Elusiv G vs !Mc Merc!
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 10:37 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 10:09 PM.

!Mc Merc! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 10:12 PM.

I issued an open battle to summon da realest of mc's
instead i got this bitch mc merc tryin to test me
this fool needs to step back and realise
that the mc is fuckin wit has fire in his eyes
so when he steps to the mic he comes correct
after dis battle u wont nuttin but death
cos mc merc is ironically gonna be merked
this is a battle son you gon end up hurt
cos when i accept a challenge, i respond drastically
known to spit poison laced rhymes sparadically
u gonna b so astronimically dissed
god wont grant ur prayers no matter how many times u wish
cos mc jerk is gonna stay exclusively
a bitch ass wannabe
4eva in the shadow of the realest of realest mc's
and that cat is Nemesis Da Elusiv G

u commin here cocky, challenging niggas is your introduction
yo punches are like 2 much sweat in a jocky, ya need lyposuction
you battlin me, you stupid ass cocksucker, actin all buff
coundn't figure out how to start a battle thread, dumb but tuff?
he cried to his mommy, because i smashed him downstairs
not like apollo creed n rocky, more like bowow n the termimayor
i'm puttin one of ma ass cheeks, on all these fuckin lines
but ya put ya heart, cause you aint gottta state of mind
everything so easy, why couldnt ya do it, beat this nigga
i maybe new at the game, but i just permanetly mamed ya figga
you aint good, dont talk like you from da hood in fake ebonics
iyou lost this battle faster then a tortoise against sonic

so mc merc tinks he's bad enough to judge every1 else
4 u try and cuss others, ur bitch ass shud chek itself
u shud go and look in the mirror
and u'll understand y ur fam is always sick at dinner
yeh im arrogant and cocky
cos i can finish this in 2 roounds unlike rocky
u tha terminator made of steel
so ima b the 1000 degrees of heat only steel can feel
and melt n burn ur ass down
bury this liquid metal 6 feet underground
its gonna b hard to turn ur frown upside down
cos u realised u battlin' danigga wiv da rappin crown
cos ma lyrics are genetically engineered
to kill mc merc who was born queer

it over you faggot, u dont post again shit face m

upp up up m

ne mc up in here can c dat i killed ur ass and when it come down to the come dwn ima b the g they vote for ! say what

Voted For: Elusiv G

elusive g you ripped it.
yo mc merc i like that you use tuff

personals both
multis ??? dont kno
punches both
structure mc merc
flow mc merc
vocab elusive g
wordplay elusive g
overall tie but elusive g punches were harder

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Voted For: !Mc Merc!

merc took this e-z his punches hit harder better opener and flowes elusiv all u had was structure against this kat

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u guys are tradin votes its clearly shown if elusiv had harder punches why didnt u vote for him when u said punches:both dumbass

okay sombody tell me what whcich of his lines were an actuall punch that wasnt played oor used already a million times, ???????????????

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

Structure - Merc, he had straighter lines, that were more parallel and looked more appealing..

Punches - Merc, he came out immediatley with punchlines and disses, though elusiv did not, plus mercs were a little more creative..

personals, both can elevate here, none really stuck out..

Flow, I guess that this is a tie, i didn't see anything wrong with your flows..

Vocab, both need to elevate. elusiv even made no sense in one part, when he said that he'll astronomically diss you, that doesn't make sense..

Overall, Merc, his verse made more sense and also had better punchlines and stucture which give an overall better verse..

ok, can you return the favor with a drop in my thread, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143024

thank u, iur a good voter, good to know

Voted For: Elusiv G

Elusiv G Took This One With Better Punches and Wordplay.

Mc Merc Coulda Had It If He Would've Worded His Shit Better...

Elevate Both of You..

Vote - Elusiv G

~R~

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Yo sum u stressin over nuttin, if u wanna vote 4 me do it if u tink mc merc won vote for him and dats real. Slick skilz tryin 2 cum up inhere n say im tradin' votes only reason that bitch is votin gainst is cos im rippin him in our current battle.) go and look 4 urselves) As far as this battle goes if i win i win if i lose i lose. I got nuttin but respect for merc but slick skillz needs to shut the f up!
check out my other battle against Invader_ZIM i've ripped him clean up L8r Peace.

If y'all look i took dis battle jjus all u ppl aint wordin ur vote explanations god damnit re-do em cos otha wise ima loose dis on a punk ass technicality

come on y'all get votin. up n up nup, can;t start more battle while old ass ones are still open. vote n vote proper. holla bak Elusiv G

^ ya you people vote like shit

Voted For: Elusiv G

elusive more complex and shyt.....had personals also..nice punches..

Hey yo, dis battle weren't even funny. Can y'all vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want........like deres options. Peace and luv

vote and vote in detail y'll so dat ur voteds dnt get dq'd! Peace

uppin uppin 4 votes y'all. vote in detail so no dq's. Peace

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

well mc got it this time some wacker newb down inder him hes battlen you took it to him i geuss lol

Hey yo, dis battle weren't even funny. Can y'all vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want........like deres options. Peace and luv

Voted For: Elusiv G

yo his ryhmes was nice as shyt nice punch lines good flow so dis votes goes ta elusiv

come on y'all get votin. up n up nup, can;t start more battle while old ass ones are still open. vote n vote proper. i shud hav won dis already but y'all votes are dq'd 4 not being detailed enough. come on y'all. holla bak Elusiv G

Hey yo, dis battle weren't even funny. Can y'all vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want........like deres options. Peace and luv

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

nice mayn u had this one from tha topp right off cuzz i aint understand what that other nigga was talkin

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uppin uppin 4 dem votes y'all, n vote in detail. Peace

Voted For: Elusiv G

A hard battle for me to judge...neither really had any punchlines. But both of them had nice structure. So...I looked at it line for line and looked for a line that made me look at it twice. Didn't really find any but the one where he said "ironically gonna be merked." So that's the line that got him the win in my book. You also had some good vocab. But Merk, you had some good ideas. Just make some punches!

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

!Mc Merc!
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had no multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal..

Elusiv G
structure is good.. flow is good for the most part.. u had a few multis.. no good wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Elusiv G had more multis.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. !Mc Merc! had the better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. !Mc Merc! gets my vote..

VOTE - !MC MERC!

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.. thanx..

Voted For: Elusiv G

i'll give it to Elusiv G no hate though

elusiv G: better flow, not the best opener, not the best closer, but you kept it going, alright wordplay , your structure was short and simple , and not as played out

mc merc: nice but i jus wasnt feelin it after the 2nd line, you had a good opener , good word play then it sorta fell off no hate though good word play but it was close ,a elusiv had rythm so yea

vote//elusivg

damn..won't let me vote. I must not have enough post of somethin....but good battle from what I see. :-)

Voted For: Elusiv G

Aiight heres the deal The other guy-i felt that you didnt come as hard as you should have, and let it be known that those multies didnt go unoticed....but if your goin to do them keep them goin all throughout the rhyme you would skip a couple of lines and then do another multi bad idea cause it threw me off cause i was expecting another multi but ended up wit nothing............Elusive- i felt that you came harder wit ya rhyme aaight punches but great word play....but not very diverse try using more than two rhymin words....this was a very close battle but i got to give it to Elusive he just came harder.........V/Elusive......Please return the favor wit an unbias vote....its a topical and the topic is deepression...........http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147500