" So You Thought.......

(Bitch thought i wasn't gonna show..huh...)
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I'll Stop After These 2..Fuq The Win..Just Feel Like Dropping a Quick Verse..lol

Afta(after) This Loss..You'll Be ' Steel(still) On Ya Rain(Reign) '...E'll have You ||" Needing Row-Gain(Rogaine) "||..Afta the Punchess Leave U(You) ' Bold On ya Brain '...Like Key-Mo(Cancer) Treatment....E'll Leave You ||" Sick and Punking "||....Just So you No(Know) ' You'll Neva Catch Fame in this Game....'

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lol you done?, im pretty sure the feedback was supplied for this battle, not to include a whole another set you got on your comp lol, holla with some votes people n some honest love, peace

Rofl, hope you dont get mad I just thought this was a small battle I guess not.

Let the votes come..

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Rule number one, never "Underestimate" lol, numbers are decieving..

Should always give 110 in any battle, don' think you need the upset loss to make you push your best now, lol even tho its inevitable, i aint hatin tho player keep doin yo thing, jus make your own thread for your spits tho, some niggas jus wanna read the spits n votes lol, lets keep the votes comin

Lmao, yea same. Cot dang there are alot of lazy people..

vote!!!

Im out I wanna see some votes tommarrrroooo!!

uppin 4 votes...

Voted For: 2~pacalypse

my god this man has a point...u used the same line 2 times...aint no excuse for that

Voted For: 2~pacalypse

best battle i seen all night... jono... work on ya structure... ya lines were stretched ya best lines were:

To everyone else, how you keep diggin for "Pre-written" lines outta your purse
if there was n award for whos freestyles the worst, 2~pacalypse takes first
than again he jus mite be cursed, if he ever tried to bite a line from my verse
its hard to be a real nigga, when you got both these "Fists" up your skirt..

if ya woulda stuck to this ya woulda pulled out the win... ya had plenty of disses but personals hit harder and that's where 2 pacalypse took you.... he also had a better structure... closer than what it seems but i gotta go with 2 on this one

Voted For: -..Jono..-

JOno has dis shyt he fuked u up 2pac seriously dere wuz nuttin u cud have dun shyt.....he had punchez dat murdered u he had persoansl dat merked him 2pac u aint have shyt u suk dawg das y u bout 2 luse against me n dis nigga

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ight, uppin..lets keep the honest votes n luv comin, holla back

Na thats a hate vote...Read his text

Voted For: -..Jono..-

Dayum i liked ur flow man really feeling it and the punches were harder dm 2pac's no hate structure is decent and nice personals yall


return an honost vote yall in my sig wit westoaklanekillah

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ight, hot battle goin' on here, jus lookin for some honest love with some feedback n votes, hollah back youngn's..

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ight, uppin for votes, lets get this goin, hollah back wit some votes

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ight, holla back wit some honest votes n feedback peeps, hollah

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ight, uppin for votes, lets get some votes n feedback to help close the battle...

This was feedback posted for 2~pacalypse
 

ahhhh! what was that man? it was ok but come on rep cold blood. ur structure was a lil off and the punches were just so-so. u gotta explain personals like that homeboy and vocab was kinda simple. i didnt see his verse and i wont but it was just ok

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uppin for votes, lets get some feedback and votes, Holla back... :gfy:

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ight, uppin for votes, lets get this closed n add a win one way, loss for the other, hollah back young'ns

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ight...uppin, lets get this shit closed, peace....

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uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

Voted For: -..Jono..-

one sided battle here

2pac your verse spent more time
feeding off his verse and thats NOT good
and punches hit like pillows man, sorry jus being honest

Jono, came packed with punches,
but flow was a lil streched
still had enough to take the battle though

vote/Jono

return the favor plzzzzz don't ignore dis

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143508

uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

Voted For: -..Jono..-

Was pretty close..... but I didn't like the fact that 2P had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to Jono... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..

v/Jono

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ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

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ight, uppin for votes, lets get this shit closed holla back

Voted For: -..Jono..-

Vote = Jono

Jono had harder punches than 2~pac..a nice flow & structure.
..he had some multi's in there..wordplay was nice..and the vo-
cab was good..