Ill-Grammatix vs Begal
 

Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Lines
No biting
no recycling
no D/R (dick riding for you noobs)
no hate votes
you get 1 hour after check in to drop ya shyt
If y'all lose ya each get a loss to keep shyt fair... i'll just take the one win... i ain't a greedy nigga!


Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 08-15-04 at 12:39 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Begal has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 09:47 PM.

Wonderbread
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Ill spit this shit on you like lyrical foreplay
Leave bread crumbs on your ass, for you to enjoy
Got a lot of text wins i see, how much did they cost?
Step up and admit, bitch you already lost
When I unleash this rap game holocaust
Ok, bitch, think ya need to get real
You drop out, we stay number 1, is it a deal?
Going after the harvest, thats what it be?
Now I return the favor with lyrical catastrophe
Give it up, were impossoble to drop
Your gone faster than donuts at the cop shop
Pack yourself, up with ketchup and fries
Your ass got served by a couple of white guys

Begal
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Hehe that’s pretty sweet now its my turn
Lemmy show you how to rhyme, maybe you’ll learn

White harvest bitches coming at ya full steam
come to rip, tear thrash and cream
we come to show you how we rhyme
where the wheat reaper, and its time
look at your posts looks like an inbred jamboree
fuck now look at your cheeks lookin like cranberry
wasted exasperated comatosed
annihilated, depredated, and finally owned
so tell me what its like living in a house with wheels
going out with cousins eating road kill as meals
its scary how you think you got even a shred of skill
spend your life sucking dick and shoving down pills
now don’t you find it funny how you can post
getting on these forums and saying "you I can roast!"
how you can get up on these forms and say were so delicate
when you your god damn self are nearly illiterate

and you clearly said white harvest bitches vs you... so nice job screwing title

Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 10:45 PM.

I'm back bitches... Breakfast was great but this'll be better.
Hey dumbass... show me where i posted "WHITE" harvest... learn how to read... any way... i ain't gonna do no seperate verse for y'all... short and to the point... so do what ya gotta do to win...check it:


i thought y'all had enough of this when i shitted in "diss the person"/
no change here... still merkin, just spittin a different version/ it's curtains for y'all, this shyt was done before it began/
it took you niggaz 40 minutes just to foster a plan/
you kats is "NO DOUGH's (DOZE)" ... i'm eating you sleepin' on all ya garbage/
"cuttin' ya shyt off at the roots" like you my own personal "HARVEST"/
I said it before, I'll say it again... "I'm left in stitches"/
"FUNNY ASS" rappers... I just can't figure out which one the bitch is/
Begal be "hittin switches"... which is slang for how Wonder's hips is/
position is 69... Begal: "Wonder, ya so delicious!"/
2 clitoris'... one illiterate... can't even read their crew name/
the other one rockin' rainbow polkadots? yo get a clue, lame!/
I'm finished with y'all... finito... I can't take ya homo tactics/
when ya taking it form each other... both you faggots need to practice!

holla back bitches!!! LMAO

this kids mad funny...Begal don't even know his crew name!!!... and he says I called them "WHITE" Harvest and he just did it in his verse... fucking idiot! LMAO!

yo... can we get some votes on this two-for-one special?...c'mon in and watch a merkin' in progress...tell ya friends about it...lol

uppin... c'mon peoplz... honest votes please

uppin again...c'mon folks...it's been 2 days already and not one vote... it ain't that hard...well, reading their verses may be a lil painful to the eye and a few brain cells may be lost in the process but i think you'll clearly see who the winner is... honest votes...will return favor and drop honestly in all y'all shyt...one...

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

first them 2^^niggas how 2 niggas cant spit 1 good punch thats crazy anyways yall had no good punches or disses wordplay or vocab good struture though 2/10
ill good vocab and wordplay ''which 1 the bitch is''lol''rainbow pockadots''hahahahahahah yo he disrespected the shit out of yall fo real that was funny good ender nice verse overall 8/10
ill gets 2 bodys and the vote

good looking out empire... omma holla at you later bout some other shyt... one

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

ok ill got this but both was weak no lie ill had this cuz he was more elevated and his verse was way more betta so thje vote goes to ill

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

Ill-Grammatix won this hands down. You came with harder punches, good wordplay, and some nice multis. All 3 of you had good structure, but Wonder and Begal I expected more attacks at Ill, since this is a battle and all...No hate though, good battle.
Vote - Ill-Grammatix

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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

i gota give this 2 ill gramix...he came harder with his punches an his personals were better

aiight... one more can close this out... hey... can you guys explain ya votes better just in case they decide to jack 'em for inadequate feedback?...thx...
ready to start checkin' out y'all battles in a minute... one

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

lmao...ill won dis all cuz he rhymed basicly...u shoulld first learn how to rhyme wen u battle...pc