Demon Pyrokronix vs Myster.E
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 01:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Myster.E has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 01:04 PM.

Demon Pyrokronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 01:07 PM.

I'm only doing this if it's 10 lines.

Not 6-unlimited.

But whatever, check in.

Yo... yo... yo...

Bow before your killer/ I'll fucking choke you like Manzanilla,
There's no mastery in you when you spit your wack like Ice. Vannilla,
How delirious are you? You don't even know what race you are,
Must be takin after Jackson and even he's in your avatar,
It's a simple enough question, what ethnic race are you?
Too bewildered to answer? Man Even Sdizzle could scar you,
Destined to be malevont ,all my life I've been mirkin,
Feel you're muscles start jirkin, as if your steroids wasn't workin,
I'll break ya legs like they was twigs, fill them up with plaster,
Confused again, compared to you, everyone's a master.

Yo... yo... yo...

Bow before your killer/ I'll fucking choke you like Manzanilla,
There's no mastery in you when you spit your wack like Ice. Vannilla,
How delirious are you? You don't even know what race you are,
Must be takin after Jackson and even he's in your avatar,
It's a simple enough question, what ethnic race are you?
Too bewildered to answer? Man Even Sdizzle could scar you,
Destined to be malevont ,all my life I've been mirkin,
Feel you're muscles start jirkin, as if your steroids wasn't workin,
I'll break ya legs like they was twigs, fill them up with plaster,
Confused again, compared to you, everyone's a master.

I'll explain some of the personals in a min. Sorry if this is double posting I forgot to send my erse in the post verse bit.

For all you know nothing faggots.

Manzanila is a very dry wine which often chokes people because it is so dry.

I dissed him on not knowing which ace he was because in his sig t says Black man white man.

And his avatar is dancing like Michael Jackson.

Malevont is evil.

If there's anything esle pm me. I hate herbish votes.

Ah yes, on the last line where it says ...everyone's a master. Master. E is his name.

done.

Who da fuck is this, comin talkin shit?, a lot of suckin dick, but not a lot of wit,
You aint got the gutts to spit, my verse is covered in rust and u still lost to it,
You couldn't trouble this, sorry your bubble's split, or worse burst,
I go first then u gon' hurt, and when I'm done u get murked,
I see Demon people, but I ain't seein evil, Your rhymes are so transparent I can see throught it,
I really need to askjeeves why u google it,
Stupid bitch, and ur foolish tricks, I can tell u schooled wit pricks,
Wit cheap shots u threw and miss,I'll pop u till u drop to my boots and kiss,
I got an Iron to press ur chest, put a hole in ur vest, and lay u to rest,
Pest the best way to get rid o' you is pesticide, so u best decide to backdown, cuz i won't let it slide, if u want entry access denied,

Uppin

Voted For: Myster.E

Ok, both drops were good but I say Myster.E won this 'cuz his was just better. He had some ok punches, but the strength in this verse was his multis. Demon, you had some punches as well, but they didn't really connect. No hate though, good battle you 2.
Vote - Myster.E

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

this was an ok battle
I think deom deserves this win cos i really thought his punches came more harder and that his personals were more intense good battle though props to both

OOk thanx for voting guys....... uppin 1............................

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Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

myster e got riped demon was more lyrical

Yo can you explain that further please because that didn't really give sufficient explanation and I don't wanna get the vote DQ'd.

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Voted For: Myster.E

myster e took this...he had a better flow an he came harder with his punches

This was feedback posted for Demon Pyrokronix
 

both came off pretty well in this battle, demon had a better structure in my opinion which would have probably won him this, but im not voting. myster, i felt your vocab was a bit simpleat times, like "it and wit" and you did rhyme "it" to itself a few times. try and up your vocab man !

This was feedback posted for Demon Pyrokronix
 

good drop demon, nice opener and closer....just feed not a crew vote

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Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Voted For: Demon Pyrokoonix

Structure - Demon, he had straighter lines, that were more parallel and looked more appealing..

Punches - Demon, he came out immediatley with punchlines and disses, though elusiv did not, plus mercs were a little more creative..

personals, both can elevate here, none really stuck out..

Flow, I guess that this is a tie, i didn't see anything wrong with your flows..

Vocab, both need to elevate. Myster even made no sense in one part, when he said that his rhymes covered in rust.yes they were!Demon: I liked he got Jackson in avatar

Overall, Demon, his verse made more sense and also had better punchlines and stucture which give an overall better verse..

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UPPING!!! C'mon guys, 2 more votes to win. Seal the deal........ rrrrrrrrrr!!!

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Demon gets my vote becuz..he had harder punches than Myster..and that they connected..tha was good..wordplay & structure were ok..7/10
Myser.E. ...yo punches were ok..but not as hard tho..the flow was good..and the structure was a little stretchy...5/10

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Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Was pretty close.... but I didn't like the fact that Master E. had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to DP... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..

v/DP