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DiSeAsE 08-13-04 10:52 AM

Al B. Dammed vs Empire
 
Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 150

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System 08-13-04 10:52 AM

Al B. Dammed has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 10:52 AM.

DiSeAsE 08-13-04 10:54 AM

yo..

i abuse this bitch lyrically like his parents physically abusing
this Empire is my next target like terriorsts State Building
ima banish this fool, now ur only gunna see me Smokin
cuz i pratically own your Alliance, ur in it? fool u must be jokin
Man just peep his crew name, pSa ... just to dickride
Take My advice, This Pussy Should Attempt sucide..........
1-800 Empire, you gun need ya insurance after im done wit u
if u duck, its like "ur rubba" and im the glue, ima always be-on-you
Leave this whore screamin, calls bitch, you cant undo it
empire for baseball?only took the job for balls, he wanna screw-it

System 08-13-04 05:44 PM

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 05:44 PM.

50Cal. 08-13-04 05:47 PM

Swear im PIMPING how i handle this PUSSY
Cuz al b damned(ill be damned)if i lose to a AMEATURE ROOKIE
Damage like HOT CANDLES im melting his wax(whacked)BARS
Till he kneel DOWN annd kiss the GROUND of this RAP CZAR(1)

50Cal. 08-13-04 05:55 PM

Swear im PIMPING how i handle this PUSSY
Cuz al b damned(ill be damned)if i lose to a AMEATURE ROOKIE
Damage like HOT CANDLES im melting his wax(whacked)BARS
Till he kneel DOWN annd kiss the GROUND of this RAP CZAR(1)
On the REAL whats the DEAL with NO WINS thinking you NICE(hes 0-1)
Yous a bitch and if you snitch here you snitching in real life(2-hit the link)
Its not fair but who cares when i bomb and drill you
But i dont understand how you still standing and not a PHANTOM when sonic killed you(3-hit the link)
You so BAD with no VOCAB or PUNCHLINES
I checked if AI vets so why they still posting in frontlines
If you so sick when you spit why you only battle that ONE TIME
You the worst i can smash ya whole verse with a PUNCHLINE



(1)a czar is a emperor he needs to bow to me
(2)al b a snitch
(3)sonic killing his crew
(4)A.I is his crew

50Cal. 08-13-04 08:47 PM

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DiSeAsE 08-13-04 09:20 PM

U spit 12 lines and limit was 10 :(.............Bump

M-Eazy 08-13-04 09:28 PM

Voted For: Al B. Dammed

damn empire..did you not see 10 lines...lol...al b damned got this one...with a better flow better structure and nice personals...elevate, you fell off near the end, but still won cuase empire never came wit it...nice flow tho....elevate

drop votes on the below links people

50Cal. 08-13-04 09:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Al B. Dammed
U spit 12 lines and limit was 10 :(.............Bump

i should dq you for that shit freeposting the rules say 10 unlimited which means a min of 10 and unlimited lines max how you post the battle and dont know that and you only got a vote cuz you tried a sucka move to act like i cheated ill get that took off dont freepost no more let niggas give hones votes

DiSeAsE 08-13-04 09:34 PM

didnt say anything like that.. i dont care that broke the limit.. just pointing it out, even if he left that out, he still woulda voted for me!

Da Vinci 08-14-04 01:06 AM

This was feedback posted for Al B. Dammed
 
Just check'n the stat's

50Cal. 08-14-04 01:40 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by lyricalflowz23
Voted For: Empire

LoL, Decent battle, I think Empire gots this though. lol. Though he didn't have as many lines, The lines he did have were harder than any of the lines that Dammed had. The first line was aight wordplay. I lked the 2nd line. Was nice.

Dammed, I think you had the better structure, and flow. Empire has you in the punches department and wordplay, No one attempted to be personal or attempted any multis, well Dammed had like one personal. No hate.

Please return an honest vote. Thanks.

i got madd personals but niggas cant see them till after they vote STROBE fix this damit

50Cal. 08-14-04 10:47 AM

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Paris Hilton666 08-14-04 11:16 AM

Voted For: Al B. Dammed

nice shit

DiSeAsE 08-14-04 11:17 AM

lol.. wow uppin..........................................

Paris Hilton666 08-14-04 11:17 AM

oooooo take that sgit out i meant that to be a feedback

Removed

50Cal. 08-14-04 07:07 PM

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DiSeAsE 08-15-04 11:09 AM

bump 2..................................jdots vote shouldnt of been removed you herb.....

50Cal. 08-15-04 04:56 PM

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50Cal. 08-15-04 09:25 PM

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Ill-Grammatix 08-16-04 07:36 PM

Voted For: Empire

ehh...

Al got beat... first of all abusing doesn't rhyme with building
... all of ya lines were pretty bland...punches never hit hard enough to cause a dent... ya shoulda came way harder... was pretty bored with the read.

empire was a lot more personal and his punches connected... backed his lines with evidence... second bar was kinda wack...
multi's need work... mostly personals and punches but no metas...

empire got this kinda easy

on another note... A.I. has got some dope members but Al B. needs more time in training... that verse he dropped was sub-par... c'mon now... he in a crew with dudes that's got some killa stats... help ya boy out and show him the ropes... one

DiSeAsE 08-16-04 07:42 PM

its a end rhyme you jackass... ima get that vote removed...

Ill-Grammatix 08-16-04 08:57 PM

damn dawg, wus with the hostility?... it's a fair and honest explained vote... try and get it removed if you want but i doubt it'll happen. regardless, i still felt that you lost this one... ya can't win 'em all. If ya had a bad night just accept it and move on to the next battle... *kats is waaayyyy too serious in here*... peace homie

50Cal. 08-16-04 09:26 PM

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Nynth Degree 08-17-04 12:05 AM

Voted For: Empire

Damn Empire canme with harder punches, nice worplady and good stucture. Al, you had good structure too, but none of your punches really connected or came very hard. No hate though, good battle...
Vote - Empire

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

50Cal. 08-17-04 10:01 AM

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Hitchcock 08-18-04 10:39 PM

Voted For: Empire

good spit empire just drop the explanations to the b ottom cuz it breaks up the flow when their in there
punches were pretty good..ur opener was the best punch in the battle cuz it had a personal too
multies were ight n structure was good..."Al b damned" if the other guy won this battle
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CODEE 08-18-04 11:41 PM

Voted For: Empire

nice flow and real nice on the punchlines good personal too

afropimp 08-19-04 02:01 AM

Voted For: Empire

man that was close in tha begginin but u fucked up al.. 1 800 empire nope rubba and glue firts grade dogg no hate. nice punches tho and a few persanols but empire murdered u wit persanols. and punches no multis either sied flow was tha same structure is tha same too but overall empire gets it no hate just read tha battle it expplains it all hit em bak dogg good battle overall

Logic The Goonie 08-19-04 02:08 AM

Voted For: Empire

ugh not that hot of a battle.

empire-ok punches and ur structure and flow were a lil off but the personals were decent.you used frontlines at the end of ur line twice and u lost points for that.i dont know why my name is in there capitalized tho.. 5.95/10

al b damned-better flo and structure and better wordplay but the punches were weak as hell. seemed like u had the perfect set up but just didnt deliver right. i got the wordplay of "pussy should attempt" but barely so u need to make that more clear next time...5.25

v//empire (but why was my name in thurr?)


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