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-   -   -..Jono..- vs ~!Evil D!~ (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141708)

-..Jono..- 08-11-04 10:33 PM

-..Jono..- vs ~!Evil D!~
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines minimum
15 Lines Max
"5" to check in
"25" to spit

Lets go...


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 11:03 PM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

System 08-11-04 10:34 PM

~!Evil D!~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:34 PM.

System 08-11-04 10:34 PM

-..Jono..- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:34 PM.

~!Evil D!~ 08-11-04 10:38 PM

For all you niggas saying that my shit is sick
Just imagine the 90% of my brain that I ain't even used yet
Take a deep breath quick
suck in as much air as my lungs can permit
then I start to kick that shit
I was summonned to punish
motha fucka Jono with mouths that runnith run over rubish
when I come through niggas stand still as a statue
and if I have to I'll battle ya whole rap crew
Nigga dis rap battle is mine
Afta dis battle imma get ur fagget azz locked up like Shyne

~!Evil D!~ 08-11-04 10:41 PM

iight no hate man dis is just a battle dawg iight pplz im uppin 4 honest votes....

~!Evil D!~ 08-11-04 10:42 PM

o shyt ma bad i will afta i get 20 posts iight 1.....sry but iw ill giv u dat shyt baq

-..Jono..- 08-11-04 10:56 PM

Whats the Comparision between Big Pun, n "Mike Meyers" Mini me?
"Nothing" haha, thats the same mentality i come with comin at Evil D

you more a rook Emcee, jus like life n bitches wit you its like Harlem ima "Shake It"
its impossible to like your style, like your moms orgasm id have to "Fake It" LOL


....into a style of a poser, thats the way "We" all start out wit all our Frontin
"Thinkin" where somethin, yet "I" do "Amount to Somethin" like a salted slug you disolve to "Nothin"

Wit me hittin Bar 9, your hittin the "Self Characteristics" of "Bar-Void"
you aint a real man, your mom screamed at your birth she didnt want a girl but a "Boy!"...


...you outta your league, its a game of Chess n this rooks targeted "Check Mate"
Jono's givin the whoopin, while im beatin this bitch as the snail in this race

you want a one worded reply, ight check this i think your a "Fake"
only time you drop heavy "Bars", is when your pickin up my "Weights" haha

~!Evil D!~ 08-11-04 10:58 PM

iight pplz start votin 4 our battle lmao@jono...............

-..Jono..- 08-11-04 11:19 PM

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ight,

uppin for votes, lets get some votes with honest feedback, hollah

Adam 08-11-04 11:30 PM

Voted For: -..Jono..-

jono - nice punches and personals man, you pretty good at that...structure and flow pretty good too...good battle man, nice spit

evil d - man not bad, structure aiight, flow weird at times, but man no real big punches all self glorifying...no hate man but this vote goes to jono

structure and flow - jono
punches and personals - jono
wordplay and multis - jono

v/jono

hit this up with an honest vote please...its a 2 liner, i took the time for your battle
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Klassic 08-12-04 12:21 AM

Voted For: ~!Evil D!~

nice ima vote for evil D cuz i liked his one btter for word choice and shit. PEACE

DV8 08-12-04 12:32 AM

Voted For: -..Jono..-

1 sided battle the whole way jono's punches were hittin much harder n were original 4 the most part,your lines could be shortened a bit they seemed stretched,nice verse overall though....evil...???fix ya structure n punches your verse was'nt good...ya had nothin ...jus elevate....
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50Cal. 08-12-04 01:30 AM

Voted For: -..Jono..-

ok evil you stole a cannibus bar nuff said you whacked you know what you stole and you made it whacked none of your punches hit your vocab is ok but your punches are super weak.jo ok punches good flow but fix your struture it took a minute for me to catch your flow but i got it your punches and disses hit way harder and pulled you through here and evil sick and yet dont rhyme holla at me and ill help you elevate and get better

~!Evil D!~ 08-12-04 02:34 PM

how da fuk is dta cnaibus if ma nigga j wrote dat ......

