Jonix vs DeadlyVision
 

Battle Rules:

Time: 1.30 Max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
etc.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 09:20 PM

Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in.

DeadlyVision has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 06:23 PM.

DeadlyVGod: Ama let u drop 1st cuz since its yo 1st battle....i wanna see what yo input is cuz most no show
Jonblze27: naa i wil ldef do this
Jonblze27: if not you win

His own words. He drops 1st

Jonix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 06:36 PM.

Both of us will drop tomorrow.....................

Aight am done i need to upload it on Soundclick.

But hurry.....

I'm waitin' for the reply cuz' its my first track on soundclick

Ok here goes my shit

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/keyroguemusic.htm

Up And Vote.

Chyeaaa...

Voted For: DeadlyVision

yea, this was an aiight battle.

DV, nice flow man, and lyrics. But it kinda sounded like you was talkin'. But still, not that bad. PRetty good beat and verse.

Jonix, you had pretty good emotion, but the beat was too slow man. That ruined it for me. Not a battle type beat. But it was aiight. Lyrics could b ebetter

overall, IO think DV takes it no hate

Voted For: DeadlyVision

ummm

flow-tie......jonix was too slow and DV you voice screwed yours...be natural on da mic....

presence-none had no energy.......so yeah.......tie

punches-ummmm tie....no real hard hittin ones........most were okish...jonix's shit clearly punch was from DMX song (I think where the hood at) so prob DV

beat-DV....jon your beat was ok but was too sloooooowwww

This was feedback posted for DeadlyVision
 

nice shit

damn I shoulda hypened the beat and made the pitch faster...

Is all good. Up on this shit.................

Ama be more energetic on the mic...lol like the one i did about shadow

Voted For: DeadlyVision

yea.. this was easily DV..

Jonix: no emotion at all.. and you were flowing atttt to slow.. that was boring.. no offence,. easdily yopu could elevate.. just work on your flow andf rhyme scheme.. those are what i saw most flaws in.. and emotion..

DV: yonix lmao.. :p.. i felt you could use jsut a tad bit of emotion to, but other than that.. you strait.. if you spit more emotion and was into it more.. you'd be a good audio head..good job.. beat was tight as shit. i forget where i heard that beat tho.. oh well..


vote: DV

Voted For: DeadlyVision

I think Jonix had a little better mic prescence... He was a little more into his verse... Deadlyvision had a better flow though, and I think his punches were stronger- i liked deadly's beat better as well, I think i got that shit on my computer somewhere- shit is hot... I listened about 3 times to each once... it was kinda hard to decide, but I was feelin Deadly a little more here. Jonix's flow was kinda slow and I think it took away from his verse- good battle from both though. - Jonix just work on your punches cuz they make a big difference, and I think deadly just needs to get a little more comfortable with a mic. Vote- Deadly

yeah i chose an easy beat for my first try at audio, now i know what to do.

1 more fo KO

do you wanna battle again

Voted For: DeadlyVision

Deadly decent verse, i liked the beat. good personals. definitely enough to win this battle