Wrecker vs The Kid P-Dizzle
 

Battle Rules:

5 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Accpet..i'll drop my verse tomorrow, i'm going to sleep..

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 11:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Both DQ'ed.. 5 bars = 10 lines

Wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:28 PM.

The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:37 PM.

5 bars? That's unusual, but I'll give it a shot...

I'm bout to wreck ya, just like I did to your mother's placenta
And your pops? He's the reason you at the rape crisis centa (center)
Don't pretend ta (to), act tough, you'll get smack up 'cuz you're not that
You should stop that, you're all up on my nuts like a jockstrap
Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate

There's my 5 bars...bring it.

thats not 5 bars idiot, thats 5 lines..5 bars is what i did, so yea, uppin' for votes..

Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..

explanation- dizzle is like that west coast slang (shizzle, dizzle, fa rizzle..etc..) so nove writer's as in i'm erasin dizzle..you should get the other bars, p'z

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Vote:Kid
Betta rhymin,and structure,and flow
Wrecker ok verse but ur structure was hard 2 read No hate
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<UzI> Vs Turban

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kid, who the hell votes on structure..umm..yea, also rhyming??..also Flow, lol..

the Main Categories are..
punches, personals, werdplay, vocab, metas, opener, finisher...retard..thats a d/r vote..or an herb vote..

Voted For: Wrecker

bOOOM wrecker u wrecked this punk mufauka, he was weak, and you meked him. You had good wordplay structure, flow and punches. P-dizzle u need t elavate and become better caus eu suck,......... really

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uppin' for more votes..ok i'm freetyping coz it says i gotta have 50 characters..

You did 8 bars, dumbass...uppin'

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Damn, really close battle here, but i think the Kid took it, he had a better opener and closer, and you both had good multis, but i think the Kid took the punches, wrecker had better wordplay and structure, but Kid had the flow, and the creativity, wrecker had better personels, but The kid had better metaphors, all in all, the kid just had a better verse, so he gets my vote

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

lol again i am sitting here laughin haha dizzle did it again i loved everyline , classic shit , that last line really took it home , it was the nail in the coffin for my vote "Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate" that seriously made me laugh nice structure and it was nice ,

turban

vote dizzle

ok..man, i quit this site ya'll are some friggin penis rydin kids, its obvious i won, maybe he's immin ya'll for votes or whatever..but i know i didnt loose..you could bring this to any sight and i woulda won..

Bro, face it, you suck, it's just that simple...uppin'.

Voted For: Wrecker

Yes, I did underestimate him...but thanks for that anatomy lesson, I'll keep that in mind next time I talk about someone's mom, haha...Uppin'

Voted For: Wrecker

None really came hard but wrecker had loads of wordplay and metas.......the kid had sum wordplay and punches but i didn't really feel em......neither drops were personal.........

Vote Wrecker

Yo i P-dizzle i seen sum much betta stuff from ya.....wat happned?

I don't even know what happened here man, but still uppin'...

Voted For: Wrecker

we got ourselves an up and comer

And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
^^^your hot punches, or wordplay lines, all u need to work on is your lead in lines cuz they were all pretty gay and didn't lead into the next punch, if u lead into puches it can make your lines shorter and your puches more wittier and hit harder.
...... hot verse regardless

the kid...... u needed to come wit personals like wrecker, i would list the lines of your i liked but i dont like any of 'em.
so every catagory goes to wrecker.........
thanks for votin on my battle ,but u did say honest vote, and i agree wit that and speak wit my actions.
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wrecker return wit an honest vote on this battle, g'luck wit your other battles. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142432

Pic, don't even worry about it, I ain't gone hold nothin' against you...you're one of those few people that ain't afraid to vote against someone who just voted for you, I respect that. Keep doin' your thing bro...

Voted For: Wrecker

Yeh Not Knowin Things Kid, Coz Your Verse Is Pure ASSumption..
And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
--wack opener...work on it

So Check My Numbers, Coz Like A Math Teacher, I'mma Set Yeh Order,
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
---nice second line but the set-up was blah!

Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
---wack... filler lines

Kid Am Always Above Yeh, So On My Entrance, This Herbs Bowin Down To Knees..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
---ok closer... again, setup was wack


I'm bout to wreck ya, just like I did to your mother's placenta
And your pops? He's the reason you at the rape crisis centa (center)
--ehh... ya get a pass for that one

Don't pretend ta (to), act tough, you'll get smack up 'cuz you're not that
You should stop that, you're all up on my nuts like a jockstrap
--played, on the wack side... elevate ya skill level here

Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate
--one line stretched into 2... not a good closer

ok... neither one of you dropped the required 5 bars... just so you know... a bar consists of 2 lines... one line is NOT a bar!

Wrecker took this easy with better rhymes and flow... wordplay was also better... not much of it but it was cool when it came out

P-diz... stop listening to Kurtis Blow...lol..kidding... but yeah, ya style was "going way back" like stetsasonic and the cold crush brothers... come to da light homie... keep elevatin

Yeah, everyone's been disappointed with me on this one, uppin'...

Voted For: Wrecker

that was good wrecker u got him on that one especially this line "Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer"