THE KID P-DIZZLE vs jacktheripper24
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Hatin'
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 10:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

jacktheripper24 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:25 PM.

The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:27 PM.

I'll start by killin' you, soon your whole crew will see defeat
Beat me with a baseball bat? All you do is beat your meat
So bring your heat, to me, then we'll see who's harder, son
I might not know jack, but you're the retarded one
Target one, your man OG, but he pussied out
I can't imagine someone that cocky to ever be in doubt
But now you be without, your backup
So watch what you speakin' bout 'fore my fist meets your mouth
You're leakin' out, ya brain, 'cuz you can't maintain
A state of mind like mine, verbal blows you can't sustain
But physically, I'll rip Jack another asshole
You say you thug but you's prolly a Donnie Brasco (an undercover)
You shouldn't even be allowed in here like Castro
In the U.S, you just give men coke treatments - fast blow
But really though, I'll put you in the hospital
Like The Warriors, stick that bat up your ass, make you a popsicle

Beat Y'all N!##@z With Baseball Bats - Worst fuckin' crew ever

(The Warriors is a movie from 1979, go see it)

I'm streamin verbs out of my brain stem, like sleepin on a dictionary your "dreamin words" that don't make sense and im causin nervous mayhem//
i roll with a select few, nobody respects you, I object to your crew, with complex intellect im about to dismantle you, ya should have withdrew, and im deflectin you, your comin incorrect dude//
I'm about to rip the track,Dragon your a disgrace to rap, watch as i embrace the gat, throw slugs into your back, cuz im about to make you face the facts//
Like guru i'm leavin you right where you stand, I carry prolific might with my pen and hand, your as "tight" as a gay man, be careful what you bite, you should be banned, my lyrical fight you won't be able to withstand//
My weapon is my pad and my pen, cuz dopple's at it again, I got you prayin to win, and the only words you'll be sayin is amen, cuz im about to win by ten//

This was feedback posted for The Kid P-Dizzle
 

Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it

Voted For: jacktheripper24

I vote for ripper his shit was juss str8 up better...
and no i aint tryna get ur ass back for that comment u posted in my last battle cuz unlike u i battle with words... i hate typin but helps in the vocab when ya read some of the shit people reply with so why not... but anyways...

"Kid" ya flow was tight but vocab sorry

"Ripper" bra u won this one big

Casino, don't take that line too serious, I just meant you should try your first battle against a vet 17-1, know what I mean? Ayo, uppin' for more votes...

Still uppin' for more votes, don't be shy people.

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

both of you need elevating pdizzle you iight but elevate more
both ya punches were not that good but p dizzles came a little harder his personals were more harder too
work on ya structure too

vote/P dizzle

Thanks bro, uppin' for more votes people, come on.

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

ok dizzle yet again gots another tally , jack the "skipper" 's rhyme was dumb did you get that one off of a website or did your mom write that? stick to dick suckin that should keep you out of trouble. dizzles word structure destroyed "skipper" both had good word play but skippers was all over the place and far from the lyrical order that dizzle had


:shoot: :shoot:

turban

Aight, thanks bro...Stil uppin' for more votes guys...

Voted For: jacktheripper24

jack the ripper's flow was incredible the vocab was incredible but the punches weren't all there and he could have dissed dizzle more. dizzle had the punches but his rhymes were kind of wack and played out. props no hate.

Dude, quit with your fuckin' crew votes. This shit's goin' to the mods, you punk bitch.

Voted For: jacktheripper24

Close one ya'll. But i gotta give it to jack. His flow was a little more enjoyable. But dog, ya lines wern't workin... quit the long ass line shit,... too long. And kid, i like ya punches, but ya flow wasn't the best. When you make a rhym make sure its somthin that other people can easilly find the flow to.

This was feedback posted for The Kid P-Dizzle
 

ha..and you say i'm not good kid, that was trash, bring something like that to our battle, and you'll truly get ripped..

Yo, uppin' for some more votes people, come on now.

Voted For: jacktheripper24

My vote goesto Jack....His stucture was weaker but the personals hit alot harder and his vocab was better also...
Kid your verse was tight but Jack pulled this off in my opinion

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Vote:Kid P Dizzle
Pretty even but i voted fo' The kid coz his structure was better than jacktheripper
No hate
Return tha favor
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Both of you delivered a good verse......

ripper.. your structure was kinda hard to read......flow wasn't great either...........multies were there but didn't build up into nay personals......although you had sum decent punches......

The Kid P-Dizzle...your flow and structure were good and you delvered sum real nice punches....and a u had a cuple good personals......I really liked this drop sum funny shyt.........
i liked these 4 lines:

But physically, I'll rip Jack another asshole
You say you thug but you's prolly a Donnie Brasco (an undercover)
You shouldn't even be allowed in here like Castro
In the U.S, you just give men coke treatments - fast blow
funny shyt man.....nice

Vote:The Kid P-Dizzle

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Yo I liked both verses I thought ripper was gon win it till I read K-P's finisher stronger finish but u shud work on the beginning and middle cuz ifg ripper had a gd finisher he wud have won. ripper dnt put '//' at the end of ur lines it's newbish retun da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142371