e-dubz vs pictureperfect2
 

Battle Rules:

10-14 lines
No crew/hate/dr votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 12:08 AM

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e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:38 PM.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 12:01 AM.

so you can bet when you see dubz, you gonna see the fifth quick
then get ripped apart quicker then an orphan'd childs christmas list
dubz rippin this nigga....... with more ‘punches’ then ‘kool-aid’
my spits is off the top of the dome like ugly......... tu-pays
and if its beef u got.......... imma handle it one or two ways
either freestyles or puttin guns in yo mouth like toothpaste
im so far ahead of this nigga........ when it come to dissin
so when im done u’d be lucky to....... have a pot to piss in
im gonna paint a 'perfect picture' like........ wes craven
my flow's so hot it'll go through u and leave yo chest achin
with punches hittin harder then balls thrown by Tarkanton
spit my last bar leavin the competition shakin like Parkison's

Tarkanton was a quarterback for the vikings..

(His name looks blazed, above his title)……..

like the rest of ya blunts in philly, my sig tells ya your getting smoked
Im getting this dubz blazed silly, his name saw it comin, it already showed
Ya dubz, I wish I could give it to u that you’re the finest in philly, but that’d be silly
cuz even teanage mom’s know”parents just don’t understand” so haha u 2nd to big willy
had to fuckin correct this little bitches shit, he only sick wit cancer
fuck this dumb fuck in the city of the 6ers, he still don’t have “THE ANSWER”
Imma leave u hangin like vinces arm in the rim, cuz ballin I speak fluently
This battle imma pretend im a NET, this bitch still could send a shot throw me
Broke bitch getting served by me and meals on wheels
only time u got a chance for income (in cum) is as he kneels
U couldn’t serve me wit beef if your employer bk delivered
He say he got hard punches, but we see after the battle (he miss figured )

up ta the top

up ..

Voted For: e-dubz

ok e good flow and struture and descent punches it could be better but you got some good hits off and you got good vocab5/10
pic horrible flow your structure is all fucked up and your vocab needs work you your punches are good but you just aint word them right4/10

uppin....

Voted For: e-dubz

Picture Perfect- Ok Punches, Flow Was Decent, Some Played Wordplay Concepts

E-Dubs- Ok Punches, Flow Was Ok, Some Ok Metaphors

Punches- Tie
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Picture
Metaphors- E Dubs
Originality- E Dubz
Structure- Tie

Final Vote---[b]E Dubz

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Voted For: e-dubz

okay...i just wanna know wun thing how da fukk did picture get ova 20 wins?????...im just returnin da favor

opener-dubz i like dat good punchline...pic dat shit was weak n barley ryhmed
structure-dubz i understood ya shit i aint have look across da screen da see da end of ya line
punchlines-dubz of course..pic "sick with caner" is played da fukk out
multis-nun
creativity-umm a tie
personals-a tie
finisher-nun i wasn't feelin nun of dem shits
enjoyed-dubz....i dont know how ppl vote on battle's sayin all dis dat wasn't a punch when they dont ryhme how they vote on other niggaz battles...but dubz took dis shit easly pic ya ryhme scheme is wack as fukk....half ya shit was played..dis aint a hate vote im just returnin da favor....

"im just returnin da favor" oh ok no problem, he votes on ya shit, u vote on his regardless..... i know how dick riding works.... no worries

^ i didnt even vote on any of his battles..anyway uppin

uppin again...

uppin, we need some votes on this shit

up..

lets get some votes on this shit

uppin..

dis shit gets slept on to much..lets get votes in here

up..

Voted For: e-dubz

like the rest of ya blunts in philly, my sig tells ya your getting smoked
Im getting this dubz blazed silly, his name saw it comin, it already showed
decent personal but the punch was weak cuz u already said sumthin about it before your verse....5/10
Ya dubz, I wish I could give it to u that you’re the finest in philly, but that’d be silly
cuz even teanage mom’s know”parents just don’t understand” so haha u 2nd to big willy
the first line was straight but the second was a horrible punch...4/10
had to fuckin correct this little bitches shit, he only sick wit cancer
fuck this dumb fuck in the city of the 6ers, he still don’t have “THE ANSWER”
this is where personals go bad and come out whack...4/10
Imma leave u hangin like vinces arm in the rim, cuz ballin I speak fluently
This battle imma pretend im a NET, this bitch still could send a shot throw me
consecutive weak punch..3/10
Broke bitch getting served by me and meals on wheels
only time u got a chance for income (in cum) is as he kneels
slightly better but still pretty weak..not that good of delivery...5/10
U couldn’t serve me wit beef if your employer bk delivered
He say he got hard punches, but we see after the battle (he miss figured )
another bad punch that wasnt delivered right...5/10


