Wite Warrior vs Paramik
 

Battle Rules:

punchline battle-4 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 04:05 PM

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Wite Warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 03:27 PM.

wid a name like paramik-mus b ridin dik-Prolly sum guy named Mick-Challengin me u must b sick

Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 03:57 PM.

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I’ll “huff and puff” on this guy until he’s left with a broken home.
And I’ll barricade his weak bars, like a blockage from kidney stones.

My “Stone Cold” punches penetrating you, is what awaits your fate.
And W. W. couldn’t be "E"levated if he was wrestling in the heavyweight.

W.W. E.

ok please vote

Voted For: Paramik

oo well dis shit was cose ey wite i like yo punchline, it was tite, bu Paramik took it his punchlines were tite and they came ahrd as fuck like da kidney thing dat was funny, uh yea so

v/Paramik NO HATE

yo vote on my battle down there iite thx 1 love!!

vote 4 me plz


Will return tha favor uppin 4 my first win

upping 1 please vote i will return the favor

Voted For: Wite Warrior

ur fucking gay ass hobos, i aint voting, learn how to fucking rap u shit bags

someone delete his vote

Voted For: Paramik

Both where "Weak" completly..

You jus got the vote cus yours made at least some sense, but i think you both need to elevate for a time limit like that...

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I could say the same,

the next time you wanna drop a comment in my battle, dont go votin for a cat who took 2 1/2 days to write a spit, if you follow how the battle went out..he "Decline" normal rules, than changed the time limit, had it accepted n even openly admitted to goin to take the time to do it, but that jus shows how much voters "Really" read through, "Elevatre" homie, cus if thats all you could do in "60" minutes, you need to elevate unless you did it on your own time, putting yourself in the same position as this battle of mine..:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=141579&page=2

Thus makint he vote "Legit", jus "Completly Off"
peace

Voted For: Paramik

too easy... paramik gets my vote for obvious reasons but i'll waste everyone's time and post it anyway:

wid a name like paramik-mus b ridin dik-Prolly sum guy named Mick-Challengin me u must b sick.....

and there it is!

Prolly some guy named Mick?....whoa! Too hot for audio... it can only be text! lmao

good shyt, P

Voted For: Paramik

wite warrior:

his lines were basically nursery rhymes.............
I was thinking those were multis but I realized
it was actually 4 lines but it was hella weak.....

Paramik: well the start of his bars it was self-glory
lines but he brought it back and made good lines...
flow was nice aswell...............word:p.............

overall: Paramik...

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upping 2 please vote

Voted For: Paramik

Do I even gotta say why Paramik wins this? Wite your punchline was horrible. Bad structure, NO PUNCH, (and thats the point of punchline battles), no personal. How can you have a bad structure with four lines? Fuckin herb. No hate though, its just that youre so horrible. Paramik gets it easy with more creativity and stayin on a WWE theme in both bars. Harder punch too. Paramik gets tha vote.

Vote-Paramik