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$LXDiesel vs ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
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30 lines max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topic: familys First spit due in 60 Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 08-12-04 at 04:24 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 03:56 AM.
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$LXDiesel has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 03:58 AM.
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i got two fuckin families both first and both important
ma family is in da streets ma family is on the block when they get merked nigga ima bust back first the homeboyz who believed in me is also ma family they gave me a chance, then after stayed wit me they gave me no beefin when i got ma prosperity and thats real rear of the niggas who roll wit me they stayed wit me to the end and thats why their ma family they aint related but they took bullets for me that means they are never forgotten wherever i am and thats why they're wit me, and in F.A.M. (Ma group on the streets) another ma family gave up all they had back home and travelled here so i can have a better home so wut if they live in the shit and not rich at all they still try to make my life good for me to let me live here they payed a big fee i wouldnt care if they lived in diry and scrubbed toilets for livin i know when they need me im there just when they needin ma first topical in A WHILE |
Family First Mah fam's always first, n friends always come second... If you mess wit mah fam, fa' sho u know i'll protect em... Hurt'n em u won't mention, n bein wit u i won't let em... So of all ya better stay away or ya will learn ur lesson... I'll do nething for ya, but like always first is mah familly... Cuz we close, that means i'd never want em to be mad at me.... Cuz of mah dad wen he left, our lives is one big tragedy... Cuz i watch thier back, they gonna watch mah back fa me... Lived like dis for years, while savin each other one has been killed... N all five of us still standin, riskin our lives we be doin it wit our free will... But of course doin dis shyt, we afraid of death but remember.... Trust is a must fa members or else we will never be together... We need each other cuz we too got our very own enemies.... You'd be surprised in how man threat letters they be sendin me.. I remember once a letter sed don't sleep or you'll face death... So ya better stay awake, or there will be no family left... Didn't take it seriously while mah dad looked around curiously... Da same night they shot mah dad dead while we were asleep... So leave us alone, its easy to understand n more clear then a crystal... Unless you wanna be the next to have a bullet in you from mah pistol... |
Family First Mah fam's always first, n friends always come second... If you mess wit mah fam, fa' sho u know i'll protect em... Hurt'n em u won't mention, n bein wit u i won't let em... So of all ya better stay away or ya will learn ur lesson... I'll do nething for ya, but like always first is mah familly... Cuz we close, that means i'd never want em to be mad at me.... Cuz of mah dad wen he left, our lives is one big tragedy... Cuz i watch thier back, they gonna watch mah back fa me... Lived like dis for years, while savin each other one has been killed... N all five of us still standin, riskin our lives we be doin it wit our free will... But of course doin dis shyt, we afraid of death but remember.... Trust is a must fa members or else we will never be together... We need each other cuz we too got our very own enemies.... You'd be surprised in how man threat letters they be sendin me.. I remember once a letter sed don't sleep or you'll face death... So ya better stay awake, or there will be no family left... Didn't take it seriously while mah dad looked around curiously... Da same night they shot mah dad dead while we were asleep... So leave us alone, its easy to understand n more clear then a crystal... Unless you wanna be the next to have a bullet in you from mah pistol... good luck |
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
voting on ingenuisminds cause i like sthe flow of rge story and i enjoyed reading it alot more then SLX's verse vote an honost one in return |
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
you good both of you props to both everyone was good vote to ingenius for staying at the topic more and having better wordplay but props to both of you liked all og it and ingenius won this topical battle by a hair |
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
Ingenious mind......your flow was tight throughout verse, structure was good, imagery was nice, it was well written story, I liked the emotion of it as well, good overall drop I give ya.....8/10 LXD......also good story, good flow, structure coulda been a little better but your imagery wasn't as good as ingenious's, and the emotion of yours wasn't as strong but good drop just not enuff for win...giva ya....7/10 |
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
ok: ingenious mind:you had nice flow and good imagery with your words, ya verse rhymed very well, and you took the topic with the intensity and feeling in ya words... slx:you had a nice verse too, but i think hers was a lot more emotional and lyrically pleasent to read, no hate, because you told a nice story, i just like the way hers flowed and the descriptiveness |
Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to Ingenius his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good His flow was heavenly and his wordplay just killed him Very good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
Was pretty close, but I didn't like the fact that XD had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to IM... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho.. v/i m |
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