hotshh! vs -..Jono..-
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 02:48 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

come on buddy man up
u wanted me SO bad
come correct

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lol no, i don' want a no name without a record so bad lol, jus was seein what you had, but ill accept your challenge n embarrass you, i always got time for bitches haha, pussy n tang are my fav thing, youll be a sweet peach to finish haha

-..Jono..- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 02:53 PM.

ahahah u better check summof my past battles if u think its gonna be peaches and cream nigga
and while youre there u can add up my wins and loses 4 your self homo

hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 02:56 PM.

With n "Invisible" Record, Cockshhhhitts losses potentially have no End
I choose a girl n he needs a M-A-N?, U jus been "Bitch Slapped" with my Mixed "Acronym" LOL
ight homie ima be legit n true, you need to measure yourself off a real man
fo real someone else, than your two "Boyfriends" as your only fans haha...

..Seems to be somethin this bitch is lackin, besides fudgepackin n Tacklin
your mom with spits, when she heard you it made both her "Lips" laughin haha
im jus playin homie, aint no real way you would ever beat me any day
i sniff bitches n flaps, n i could sniff this bitch faster than a flap of Cocaine...

With the right mixture, i might cut it right for ya N actually make your Career "Blow"
jus don be mad, when with my "Lines" hittin ya up ill leave your feet "Dead" cold
You aint a real nigga, ima seperate the real niggas right here n watch you made
homie thanks for the spit, cus now like the Orange juice in a "Minute" Jono was "Made"

Hollah..-..Jono..-

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i thought the time limit was for 30 minutes, shit nigga its been over 35 now, whats takin you so long, your horrible lol, hurry up, i been waitin a while

ahahah i set it up 4 maaaad time kid i hope u aint drop yet so take ya time
jus a little info 4 u
wen u see me online KNOW that it aint my computer and i can be kicked off at any time so im not gonna tell u in 30 minutes wen they kicking me out in 10 feel me?
but i visit everyday once so my shit will be up same time tomorrow
DONT BITCH its outta my hands but wen i get a comp of my own, u really gonna see ME online
One more thing nigga if u want to know my rec go to all posts by hot and add em up'
its not that hard so i cant hide nothing really , But it aint cuz my wreck is bad its cuz im workin on it so mind ya business

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lol are you done? the time it took to write that, a spit should have been dropped, thas' why you where not acceptin my battles, cus i give "More" than enough time in 30 minutes for n average spitter, your jus dickin around n makin a battle than all over the place, drop your spit n the next 15 Minutes, peace

dis is outta hand, i aint come on to argue wit u AGAIN
i will be on tomorrow same time not my comp
go focus on ya other battles kid ill even up em 4 u
im offline now check my status peace!

ok this is the end of the road 4 jono
fyi wen someone makes the thread THEY pick the rules OK?

aiight
lets go


Hot'll Rip Jono apart... If U squemish Dont Look!
Ill make U eat ya words like U swallowed Ya Notebook!
Dont worry bout my Rec*, Finish ya Profile
Cuz Duplicate Pics of Fake Tits is Realer than Ya Whole Style!
Im So Foul, Jono'll Squeel, U Know da Deal!
Am I battling 'Pitbull'? Cuz U 'Colo' 4 real!
Ya own Mother wouldnt 'Sign' U wit the Language of da Deaf!*
U couldnt drop a bootleg album in Spanish On Cassette!
U should Manage Some Respect, Or get Used to da Losses
Cuz I Knock Niggas Out, I dont Wrestle like Steve Austin
Jono my 'son', I thought ya Moms had an Abortion!
U shouldnt start 'beef' when Ya Talent is Salad Tossing!
Who R U kiddng? I wear out Newbies like Used Mittens
Cuz this 'cat' so 'Pussy', he giving birth to Kittens!!!!
Good Riddens! I burnt U son they smell the Aroma
Never 'Call me Out', Im of the Hook, So Hang Da Phone UP!!!!


