DOT vs ShackleS
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 11:23 AM

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ShackleS has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:55 AM.

DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 11:01 AM.

~Rippin this cat to shreds..........he dunno "what hit him"~
~Guys a physco battlin me...tha loony bin "will admit him"~

~He should quit right now....before he get's humiliated~
~Rap..stupid bitch raps like he's on tha shitter...constipated~

~Amatur rappers are his thing....whats he doin battlin tha king~
~You tha type of emcee that jus hands out a win~

~You CAN'T tamper wit ma skills they reach infinate, yo's minus.~
~This bitch is dunno shit bout hip~hop, if he had a crew it'd be tha "cheap ass rhymers"~

~Dot, Yeah dot is how small this dude is,straight up~
~Look, no affence but im not bout to lose genst a gay~fuck!~

i know you and you come from a long line of bitches
thats why im leavin you in a long mile of ditches
look imma tell you the truth you aint on my level
im big you small, imma a mountain youz a peeble
what im really tryna tell you is dog youre nothin
you thought you was fo real (Pharrel) you was just frontin
man the name SHACKLES reminds me of a slave ship
ill SHACKLE yo ass all up and make you my slave bitch
imma save my punchlines i felt youre not hard
you softer that plush pillows in a little pink car
so imma stop wit this shit before i get too serious
ill have you leakin all over like you just started yo period

5 mins. thats all i needed

~Rippin this cat to shreds..........he dunno "what hit him"~
~Guys a physco battlin me...tha loony bin "will admit him"~

~He should quit right now....before he get's humiliated~
~Rap..stupid bitch raps like he's on tha shitter...constipated~

~Amatur rappers are his thing....whats he doin battlin tha king~
~You tha type of emcee that jus hands out a win~

~You CAN'T tamper wit ma skills they reach infinate, yo's minus.~
~This bitch is dunno shit bout hip~hop, if he had a crew it'd be tha "cheap ass rhymers"~

~Dot, Yeah dot is how small this dude is,straight up~
~Look, no affence but im not bout to lose genst a gay~fuck!~

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This was feedback posted for DOT
 

Nice verse I cant vote yet
but dis is goin to be da first one I vote on

Voted For: DOT

For: Dot
Rhymez were equal but dot woz more personal close battle
return tha favor wite warrior vs lyricalflowz23

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: DOT

Opener: ShackleS
Closer: Tied
Structure: Dot
Flow: Dot
Punches: Tied
Personals: Dot
Wordplay: ShackleS

Conclusion:

Shackles I liked yah wordPlay, and Some of yah Punches, but yah Structure, was fucked, and the Flow was also Scetchy. Dot, You didnt Really Come That Hard, But yah Had a few Punches in there, and the Personals, and Structure, and Flow were good, and thats why i voted for you, Because of an OVerall Better Verse.. !!!


Not hate.. Just Laying My Opinion..

Return teh Fav, Vote on a BAttle in My Sig.. Peace

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This was feedback posted for DOT
 

Wierd battle
dot ya flow was good and so was ya stucture both of youu need to elevate alot
shackles your verse was good but i didnt really understand

Voted For: DOT

give it 2 DOT not
alot of punches but more den
SHACKLES but he had da better
flow n structure but da metas
n punches u had won u da battles

my fault yo vote on deez battles
please n honest votes ppl.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142212

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463

Voted For: ShackleS

VOte shackles, clearly with wordplay, punches, flow, and basically a desacent read

DOT STRAIGHT TO THE POINT, you need to elevate and bring better vocab and punches


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Voted For: DOT

This battle was pretty even, but Dot came with harder punches, nice finisher too. ShackleS, what happened? I've seen you come harder than that before...No hate though, good battle.
Vote - DOT

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This was feedback posted for DOT
 

well his verse was more complex than shackles, shacke had some stuff, some good punchlines, but bit him on da ass hard this battle

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Voted For: ShackleS

Dot - you had an alright flow, stucture was coo, rhyme scheme was pretty basic and there were no real personals or hard hittin punches, so i give you a 6/10

shackels - you also had great stucture, nice smooth flowing rhymes, no real personals, but like 1 or 2 punches that were ok, 1 or 2 more than him so i give you a 7/10

shackels therefore i vote for you..

please retutn favor, heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143508

Voted For: ShackleS

shackles took this...

but shakles but your whole verse together do not seperate throguh the lines that slows the flow down when the reader is reading it... but overall nice punches they connected nice wordplay... his name was DOT i'm suprised u didn't incorporate that in there but good...

flow-DOT
punches Shack
Creativity- Shack

v/ Shackles


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Voted For: DOT

Ayo foreal, dot was nice, and shackles you was nice too, but I think dot edged you on this one. No hate it's all love, but to be totally honest. Baased on what I've seen from both of you in the past both yall shit was lacking, but dot came harder this time.

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Voted For: DOT

Damn.............................hot~ass~battle... but my vote has to go to DOT...his verse his punches..had me in stitches..mayn..hard punches from both Emcee's...but DOT gets my vote..