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ice pick vs intensify effect
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 08:55 PM.
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 08:56 PM.
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Man....Look at your AVY...you look like a fat bitch on hot pursuit
Throwing so many "blows" at you Its like I'm chuck'n "prositutes" You aint right......Youd prob, say i I bite.....Yo bitch ass gots me wrong Got guns? Only time Effect "bust-barrels"...Is when hes playin "Donkey Kong" He can't touch vets so hes battling newbies...haha...I dont need to say no more Givin "wedding-rings" to "generals"....the only time I E ever "engaged-in-war" Your on everybodys dick ...Shit you mite as well ask them to pull their pants down Put ya hands up if I'm the illest rapper, cause I E the whackest..HANDS DOWN! Your below pets on the foodchain no wonder your a underdog, fuckin bastard Bitch I had you "seeing stars", like when you first typed in your "password" |
watch how i move this trick and send clip like a movie flick,
grip'in ya head slaming it on frozen water N use it like a ice-pick ya skills lack, so theres no need to try my verse be dead-serious u just need to die i'll leave u gagg'in N dragg'in but im no-fag cuz u thinking we play'in footsy when im leaving u a toe-tag looks like u on a streak but this battle aint ya best hopes cuz even if text battles ya bread N butter i'll turn ya to french-tost u'r all talk N its cheap, i'll cough with heat cuz u'r a lame cat u'r so ugly... i need another ugly stick to beat ya fream-back bang bang early.... |
Voted For: Ice Pick
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT, lol damn ice pick you killed this guy, you had better everything in your verse, what can I say, and I E, stick to battling noobs, cuz ice pick is way above your level man, only thing you had on ice pick in this battle was the structure, and unfortunatly that's not enough to get you a win, best line of the battle: Pick Put ya hands up if I'm the illest rapper, cause I E the whackest..HANDS DOWN! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
i e: watch how i move this trick and send clip like a movie flick, grip'in ya head slaming it on frozen water N use it like a ice-pick<<<<<<<good ok flow>>>>>>>> i p: Man....Look at your AVY...you look like a fat bitch on hot pursuit Throwing so many "blows" at you Its like I'm chuck'n "prositutes"<<<lo hahahakkkikikkk>>>>>>> verdict: really good battle u guys both wanted to win. both had good punches good flow. u both deserve some credit. vote: ice pick got tha vote cuz of that funny ass opener n betta closer. good shit guyz. please vote honest this is a close battle.>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>typical vs demon pyrokronix lets go! |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Both were ok this was a close battle ICe: your verse was ok ya structure was out but you had some good punches and ok personals I. E.: ya verse was iight you hasd some ok personals and good punches but some were basic and played vote ICe Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: intensify effect
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SHIT SHIT SHIT!!!!!!!!! I didn't mean to vote for anyone, I meant to click feedback and must have click vote instead. Damn, hang on Ill just tell the mods...
No hate as it was completely unintented and I'm going right now to sort it. Removed |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Good Battle I-E- Decent Wordplay, Ok Punches, Ok Structure, Flow Was Good, Ice Pick- Punches Were Ok, Flow Was Ok, Structure as Good, And Metas And Wordplay Were Ok Punches- Tie Flow- Intensify Effect Wordplay-Tie Metaphors- Ice Pick Structure- Intensify Effect Originality- Ice Pick Final Vote- Ice Pick [b]Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142469 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Ayo what up kid. The sickness of a champ defides in me and kats like you. The flow is obvious, the metas is there, and the punches is right. What else to say besides return the fav. man. The link in the sig. me =vs= Lyrical Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
Icy u win. u had better punches, personals, and your verse made more sense. the structure and flow go to intensify. icy u also got word play. "Your on everybodys dick ...Shit you mite as well ask them to pull their pants down
Put ya hands up if I'm the illest rapper, cause I E the whackest..HANDS DOWN!" lol i like that. peace |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Man this battle was pretty good but i think im going to have to go with ice pick he flowed betta and he had whay in the hell better punch lines but i can take any of you lil bitches but im voting for ice pick |
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Voted For: intensify effect
i vote for this because it was simple and too the point unlike my last 2 posts which i admit defeat, other guy used the word down twice to rhyme and i dont like repetition, and i didn't like the other guys layout. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
close battle kinda punches-ice multiz-ice wordplay-ice flow-intensify mets.simz-intensify vote-icepick now go vote on my battle vrs xxtayve n the other 1s in my sig....thanks 1 |
close battle my ass
he got roasted had the battle reopened cause he thought he could get another vote and he did YOU MUST BE PROUD |
Voted For: Ice Pick
lol ice pick took it to you haha thats funny intensify bonner you suck but you might be able to get a win from me but still you suck for your age |
Voted For: Ice Pick
aight this was an easy decision for me i gotta say ice pick came with some pretty tight shit n good punches although the .......is a lil much at times its minor compaired ta your wordplay n well structured punctes...i dint quite get the finisher but even without it you had a much stronger verse...ie...i was'nt feeling much in your verse srry man... id say your opener was your best line..keep elevating.. |
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