* he says i hide my rec well he hides his profile, also he said on his last battle that next year he dropping an album, hah!
straight punches

ok this is the end of the road 4 jono
fyi wen someone makes the thread THEY pick the rules OK?

aiight
lets go


Hot'll Rip Jono apart... If U squemish Dont Look!
Ill make U eat ya words like U swallowed Ya Notebook!
Dont worry bout my Rec*, Finish ya Profile
Cuz Duplicate Pics of Fake Tits is Realer than Ya Whole Style!
Im So Foul, Jono'll Squeel, U Know da Deal!
Am I battling 'Pitbull'? Cuz U 'Colo' 4 real!
Ya own Mother wouldnt 'Sign' U wit the Language of da Deaf!*
U couldnt drop a bootleg album in Spanish On Cassette!
U should Manage Some Respect, Or get Used to da Losses
Cuz I Knock Niggas Out, I dont Wrestle like Steve Austin
Jono my 'son', I thought ya Moms had an Abortion!
U shouldnt start 'beef' when Ya Talent is Salad Tossing!
Who R U kiddng? I wear out Newbies like Used Mittens
Cuz this 'cat' so 'Pussy', he giving birth to Kittens!!!!
Good Riddens! I burnt U son they smell the Aroma
Never 'Call me Out', Im of the Hook, So Hang Da Phone UP!!!!


* he says i hide my rec well he hides his profile, also he said on his last battle that next year he dropping an album, hah!
straight punches
__________________
the medicine man

haha
 

LOL...you really took the time to "Prewrite" that...My record was "Visible" until in battles in order to battle some decent spitters, they don need to see a record so it was Invisible, you come back "Online" see that, write more, but didnt realize after that battle was "Over" it was "Changed" back haha, shit homie you jus royally screwed your prewritin ass over, if thats all you got after takin 2 1/2 days, go take another freestyling course n rip another page haha dumbass, uppin for votes hollah back

PS: "Actions speak louder than words", m those actions with double postin shit show that your writin isnt jus the shit, its jus the whole way you handle things that make you a natural dumbass, thanks for clarifyin :)
Holla back Young'ns!

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"* he says i hide my rec well he hides his profile, also he said on his last battle that next year he dropping an album, hah!
straight punches"

My fav quote, it was a dis in a punch sayin if i was to drop n album, who would be the first to cop it LOL...too bad if you don ever do research properly on somethin, it comes back n bites you in the ass jus like your boyfriend :gfy: :thefinger :thumbup:

haha, lets keep the votes comin peeps hollah

Voted For: hotshh!

damn once again

Ya own Mother wouldnt 'Sign' U wit the Language of da Deaf!*
U couldnt drop a bootleg album in Spanish On Cassette!
how does he think of this>>>>>>>>>
Jono my 'son', I thought ya Moms had an Abortion!
U shouldnt start 'beef' when Ya Talent is Salad Tossing!
damn!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Good Riddens! I burnt U son they smell the Aroma
Never 'Call me Out', Im of the Hook, So Hang Da Phone UP!!!!
im almost pissin on myself>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
hot shh won!


jono: ur shit was aight but tha end was really a bad way to end it.
n think of betta punches.

Voted For: hotshh!

this was a kinda wack battle
Vote goes to hotshh for not being so wack and having better punches and k personals also ya structure was good
jono you neeed elevating, and ya structure isnt that good

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Voted For: hotshh!

ummmm... ok....

besides jono's first line... notice i didn't say bar... he really didn't bring anything to the table. I mean... in his last bar he rhymed made with made...that won't get you a win in this forum unless the other dude was actually worse.

hot had better structure and all his shyt rhymed except for the steve austin line... those two things alone was enough to win it. there were plenty of played concepts but overall hot's verse was better.

uppin fa votes
end this..........................

Voted For: hotshh!

imma start with JONO...yo flow was aight, but nobody understand wut u was saying...nice work tho...i hate yo structure, but you had nice punches...but not too many personals in there...*elevate*

hotshh: merked, sonn'ed, murdered, you pick, i think its all the above...gotta give this to u cause u came consistent from start to finish...this was the best i think i ever seen you come...hard punches and multies...nice structure...you even switch up yo style in each flow, thats talent...i cant say that i seen a flaw in this battle...but everyone could elevate

good flow people

drop votes on the below battles people..u too jono...all HONEST

Voted For: hotshh!

open: Hot, jono's was aiight but Hot's waz better
close: Hot, jono rhymed the same word twice
personals: Hot, jono had them but hots were better
metas: Hot, the cat line won him the meta vote
punches: Tie, both were good
multis: Hot, had some good ones

Hot: This battle was one-sided dawg, good job.
You had basically everything I look for in voting on battles.
Also props on ya structure man, I dig an organized verse...

Jono: You didnt really have any hard Personals, metas, or multies...I would have to say elevate in thos areas son.
Also, clean up ya structure a bit man, that was just look sloppy as I read it especially because you changed the formatting in it half way through, be carefull with that shit.
Win: Hotshh!

Props to both, payce...

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