$ Wordman $ vs schema
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 03:59 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:13 PM.

$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:14 PM.

cross-purposes Have Brought My words to Contend
With Schema, Imma Target yah Credit, Until yah Comprehend
Challenging me Will Ultimately Bring ya RAp career to a Biter end!
Its Obvious yah Just A Netcee,Trying to Act and Pretend
Iam Wiring yah Elvation Progrees TO a Down Spiral-ant lying
Like Da speed Movie,there ant No Survining-yah-Rhyems-r-Dieing
Brining yah Best, is the Only way yah gonna Budge BAM(B.A.M)
were all over yah with are Influencial Thoughts Like Uncle Sam
Popping yah Head-in-the-thread, Acting Like we FAm!
Like a Baby ya been Fead! Iam Leaving Yah Jaw Dropped Like Bergs- Head

yo i hope you Drop soon, Dont Forget about the DeadlIne.

you cant rap at all...you should change your name to herbman
you cant write poety in battle...thats just not how it works fam...
i saw your posts in my other battles "dude...drop your verse man"
i had 2 other faggots to ko...but nows your turn to get merked stan..
why you tryin to battle me?...if I's you id be a fan of me
ive got more talent than your whole crew plus they entire families...
you act like you holdin on by a string and if i dont drop youll lose ya sanity
its too bad i dont take too kindly to garbage herbs that make demands of me...
what you dropped wasnt a battle...youre entire style is backwards
so im gonna have to crush your ass up like a trash compactor...
you ass...that flowery shit dont come out the mouth of rappers
your verse remind me of a "i got this out my sisters diary" type battle...
your crew hypin you up like you hot but you and I know you so-so
you think you edgar allan poe? you suck...get a better soundin flow bro...
why the fuck you beef with me? im surprised i thought yous bound to no-show
damn...i aint miss the deadline but this battle might as well be closed though...

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Voted For: $ Wordman $

you took it better word play , that last line stole it , dontget me wrong schema i liked it but it wasnt as raw as wordman's but nice structure schema use better words in your rhymes


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Voted For: schema

ok word no punches or good disses just a long verse of big words saying nothing please elevate2/10
schema good opener ''entire families'lol good punches and nice wordplay and you also got good vocab good all around verse 7/10 but you need to elevate too this is madd unevenly matched leave the bums alone this aint fair

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Voted For: schema

Schema took this easy. He came with harder punches, and both had good structure, but schema had good multis and some nice wordplay. Wordman, just elevate bro, 'nuff said there, no hate though...
Vote - schema

Return the favor, honest votes only: Dizzle vs. CODEE
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Voted For: schema

schema
you cant rap at all...you should change your name to herbman
you cant write poety in battle...thats just not how it works fam...
,,<<exactly>..

wordman did not get personel enough n he wasnt making sence.
wordman;;
cross-purposes Have Brought My words to Contend
With Schema, Imma Target yah Credit, Until yah Comprehend
<<,wat do u mean u gonna target his credit?>>>
pick it up dog

personels;schema
flow; schema
metas; tie
punches; schema

schema was right this isnt a poetry ricitle! get ignorrent.

vote on these please i need it
demon pyrokronix vs typical and dustyblunted vs typical

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Tight battle Schema wish I could vote.

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Voted For: schema

Schema u got this one the flow was good and good punchlines
uppin 4 votes
CODEE vs. The Kid P-Dizzle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142734

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Voted For: schema

$ Wordman $- yo verse was aight...the flow & structure was ok and you had some pretty good punches there..

schema- yo verse was aight too..the punches were hard and they landed..the structure was good and kept the flow in place..

overall- schema gets my vote cause he had harder punches than $ Wordman $ and the flow was aight...