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Sick ILL Cell. vs MR. ZACHY DOOM
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Being Gay No Dicking Around No Typing Like A Twelve Year Old Asian Girl. :laugh: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-14-04 at 11:31 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
MR. ZACHY DOOM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 10:52 PM.
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Sick ILL Cell. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 10:58 PM.
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So listen up, I've got a couple of things to say. First of all, I go to an all boys school, but I swear I'm not gay. And second of all, does the word "grammar" ring a bell? Because I can't understand half of the "flows" your lips expell. Oh yeah, I have a question, Is that your picture in your "sig?" Because if it's so, your username doesn't lie, you're fucking "sick."
But whoa there, let's not get off track; You aren't getting off that easy NO, the real "get off," not the typical "touching your weanie" You little sick-o, get your rapping mind out of the gutter, Oh, did I say "rapping?", I meant talking; I'm sure you could use some butter. Because butter is probably the closest you'll ever get to smooth, Since your always glued to the computer screen when you've got those pounds to lose. You fucking fat-ass, but HEY!, maybe you're anorexic (I don't know!) Eww, that reminds me, there's nothing worse than toothpick looking black chick. Yeah, whatever, I hope you see that tore up this crap, And the really funny thing is, I don't even listen to rap. So it's pretty sad, when a style of musics greatest patron, get ripped to pieces, by a little white kid who hates blacks and asians. (Oh, I'm just kidding niggers!) |
people sleep on you so much you get me tired dude, you'll expire "soon"... always getting 'thrown out of windows' like bill gates fired you....
you soon you'll welt, after Sick burises ya "health"... this kid ran away from home after eminem told you to lose yourself.... like a lack of saliva, you cant spit, no need to explain my ryme ya get the "jist"... why do you get so pissed when i jizz on ya moms clit an leave hickys on her tits... just hang up ya gloves dawg an call it quits.... i'll eat this kid quicker than oprah can munch her snacks when her hunger's "back".... theres no need to front......your wack.... you were just a cumshot during my "younger past" when i used to watch thundercats* when it comes to battle rap, you "ruptured fast" bringing back memories of when your dad used to hump your ass... you've "flunked the class!" i see your future Zachy.....practice saying can i pump your gas?... the only way you'll be hot if you swallow a bottle of "tabasco" but since no one can do that i'll just rip you a new asshole.... i put my balls all up in ya hands, so at least you can say you got a hold of me... shit, the only way the crowd was to admire your punches was if you were 'quotin me'.... Ya verse is right next to mine and yo skill is still "nowhere" next to me,son... I'm Hitting you wit punches.so like 'Alzimers'.I'll make ya 'forget the past'.... And Zachy throws 'hard' punches with a wrath??,.nah!!.couldn't even happen even if he w'rapped' his 'fists' 'in acast... ill make you twitch when I blast, cuz Zachy aint a rapper,he a pedifill, fukin these little boys raw... ------ *thundercats is an old tv show.. Fuk it a quick as key in only freakin minutes |
it took you 9 minutes to write that??
shyt i have a voice typer in which i spit and it types |
This was feedback posted for MR. ZACHY DOOM
lmao wtf not voting jusssss loooking LMAOOOOO!!!!!!!
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Cool, I didn't know voice typers understood ebonics. |
lol^^ mine does ... it'll spell it wrong but then ill edit it
it would be like ni**a |
This was feedback posted for Sick ILL Cell.
word sick shit for a few minutes but ya got rusty
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Thanks, ass. |
Voted For: Sick ILL Cell.
k i give this to you for numerous reasons. THe first dude's flow was off and his sarcastic tone wasnt working. You fell off near the end but you had some decent multies, but overall I was feeling you wordplay which brought out humour. Your Bill Gates punch was very very hot....I personally loved it so I guess that is what made the battle. I always like the lose yourself ones but they are a little played out. Peace good luck to both of you |
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No, it wasn't. What is your phone number? I'll call you and rap it, you will see that it flows. I think you just suck at reading and can't grasp a lyrical meter so you are clueless. I wasn't being sarcastic. I was being awesome. You fucking racist. |
^^Lol calm down..can we get some more votes in here please will return the favor when i get a chance
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Oh shut up, dude. I totally, completely "waxed" your ass.
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Voted For: Sick ILL Cell.
ehh...landslide Sick you had real good shit at the beginning...kinda fell off in the middle but you got it back...i like your first line shit was sick...the third line too...awesome if it was really a key nice verse Zachy...you wrote a paragraph...it was decent...im not feeding into your racist bullshit because i know youre just doing it to try to get people pissed I just voted on quality of verses and you lose. |
Voted For: Sick ILL Cell.
OMFG.. this was ridiculous, MR. ZACHY DOOM- where's ya structure, this wasn't even a battle verse.. there was no opener were u even doin' bars? anyways, break-down basically is, no structure, no real wordplay, vocab?- no, punches sum but not effective.. SIC- breakdown- wild structure but better than Zachy, wordplay nice, multis- aight.. nice verse u didn't even have to try: you dropped nice overall.. and the vocab- great use and tie-in with punches.. keep up ur work.. lol VOTE: SIC , nice drop |
Voted For: Sick ILL Cell.
Zach had a nice lil style.... but couldn't compare to Cell's hard punches, and metaphors... Zach had barely any real good punches, and most came weak..... Cell had sum weak one also, but ripped Zach up.... oh yeah and Zach u whillin, I'll bust ya ass, racist ass mutha fucka.... if u haven't noticed only grandpas and ignorant people are racist..... |
Voted For: Sick ILL Cell.
u had good punchlines and really good flow man this one's urs |
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