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BiG-WhIt3y 08-13-04 12:30 AM

BiG-WhIt3y vs lethal lunatic
 
10 lines only
due in 20 minuts
blind spit
100 post to vote dat is a

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System 08-13-04 12:32 AM

Lethal Lunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 12:32 AM.

System 08-13-04 12:32 AM

BiG-WhIt3y has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 12:32 AM.

Paris Hilton666 08-13-04 12:35 AM

He dances wit sparks out of his ass tryin to do the Michael Jackson
To big to fat he breaks his back, nuts are cracked in action
Black turned white just like his idol the only one who molests kids
An oblivious hit straight to this bitch, spit more than some lethal fluid
Yes I am a Gene.ius that only uses a third of his skills to beat-you
Authentik mind Intelligence wit just a word I can defeat-you
Yo dawg I’m to ill notice that Im diseased and infected man
No I aint a newb and the last word you’ll eva say kid is damn
So now its 0-1 later 0-2 messed wit the wrong nigga dude
So now bitch look at this verse that I just spit and just look at you

BiG-WhIt3y 08-13-04 12:42 AM

You think you a lethal lunatic,
if you had the measles your rhymes still wouldnt be sick...
a gun shot from you wouldnt even be lethal,
but me? haha ill leave your fuckin body see threw...
filled with holes from head to toe,
all you have to do is say the wrong thing and ill pull the trigger and let it go...
you can tell you suck and dont practice much,
but me, if i got a massage i still couldnt be touched...
You want me to be honest, YOU SUCK
and your not a lethal lunatic...
your style is fucked

EmerginMc07 08-13-04 12:50 AM

Voted For: BiG-WhIt3y

yo dis battle was close man i like both of ur oieces both were hot and shit,
but it broek down to punches and vocab and wordplay n Big had it man shit was tite but look lethal yo sht was tite son i liked yo shit ut u dint take it this time,

v/Big-Whity

yo hit up this battle really quick
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...491625&posted=1

~Luciano~ 08-13-04 12:54 AM

Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

[B]

You think you a lethal lunatic,
if you had the measles your rhymes still wouldnt be sick...
6/10
a gun shot from you wouldnt even be lethal,
but me? haha ill leave your fuckin body see threw...
6/10
filled with holes from head to toe,
all you have to do is say the wrong thing and ill pull the trigger and let it go...
5/10
you can tell you suck and dont practice much,
but me, if i got a massage i still couldnt be touched...
6/10
You want me to be honest, YOU SUCK
and your not a lethal lunatic...
your style is fucked
5/10
Overall = 40/100


He dances wit sparks out of his ass tryin to do the Michael Jackson
To big to fat he breaks his back, nuts are cracked in action
6/10
Black turned white just like his idol the only one who molests kids
An oblivious hit straight to this bitch, spit more than some lethal fluid
6/10
Yes I am a Gene.ius that only uses a third of his skills to beat-you
Authentik mind Intelligence wit just a word I can defeat-you
6/10
Yo dawg I’m to ill notice that Im diseased and infected man
No I aint a newb and the last word you’ll eva say kid is damn
6/10
So now its 0-1 later 0-2 messed wit the wrong nigga dude
So now bitch look at this verse that I just spit and just look at you
6/10
overall 70/100

Came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay

BiG-WhIt3y 08-13-04 01:00 AM

uppin 4 votes yall holla back.............................

WillNova 08-13-04 01:17 AM

Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

this wasn't really a good battle..... I think both could of did betta. Lethal had more creativity and wordplay.... Whitey was jus too basic and spit the same ole.... weak punches from bothe, but ova all Lethal hit harder

Paris Hilton666 08-13-04 06:41 AM

uppin for some votes will return the favor

Paris Hilton666 08-13-04 11:32 AM

uppin now bitches will return the fuckin favor

Paris Hilton666 08-13-04 05:31 PM

uupin bitches can u vote on this honestly

Paris Hilton666 08-13-04 11:03 PM

uupin bitches can u vote on this honestly

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Rising Sun 08-14-04 11:12 PM

Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

OK....no offense but this was a weak battle my vote goes to you cause you had better flow and made sense but its evident u stopped trying at the end. The other emcee did not make much sense and some of his lines were extremely weak or just like fillers. You had good vocabulary which brought out a little bit of the complexity in ur verse but the only punch I think that hit hard was
Yes I am a Gene.ius that only uses a third of his skills to beat-you
Authentik mind Intelligence wit just a word I can defeat-you
pz....

Magic5 08-15-04 01:57 PM

Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

Lethal Lunatic
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. decent personals..

BiG-WhIt3y
structure isnt very good.. not a lot of consistency with ur line lengths.. flow fell off due to the lack of consistency.. no multis.. wack wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
neither had multis.. Lethal Lunatic had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. Lethal Lunatic gets my vote..

VOTE - LETHAL LUNATIC

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Keith Moon 08-15-04 04:06 PM

Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

easy.........ok

lethal good verse nice punches...nice wordplay

whit3y elevate all weak/no punchs, fix ya structure an stuff

v/lethal


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