The Black Plague vs Ruffridah187
 

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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:02 PM.

Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:03 PM.

This kid named himself ruffridah, cuz thats the way he rides dicks
His wackness is immense, like the variety of colors in a bowl of trix
Kid needed serious help, so he thought hed join a suport group..Called Welfair
Came to this site with big thoughts, but he's flopped worse than sebastian Telfair
Just look at his rec, his 3 wins were against peeps actually wacker than he is
I was suprised to find this out, his rhymes are pathetic, Stevie Wonder can see this
Look at his avvy, just another reminder that this little herb is an ass
He's gettin shocked, he thought he'd rip me, but i know he's learnin fast
This fool could pick up burning dog crap, and still not "Drop" hot shit
Already 8 battles, you'd think you'd pick up some skill, but u just dont got it

Damn, struc is off again... Its hard to see how ya lines will turn out with this new battle postin thing

The Black Plague? Fuck i'll relax and merk you with ease
You abused rap so bad that it gave you some 'Plague' or disease
Mother fucker, i'm like usher, rhymes are fire, they hit you and let you "Burn"
Have you twist and turn in your sleep and you still don't learn
Face it bitch, i could beat you with basic shit
Retrace it all the way back to a pop artist and the idenity'd fit
You faulty bitch i don't have to beat you with multies n' shit
Think your rhymes 'sweet' only if you steal suckers and jaw busters from Mr. Bulkies bitch
Shit aint no reason to act like i'll lose, aint no reason to pretend
Cuz i know i'll merk your punk ass, not with 20 lines, WITH 10!


Quick verse....nothing amazing....just threw it together cuz i am busy...if i lose then woopty doo....another loss....lol

yea i know....i hate it
we'll get used to it....hopefully

ok....Uppin

Voted For: The Black Plague

vote= black plague

reason: i was feelin both of yall flow but bp had more content and stronger punches than ruffrida. that stevie wonder line is kinda played but besides that your verse was fairly hot. ruff ridah yo verse was above average but you need to elevate on your vocab and punches, good battle.

Aight uppin again...

Uppin...

Voted For: The Black Plague

this was a very decent battle but i think black plaque took this

my vote black plaque

ruffrydah187
you had a very decent verse... it had some nice punchlines... not many personals... The strucutre was off atimes but it was alittle better then black ... next:Meta: you didnt have any meta... multies ... i saw alittle bit but they were both wack and off....overall your verse was iight but not enought to defeat black plaque

Black Plaque
your verse was a pretty simple and good it had its ups and down... but this was apretty much on sided ... you had some nice punchlines.. your opener was alittle weak but you picked up hard and won this battle in my opoinion... overall vote :Black plaque

Voted For: The Black Plague

Plague= yo verse was ok......you had some aight punchelines in it.....really no use of multis.....i think you coulda used betta wordplay....personals were aight........like i said at first ya verse was ok

Ridah= ya verse wasnt that good........it seemed too simple to me....you didnt have no complexity.....punchelines really didnt hit hard enough.........that personal in ya second like it really wasnt no use for it cuz it did nothing.....so keep elevatin.......

IIght thanks for the votes ya'll...

Uppin again

Voted For: The Black Plague


The Black Plague? Fuck i'll relax and merk you with ease
You abused rap so bad that it gave you some 'Plague' or disease
7/10
Mother fucker, i'm like usher, rhymes are fire, they hit you and let you "Burn"
Have you twist and turn in your sleep and you still don't learn
6./10
Face it bitch, i could beat you with basic shit
Retrace it all the way back to a pop artist and the idenity'd fit
6/10
You faulty bitch i don't have to beat you with multies n' shit
Think your rhymes 'sweet' only if you steal suckers and jaw busters from Mr. Bulkies bitch
6/10
Shit aint no reason to act like i'll lose, aint no reason to pretend
Cuz i know i'll merk your punk ass, not with 20 lines, WITH 10!
6/10


This kid named himself ruffridah, cuz thats the way he rides dicks
His wackness is immense, like the variety of colors in a bowl of trix
7/10
Kid needed serious help, so he thought hed join a suport group..Called Welfair
Came to this site with big thoughts, but he's flopped worse than sebastian Telfair
7/10
Just look at his rec, his 3 wins were against peeps actually wacker than he is
I was suprised to find this out, his rhymes are pathetic, Stevie Wonder can see this
8/10
Look at his avvy, just another reminder that this little herb is an ass
He's gettin shocked, he thought he'd rip me, but i know he's learnin fast
6/10
This fool could pick up burning dog crap, and still not "Drop" hot shit
Already 8 battles, you'd think you'd pick up some skill, but u just dont got it
6/10

came down 2 harder punches and overall better wordplay

Ruff overall 50/100
Black overall 70/100

Voted For: The Black Plague


Ok this was a wack battle

Ruffrider...it seems like you choose to drop multies at the expense of a good punch cause you had alot of good multies but know punches, and you spent a lot of your verse bragging instead of dissing your oppenent always a no no, your flow was ok but your structure was bad, the few punches you had were weak and based on played concepts, gotta elevate dawg...stay up!!!!


Black plague.....your verse was weak also...your opening setup was kinda played if u gon do a gay joke it has to be something inventive cuz its heavily overused, but your opening punch was funny not very strong but comical but unfortunately from there it went downhill, flow was ok like his but lines were kinda stretched and structure wasn't that good but better than his...gotta drop hard consistently dawg

Overall both were weak but black got it with a decent opening punch and slightly better flow and structure, Ruff got it in multies but black got the best 3 out 4 so he wins

Vote: Black