so you can bet when you see dubz, you gonna see the fifth quick
then get ripped apart quicker then an orphan'd childs christmas list
good meta and good punch...7/10
dubz rippin this nigga....... with more ‘punches’ then ‘kool-aid’
my spits is off the top of the dome like ugly......... tu-pays
lol good meta and good punch once again. really good setup..7/10
and if its beef u got.......... imma handle it one or two ways
either freestyles or puttin guns in yo mouth like toothpaste
like how u kept the same rhyme goin but it wasnt in the right place.weak punch...5/10
im so far ahead of this nigga........ when it come to dissin
so when im done u’d be lucky to....... have a pot to piss in
dont really get this one at all and the first line was self glorification..4/10
im gonna paint a 'perfect picture' like........ wes craven
my flow's so hot it'll go through u and leave yo chest achin
good personal.punch was kinda weak...6/10
with punches hittin harder then balls thrown by Tarkanton
spit my last bar leavin the competition shakin like Parkison's
ok punch kinda weak closer...5/10

pic-26/60
dubz-34/60

both can do much better. v//e-dubz

i dont really kno if i can
vote but i vote 4 E DUBZ
he had more wordplay n punches
n his flow was tyght so i gave it
2 him
v/E DUBZ

dubz rippin this nigga....... with more ‘punches’ then ‘kool-aid’
my spits is off the top of the dome like ugly......... tu-pays
lol good meta and good punch once again. really good setup..7/10

umm...........your retarded phantom, u could say good meta and wordplay, but um "good punch once agian" battles are for punches and this like all his other lines weren't punches, jus metas and things he does to me. that is not a punch.

he said HE had more punches then kool aid, and that HIS spits is off the top of the dome like ugly......... tu-pays
^^^^^^^^^^ please tell me how this is making fun of me or is in anyway considered a punch.

HE DID NOT HAVE A SINGLE PUNCH IN THE ENTIRE BATTLE!!!! ya'll aint got a clue. reread his shit and tell me one thing that is makin fun of me. this is retarded, he doesn't say one bad thing about me and ya'll bitches vote for 'em. please help me understand your stupidity, someone please............. NOT A SINGLE FUCKIN PUNCH. i thought thats what battles were......this is fuckin nonesense

NOT A ONE. NOT ONE PUNCH, I DONT GET IT.

^u's a bitch..my whole verse is punches

nope
 

nope, sorry, but u dont have one punch in the whole battle..... every single line is self glorification. nice wordplay and all, but nothing was directed as a diss towards me. show me one line that is actually makin fun of me and not jus bein used as a self glorifying line.... jus one, i dare u.

Voted For: pictureperfect2

Pic takes this one. Good punches by edubz though. I just dont think he expanded that much in this battle. He had too many lines talking about himself. You had good structure and flow though. A lot better than pics...Pic takes it with harder punches though. Metas were alright too. Nice complex verse with some alright personals too. Verse wasnt that great, but enough to get over Edubz. Pic gets tha vote.

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4-2 uppin..

uppin..

uppin this

props to both battlers on this one but here's the verdict

edubz-decent wordplay, nice multi usage, but your structure was a little off tho as i was reading it. but i'd give your verse a 7/10

pictureperfect-your structure was ok, but i can't stress enough, that corniness is not allowed on the battlefield, and your verse was full of it. the parents just don't understand line, was beyond corny. You gotta go at this seriously, or if not serious, then something sharp and funny you know, a below the belt funny diss. But not these corny lines. and i got onto this battle cuz you put in complaints that he didn't throw a single punch and you're losing. Nobody did you an injustice, you just didn't come serious enough, and dubz does have punches. You need elavation, no hate.
4/10

Voted For: e-dubz

PP2: You had a weak verse son. No hard punches, and you used a cum line...WOW. Only decent one was the 'Iverson' line. The Fresh Prince one was weak, The name appearance punches are played, and again, you used a cum line...Structure was type fucked too...not a good verse son.

e-dubz: You had way harder hitting punches thant pp, although you had self-gloricatin lines in there, your punches just hit harder, I liked the tupay line, that was the best of the battle....and ya structure was nice so

v/e-dubz