~!Evil D!~ 08-12-04 02:36 PM

well if it iz ma bad is wear i aint no dat............

D-Blue 08-12-04 04:11 PM

Voted For: ~!Evil D!~

i giv dis shty 2 evil d he had betetr punchez......better flow...n better structure.....jono had gud disses but evil d's wuz better Weak battle but i voted 4 evil d

-..Jono..- 08-15-04 01:04 AM

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uppin for votes, lets get some feedback and votes, Holla back...

-..Jono..- 08-17-04 05:06 PM

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ight, uppin for votes, lets get this closed n add a win one way, loss for the other, hollah back young'ns

-..Jono..- 08-18-04 01:00 AM

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ight...uppin, lets get this shit closed, peace....

animal crackaz 08-18-04 01:53 PM

This was feedback posted for ~!Evil D!~
 
Jono, that was whack. It didn't flow at all. Evil D, you totally kicked his ass. Way to go.

-..Jono..- 08-18-04 11:52 PM

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uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

-..Jono..- 08-19-04 02:35 PM

uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

-..Jono..- 08-19-04 05:36 PM

uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

-..Jono..- 08-21-04 03:33 PM

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

-..Jono..- 08-21-04 07:32 PM

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

-..Jono..- 08-21-04 11:41 PM

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ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

-..Jono..- 08-24-04 04:03 PM

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

-..Jono..- 08-24-04 07:42 PM

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

-..Jono..- 08-24-04 11:31 PM

ight, uppin for votes, lets get some battles closed, holla back...

50Cal. 08-24-04 11:33 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~!Evil D!~
how da fuk is dta cnaibus if ma nigga j wrote dat ......

^^so you admit someone else wrote it jono tell strobe he will dq this battle :thumbup:

-..Jono..- 08-25-04 03:34 PM

uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

-..Jono..- 08-25-04 06:41 PM

uppin for votes, lets get this closed..ight uppin...

System Crasher 08-25-04 09:39 PM

Voted For: ~!Evil D!~

My vote goes to evil.... His flow was beter and he had better lyrics....
Jono ... you wrent bad but Evil had this.... And i didnt really like your structure....

V/ Evil D

Return tha fava... \/ \/ \/ \/ down there!! Thanx!

TAKENOTICE 08-25-04 10:04 PM

Voted For: -..Jono..-

you more a rook Emcee, jus like life n bitches wit you its like Harlem ima "Shake It"
its impossible to like your style, like your moms orgasm id have to "Fake It" LOL
yea you right lol your verse came hittin you didn't talk to much about your self like evil D did,
Evil d your style and verse seemed Generic but keep uppin yah game aight attack your opponent more think of was tah not include yourself in your rime but just punches to yah opponent cause the punches you did have seemed unfocused
Jono you came tah play ball and you was hittin yah punches not to many personals in this battle for both i think that personal make a lot of a battle so ya'll need tah get up on that...
Both STAY UP STAY ACTIVE VOTE OFTEN

Honest and EXPLAINED votes need on my battle
WiNC Vs. Lady Fiya

TAKENOTICE 08-25-04 10:14 PM

ome all the votes that are explained and worth readin are for JONO nuff said the lack of explained votes in the battle is bullshit and EVIL D didn't even write his verse wtf???

-..Jono..- 08-25-04 11:21 PM

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ight uppin, lets get this closed...ight, take it easy peace

DrasticMeasureZ 08-25-04 11:39 PM

Voted For: -..Jono..-

JONO REAL E-Z DONT HAVE TO EXPLAINED U KNOW WHAT U DID WRONG EVIL D

JONO

-PUNCHES

-WORDPLAY

-PERSONAL

EVIL D

-FLOW

PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARD

-WORDPLAY

WELL IT GOES DOWN TO PUNCHES

JONO GETS MY VOTE


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