Lyriclesolja vs saaran
 

Battle Rules:

8-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Blind Spit

Minimum posts to vote: 75

Check in by: 08-15-04 at 12:14 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 11:45 PM.

saaran has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 11:46 PM.

Yo dis cat wantin to battle the sickest,
bitch ima solja my rhymes are relentless,
to you and ya crew those wannabe bitches,
you couldent win this battle if you put your hands togeather and prayed to the lord,
cause im liable to lay you on the floor,
and stranggle you with the microphone cord,
and make you choke you fake you wannabe dope,
you cant think straight like when you masterbate cant get rid of ya soap,
by the third line I spit you lost all hope,
you a fake mcee that wont win agenst me cause you cant cope.

bars like drunk tanks, imprisoned when blasted
not a soulja by choice, you were lyrcally drafted
your verse is sweet, yalike sugar easily disolved
my verses come hollowtipped, boom, problem solved
your body and your sould, diffrent trips both departed
yeah your sig makes sense, and if you were retarted
kids slow to rap, so i by pass like flags wit checkers
your a lightwieght,and your afraid to show your record
victims and you common, bust and put you under like another
lyrically killed a soulja, send a criply folded flag to your mother

Uppin dis shit...

up biatches

Voted For: saaran

im gon have 2 vote 4 saaran...he just had better an more personals...

hit me up with some votes on da prodigy vs manipulation an da prodigy vs dustyblunted

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Lyriclesolja took this with better structure and punches. His style was a little off though, as in the beginning he spit 3 lines then tried to switch the rhyme, instead of the traditional 2 or 4 lines then switch. But this battle was actually pretty close. Good battle you 2.
Vote - Lyirclesolja

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thats what structre is you retard how did he hav ebette
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uppin for this one righ huh yeah yah

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Voted For: saaran

saaran wins this battle bcuz of his multies even tho punches win battles for me but they're really werent any in this battle
so im gonna give it to saaran for multies and structure
solja's lines were kind of forced it seemed like n didnt rhyme as well
holla at me wit honest votes
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uppin for votes

Voted For: saaran

props to both battlers, good entertain ment, but here's the verdict.
both verses here were neck and neck in terms of lyrical punch. but what i noticed was that lyricle's verse lacked personals, and it started out in self glorification style. And the disses were very general, which nearly screams pre-writ. so for that reason lyricle lost this one.

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Voted For: saaran

wow....saaran took this...no hate, i return HONEST votes...he had better wordplay, better structure, elevated rhymes...this wasnt a one-sided battle tho...solja had a nice flow, but it was too simple...elevate, and become more creative...


aiyo...solja, sry man, but i return HONEST votes...he got u

drop votes on the below battles=returned HONEST votes

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Voted For: saaran


Yo dis cat wantin to battle the sickest,
bitch ima solja my rhymes are relentless,
to you and ya crew those wannabe bitches,
5/10
you couldent win this battle if you put your hands togeather and prayed to the lord,
cause im liable to lay you on the floor,
5/10
and stranggle you with the microphone cord,
and make you choke you fake you wannabe dope,
you cant think straight like when you masterbate cant get rid of ya soap,
5/10
by the third line I spit you lost all hope,
you a fake mcee that wont win agenst me cause you cant cope.
4/10

Your punches were simple wordplay was basic and ya complexity was a lil iffy could use better structure and elevate more

bars like drunk tanks, imprisoned when blasted
not a soulja by choice, you were lyrcally drafted
6/10
your verse is sweet, yalike sugar easily disolved
my verses come hollowtipped, boom, problem solved
6/10
your body and your sould, diffrent trips both departed
yeah your sig makes sense, and if you were retarted
5/10
kids slow to rap, so i by pass like flags wit checkers
your a lightwieght,and your afraid to show your record
5/10
victims and you common, bust and put you under like another
lyrically killed a soulja, send a criply folded flag to your mother
5/10

Punches came off soft and ya wordplay was ok ya complexity was on point and ya structure was on point No personals from both of u but this was a one sided battle