Lyricalflowz23 vs SONIC
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 01:46 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 01:47 PM.

lyricalflowz23 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 01:48 PM.

Yo, when my "Lyrics Flow", it just Looks So Right
If I some how stole the internet, that's means I Took Yo Life
You might be Boo Boo, but best believe you're Not The Shit
If yo Fists fell off yo wrists, u still couldn't "Drop" a Hit
I spit heat to make plasma from air atoms and Strike Lightnin
U try to battle, but u end up "Biting" off niggas like Mike Tyson
I got this "Thread" on lock, like I was Weiving Some Cloth
If you win then you should be on Ripley's Beleive It or Not
Coz I don't believe in you, like Alien Biengs
I control earth from it's "nucleus", like a HomoSapiens Genes
Yo lyrics wouldn't even "flow" in the Mediterainian Sea
It's a shame, i'm even two times better than yo Favorite MC
U even Heard I was Tight,my flows slam you on Vertical Spikes
I would use personal too, but that's if he had a Personal Life
You should of known from the gate homeboy, I'm Fast Pace
While you can start 100 miles ahead and still end in Last Place

^Surprisingly good drop

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz23
 

Tight verse's both of yall did a good job.

ups

This was feedback posted for SONIC
 

ok flow i think you could have done way better cuz you killed him with that link bar and your vocab was good but your flow was streched as fuck and some of your punches aint het right.overall you get a 6/10
sonic your opener was whacked that tyson line is old as fuck you had a very good flow and wordplay but none of your punches hit so basically you pulled a mase here bullshit rhymes with a whole lotta bounce-5/10
vote-flows

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

i gotta give this ta 23 he had mad personals on sonic n came with much more original lines...punches were consistent n flowed well....sonic..nice verse 2 but i've seen ya use that flow line n a couple others its gettin old,n played..you jus dint get personal enough in this ta take it..some of your lines you attempted ta get complex then lost ya meanin...no hate ya'll this is an honest vote
return the vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054

uppin

uppin again

Voted For: SONIC

Good battle. Good shit from both. I'm gonna have ta give it ta Sonic though. Sonic had more versatile punches, using more metas and shit. Lyrical kinda fell with punches cuz he didnt really expand or say more creative rhymes than Sonic. He had some good lines, you definitly take the personals. But I think Sonic takes it with punches. Good battle. Ya'll know I got respect for both too.

Vote-Sonic

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

i'm like a "blood" clot right underneath your heart, killin your "flow"
ur probably thinkin in ur mind "a yo, id been better off being a no show"
Nice Opener9/10
this is just text, u dont even wanna guess how bad id rip u n the flesh,
u da nicest on RV? dude if everyone left this site, u still wouldn't be the best,
7.5/10
My rhymes have "Killed" more "vets" than "WORLD WAR TWO" no exception for u,
I was talking 2 ur sister on AIM and she said if she could she'd vote for me 2,
LOL 7/10
the only time u ever make a "DOPE" line is when your fixing up your 'cocaine',
i've heard you seem to not be able to win a battle, without having to "COMPLAIN"
7/10
You think, that just because of your record that all of the cats on here fear?
if i was winnin this battle, u'd probably close it exactly like you did here::
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140451
Nice one nice one 9/10
my lyrics, are sharp as knives, and best believe they cut throats,
with a record like that, i'd hate to count how many pm's u did to get d/r votes,
7/10
this cats sig's a joke, should be other way around, u see "emcees", you "run",
He's a dickrider, everytime i check to see's who's online, he's PM'n someone,
5/10 Decent

