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Guranteed 08-12-04 05:18 PM

Certified Gangsta's Remix
 
HOOK(jim jones)
since i made a gang of bucks,no i aint been hangin much
still slide trhough,fly coupes and the change is plush
keep the banga tucked,in case i gotta bang a bitch
cause we certified gangsta's

VERSE 1(The Game

HOOK(jim jones)

VERSE 2(Jim Jones)

HOOK(jim jones)

VERSE 3(CAM'RON)


HOOK(jim jones)

VERSE 4(Guranteed)

Now im big timin, rims shynin
ho's smilin,its all gravy
that 45. save me
put the glock on pause
come through in red
nigga,santa clause
bitches talk,hush dat
weed bitch,fuck crack
paper stackin,skull crackin
bitch smackin,playa truck
u sellin,we dont give a fuck
knock niggas silly
ho's meet big willy
wet up that all white
pull out a nine
do it all night
faggot never do it right
im guranteed to let loose
oozis mac's to,
u,im strapped to
all ova ma cock suckin
that bitch happy
dat ass screamin G-smack me
get the fuck out,dont play wit wankstas
's
and watch ya back Black,we certified gangsta's

Guranteed 08-12-04 07:13 PM

c'mon yall,uppin

KOOL COL-B 08-12-04 09:08 PM

tigers, lions, bears oh my. hahahaha, yeah that song iz fuckin dope. yo verse 2 it wasnt bad, tha structure wuz kinda fucked up tho, but it wuz pritty good. werd

Guranteed 08-12-04 11:01 PM

thanx uppin

yOuNG tIPS 08-12-04 11:24 PM

thats that shit any thing droppin from the roc tree is off the hook my nigga and that dip set bird gang/taliban is that shit.......1 fam

Femcee4Lyf 08-13-04 12:50 AM

that shit was iite the structre was messed up buts its all good , peace 1luv

Guranteed 08-13-04 02:27 AM

thanx uppin

Guranteed 08-13-04 10:54 AM

uppin

Guranteed 08-13-04 11:27 AM

Thanx Uppin

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-13-04 11:44 AM

ya i liked it for the most part man but you need longer lines practice that:
flow9/10
worplay4/10 used easy words to much work on that more
punches 6/10
overal7/10 good

Guranteed 08-13-04 02:17 PM

thanx upppin

God 08-13-04 02:41 PM

damn this was a pretty good drop
the structure was alittle of but the wordplay ..and the punchlines were decent ...
overall it was a pretty good drop so nice job ...

Guranteed 08-13-04 04:06 PM

Thanx Uppin

Guranteed 08-13-04 07:18 PM

up up uppin

M-Eazy 08-13-04 07:30 PM

this was ight...u did yo thang, you had nice flows...i kinda go with they verse too, thats nice...good shit, keep it up, but yo structure, i wasnt feelin it tho...but keep elevating

Replay 08-13-04 07:57 PM

since i actually heard the song:
i think your style fits in with the others
the flow was good but i think it should be more complex.
actually lyrics was good and it was all about the same thing.
i'm not sure if it would be good to the beat though.

over all 7/10 keep it hot

Guranteed 08-13-04 08:52 PM

thanx uppin

EmerginMc07 08-13-04 09:21 PM

yo i liked da shit, it was str8, shit was fire!!!!!!!1, man u keep doin yall thang cus dat shit was hot keep spitten.

fluidmoon 08-13-04 09:27 PM

nice job on this, structure was off a tad bit, but the flow was good and strong lyrics, to the point, keep doing ya thing................................1

Know-Gimix 08-14-04 12:55 AM

not my style- not really feelin it... but keep doin ya thing .1

Guranteed 08-14-04 02:27 AM

um,thanx uppin

Guranteed 08-15-04 02:00 AM

up up uppin

afropimp 08-15-04 02:12 AM

u got a prob wit str8 man this capitol punishment runnin it come bak hoe

Guranteed 08-15-04 02:17 AM

me and srta8 koo,im jus fuckin wit em, still uppin

Guranteed 08-15-04 07:33 PM

c'mon uppin

Guranteed 08-19-04 02:34 AM

up up uppin


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