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Boomer vs Saaran
Battle Rules:
10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-13-04 at 05:26 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
Boomer has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 04:58 PM.
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saaran has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 04:59 PM.
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Dis lil bitch Saaran/Gonna blow u away wid my lyrikal cannon/
I drop verses like im droppin u over a cliff/Munched up bye otha mc's bein passed on like a spliff/ Cant play headgames wid my lyrikal wit/Come on bitch hurry and spit/Dis verse b makin u hav a seizure or a fit/So prick go bak and sit on ya mans dick/ Ill wake yo ass up wid a muthafuckin kick/Goin on raw and goin on sick/shudnt of accepted i told ya/So watch the clock- itll soon b over-Dont b embarrased u fell in battle 2 a lyrical soldier |
signed up same month, but u newbish dats da diffrence
see ive been relaunched since, rap was in ur exsitance and exsitance to you won't be long or so i think fuck thinken, four lines and boom ur already extinct forget it, your red all over like its news to ur chest you got no ability, shit you can only lost at ur best never the less, fags talk shit and ur always frontin yeah and never the less,nah your less than nothing you ass, react to see this, rb pass is reliquinshed kill you and regis, all fuck life lines diminished |
lose* at ur best my bad
vote also |
uppin ppl ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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fuckers vote or die... two choices
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you fuckin vote please man....
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Voted For: saaran
yo dis goes to saaran but not easily, yo dis battle was good n evrythin but i think saaran had betta structure and his punches were on contact, um Boomer ur verse was good dawg but u need betta struc. i mean if u had struc i wud b able to get yo shit over all good battle v/Saaran return da favor man iite 1 love http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142209 |
yo still up
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up liek fuckin whoa
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Voted For: Boomer
i'll go with boomer i read both and boomers stood out more , better lyrics all around , saaran yours was boring : no beef i jus thought it was , boomer i liked a lil bit but more than saarans but whats a spliff? ha just wonderin ight but better structure went to saaran but everything else went to boomer nice finisher also :shoot: :shoot: turban vote//boomer check out my "i'm a terrorist" in the poetry and open mic sections |
This was feedback posted for Boomer
Dis battle was weak i aint gunna waste my words on u
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please uzi your a joke...
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haha vote you fuckers
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uppin you cunts
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Voted For: saaran
hahaha he said ur already extinct! lol. but for real, on sided battle for real but tha6 doesnt mean saaran doesnt need some help in some areas. saaran u gotta work on that wordplay a lil bit, yeah some of the punches were funny but your rap was repetitive as fuck. also u gotta do more personal shit than that or else ppl is gunna think its prewritten. boom,just focus on your structure (try writing in lines like saaran) and your punches and im sure everything else will follow along and u can get some respect sround here. but for now..............."boom ur already extinct" fuckin hilarious.... v/saaran (no hate) |
stick to singin and vote people
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Voted For: saaran
liked Saarans flow had better structure n was jsut overall better Boomer ya structure was off it fucked up ya flow so fix it dats it v/Saaran vote on my battles DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463 |
Voted For: saaran
Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to saaran his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good His flow was heavenly and his wordplay just killed him Very good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
get it closed please
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Voted For: saaran
saaran u win the otha boi was not timin them lines riite u tried to make shit rhyme jus 4 the heck of it saaran ya shit had a nice flo and ya lines was nice big ups u got my vote vote=saaran |
uppin for votes
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Voted For: saaran
Saaran you took that cuz, nice drop, good rhymes and nice structure, you did yo thang.. boom just work on punchlines and wordplay, but saaran i vote for you for an overall better verse, return the favor with a drop in this battle here, thanx.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411 |
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