Total: 56/80


Yo, when my "Lyrics Flow", it just Looks So Right
If I some how stole the internet, that's means I Took Yo Life
Nice Opener 7/10
You might be Boo Boo, but best believe you're Not The Shit
If yo Fists fell off yo wrists, u still couldn't "Drop" a Hit
decent 6/10
I spit heat to make plasma from air atoms and Strike Lightnin
U try to battle, but u end up "Biting" off niggas like Mike Tyson
7/10
I got this "Thread" on lock, like I was Weiving Some Cloth
If you win then you should be on Ripley's Beleive It or Not
ehh didnt really like this line 4/10
Coz I don't believe in you, like Alien Biengs
I control earth from it's "nucleus", like a HomoSapiens Genes
much better 7/10
Yo lyrics wouldn't even "flow" in the Mediterainian Sea
It's a shame, i'm even two times better than yo Favorite MC
NICE 8/10
U even Heard I was Tight,my flows slam you on Vertical Spikes
I would use personal too, but that's if he had a Personal Life
cool 9/10
You should of known from the gate homeboy, I'm Fast Pace
While you can start 100 miles ahead and still end in Last Place
Nice closer 7/10

Total: 55/80

DAYUM REAL CLOSE BATTLE

Personals: Lyrical
Punches: Lyrical
Multies: Neither
Opener: Lyrical
Closer: SONIC

The line that got me was
'You think, that just because of your record that all of the cats on here fear?
if i was winnin this battle, u'd probably close it exactly like you did here::
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140451'

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

daaaaaaaaamnnnn... no offence, but by readin yo name, lyricalflowz23, id think u was a herb... -_-


ok

sonic:the beggingin of your verse wasntg to hot... but you picked up which is good.. it got better and better.. towards the middle to the end, it was actually good hehe.. you didnt have to much wordplay.. you were a tad bit boastful is this particular verse...thatsbrought it down a tad..

lyrical: lol...first bar would have been pretty god, but the flow was a lil messed in the second line..same with you.. its not your first half of your verse was bad, its jsut that it was a lil played.... yours just suddenly got good when you got to your 6th line.. after that it was pretty good.. saw some nice metas.. personals were in there.. but what really did it for me, is his sigplay (bar righ tbefore the last bar), and then to top it off, you had the good ass personal about him and pmin people.... not tryna start beef, cause he a good MC, but ^ thats true as hell lol.. that last bar was fire and what really won it for you.. that was put together and set up almost perfectly.. good job.. nice battle by both of you minus the first halfs :p .. aight stay up

i just saw the other votes... lyrical you shoulda made some links for that pm'in one. cause many people wont get it.. aight stay up ya'll

uppin again, for some reason i knew that Calamity would vote..

Voted For: SONIC

Sonic- Punches Were Nice, Flow Was Good, And Some Ok Metaphors--

Lyrical- Punches Werent As Good as Sonics, Wordplay Was Ok, Structure Was Ok, And Flow Was Ight

Punches- Sonic
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Lyrical
Metaphors- Sonic
Originality- Sonic
Structure- Tie

[b]Final Vote- Sonic

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140771

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

damn hot hot battle but heres the breakdown:
flow-sonic....flowz was a lil off this time for some reason
personals-flowz...godamn he got you on the personals sonic with the pm'n and the closin battles thing just everything
multis-sonic....flowz didnt really have any
creativity-flowz....close category but flowz sounded less prewritten than sonic's
punches-flowz...once again took it with the sick personals
v/flowz.....close battle but damn he was up on game this time and the personals were crazy but dont worry sonic he didnt completly merk u.
hit up the battles in the sig and return the favor.

no hate vote cuz im just noticing now it kinda sounded like one. but lol just after i voted i went to see what SONIC was doing and guess what..........pm'ing. makes flowz verse that much better lol stay up yall

yo i voted for lyrical flowz strobe fix that :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz23
 

wow this was a weak battle from so called vets, very few punches from othe, lyrical lay off the selfglorification and work on flow but overall lyric won cuz of better punches

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

Lyrical easily takes this, His punches were much more consistent, his "Cocaine/Complain" line absolutely killed sonic.... Sonic, your lines were way played, like the Riplys Belive it or not line, that shit was wack as fuck... Your only hot line was your opener, but the rest was played... So Lyrical takes this because he had much harder hittin punches, adn his personals killed sonic