BIG-WHIT3Y vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines no more no less
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-13-04 at 01:39 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

BiG-WhIt3y has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 01:10 AM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 01:13 AM.

Wit your rhymes you think you could have an EMPIRE?
My rhymes are so hot they light yo ass on FIRE.
Even if they were on your mouse, you couldnt touch my RHYMES,
Keep tlakin your gonna wind up on the front page of NEW YORK TIMES.
You think you can beat me you shouldnt have even tried SON,
Cause yo empire is about to be bought out like fuckin ENRON...

new york times cause hes from new york
enron cause of the big scam they were bought out

Imagine me taking defeat from a Michael Jackson groupie(1)
It wont happen like no clapping in a action movie

My bars lock him him down like penitentary gates
See its meant for me to accelarate and destroy fake

His vocab like 3rd grade watch as i burn lame characters
And leave him seeing more stars then the flag of america



(1)he gots michael jackson in his avatar how gay is that

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This was feedback posted for BiG-WhIt3y
 

fuck u dogg dont ever fuck with the d o g g you might end up loking like a hug cuz you aint no mc or a fucki g this punk smells like a sunk so dont ever fuck with me dogg or i will kick your ass and i do have a bitch but she aint no bitch you are the bitch because you r the oneho aint ritch and i am so fuck you ass hole and the o u

Fuck you man wheny ou learn how to rap serisouly then you can talk to me you lil fuckin faggot

Voted For: Empire

easy battle...

B dubbs... this is better than ya last battle... looks as if ya trying to get better but still not quite there yet... good shyt though, for you. that's some quick elevatin... baby step... but a step none-the-less...

Em killed him with the punches... good opener... ok closer... not really too much to say about a 6 liner but yeah... E took this E-Z

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Voted For: Empire

empire took this one, altho u had bad structure and bad wordplay, you ahd some nice punches and personals in there, and a couple good multies...but this wasnt the best i seen from you

big whit3y had a nice flow, but it had poor structure and wordplay also...new york times was clean, seeing how he from new york, but it was choppy, thats why you lost, your punches didnt connect

overall: both need to elevate more, keep practicin and work on their structure and wordplay, and while you doing that drop votes on the below battles...lol..naw, 4 real people drop votes...they gettn slept on

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Voted For: Empire

ok battle. just ok. but empire took tis one with better vocab, structure, flow, personals, well basically all of it. big whitey, elevate on the rhyming tip becuse its pronounced en-RON like the name Ron and that doesnt rhyme with "son" no matter how badly you want it to. and empire elevate on the punches cuz they were kinda weak pawtna. ok -1-

Voted For: BiG-WhIt3y

Empire wins jus on the complexity of his flow..Bigs verse was jus simple.

How come I voted for empire an it siad I voted for big w

Voted For: Empire

empire took this...both were weak, but empire had punches, big whit3y didnt...he jus talked self glorifactation...remember a battle is about punches and insults...both of them flowed, and made sense, but my vote goes empire...jus was better

Voted For: BiG-WhIt3y

ima go with big on this one his made more since its was like a 60 vs a 50 close battle but i gotta go with big

Voted For: Empire

yo good vocab, punchline, and form in ur flow. good enuff 4 me!