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Desipher 08-15-04 09:49 AM

Da Prodigy vs MaNiPuLaTiOn
 
Battle Rules:

unlimited
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-15-04 at 10:19 AM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

System 08-15-04 09:51 AM

Da Prodigy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 09:51 AM.

System 08-15-04 09:57 AM

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 09:57 AM.

Desipher 08-15-04 10:02 AM

A jail love story and he’s keeping-my-Bars-Close....N u still couldn’t “Ride The Beat”…if u were Spittin-At-Car-Shows

Wants some “fresh meat”(beef)…so im shippin-up-cart-loads N like “retarded cashiers”….he’s proud of "RIPPIN"-BARCODES*..
Manipulation verse and my verse never endin-mixed-up … n U’d think I got em “choked in the country”…Cuz I got him on them-HIC-UPS
My words “scoop kids”….cuz im commin n “I-Spit-Cups”… n Ima call this kid a “penny”….the way He never GETTIN-PICCED-UP**

This battle is “waste of life”….like me “Blastin homos”…. N They way I pop ya LID(fitted) bacc….u’d think Im “Master of Soda”
Its like a dave nottie thread….endin with some funny photos…Flip the “d upside down” for trueth…to see you Master Yoga*

Heavy arsenals…got me Shipping tons of guns….N U Tryna grasp some skills….is like “gripping-Sons-Of-Nuns”**

I kill this kid quicker…than a kid with Summer Funds…. N u’d think im a “college professor”….cuz this is Ripping 1-0-1*

It’s a no brainer man….U can say ur Seein Feinds….
n Just call me “little Debbie”…cuz I got “40 ways To get U-CREAMED”

I take on individuals….n then-Maybe-teams….
N I sleep n nibble “maple leafs”….cuz I Eat-CANADIAN-DREAMS!**

This battle is a race…I have no need to talk shit….cuz when I “ran down my path”….i saw how this kidhad walked his...

Like a “car with no suspension”…again ya verse it got “me shock less”…Ima make ya career “end up as short”….as your DROP-DOWN-BOXES
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MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-15-04 10:08 AM

this guy mus be "high"...he been taking extasy pills...
if u woz wearing my pants..u still wudnt "pack frills"..(thrills)
taking his name off another prodigy on this site..
i guess wit brains like that...i can see why u bite..
you wudnt know "hype"...if you woz outta breath..*
this guy under "stress"...no wonder he bends for cats..**
couldnt "spill sickness"..masacaring with baseball bats
if i press this guys "switch"..he still wudnt see "light"..
u rhyme worse than stevie wonder..at fukin night!.
fuck it i "disspose" u freestyle...u rottin on a compost pile..
like a cracked "tile"...u faker than stories of "the nile"...


*hype as in "hyperventilating" (out of breath)
**stress...meanin he like wood, under stress thas why he "bends"...

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-15-04 10:10 AM

smellin pre-written lmfao
ok,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,upp.

Desipher 08-15-04 10:18 AM

dont think so buddy....uppin

Desipher 08-15-04 03:11 PM

uppin

Desipher 08-15-04 07:44 PM

uppin

Desipher 08-16-04 08:21 AM

uppin

Desipher 08-16-04 01:27 PM

uppin

Desipher 08-16-04 07:48 PM

uppin this battle lets get some votes

Desipher 08-17-04 10:43 AM

uppin

Desipher 08-17-04 03:23 PM

uppin

~Luciano~ 08-17-04 03:33 PM

Voted For: Da Prodigy


A jail love story and he’s keeping-my-Bars-Close....N u still couldn’t “Ride The Beat”…if u were Spittin-At-Car-Shows
6/10
Wants some “fresh meat”(beef)…so im shippin-up-cart-loads N like “retarded cashiers”….he’s proud of "RIPPIN"-BARCODES*..
Manipulation verse and my verse never endin-mixed-up … n U’d think I got em “choked in the country”…Cuz I got him on them-HIC-UPS
7/10
My words “scoop kids”….cuz im commin n “I-Spit-Cups”… n Ima call this kid a “penny”….the way He never GETTIN-PICCED-UP**
7/10
This battle is “waste of life”….like me “Blastin homos”…. N They way I pop ya LID(fitted) bacc….u’d think Im “Master of Soda”
Its like a dave nottie thread….endin with some funny photos…Flip the “d upside down” for trueth…to see you Master Yoga*
7/10
Heavy arsenals…got me Shipping tons of guns….N U Tryna grasp some skills….is like “gripping-Sons-Of-Nuns”**

I kill this kid quicker…than a kid with Summer Funds…. N u’d think im a “college professor”….cuz this is Ripping 1-0-1*
6/10
It’s a no brainer man….U can say ur Seein Feinds….
n Just call me “little Debbie”…cuz I got “40 ways To get U-CREAMED”
6/10
I take on individuals….n then-Maybe-teams….
N I sleep n nibble “maple leafs”….cuz I Eat-CANADIAN-DREAMS!**
6/10
This battle is a race…I have no need to talk shit….cuz when I “ran down my path”….i saw how this kidhad walked his...

Like a “car with no suspension”…again ya verse it got “me shock less”…Ima make ya career “end up as short”….as your DROP-DOWN-BOXES
.7/10


this guy mus be "high"...he been taking extasy pills...
if u woz wearing my pants..u still wudnt "pack frills"..(thrills)
6/10
taking his name off another prodigy on this site..
i guess wit brains like that...i can see why u bite..
6/10
you wudnt know "hype"...if you woz outta breath..*
this guy under "stress"...no wonder he bends for cats..**
5/10
couldnt "spill sickness"..masacaring with baseball bats
if i press this guys "switch"..he still wudnt see "light"..
u rhyme worse than stevie wonder..at fukin night!.
fuck it i "disspose" u freestyle...u rottin on a compost pile..
like a cracked "tile"...u faker than stories of "the nile"...
7/10

Came down 2 harder punches and overall better wordplay which went 2 Prodigy
manipulation u had good punches but there were all played and dull
u can elevate jus a lil bit ma

Desipher 08-17-04 08:30 PM

uppin this

fluidmoon 08-17-04 09:22 PM

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

nice verse, i'd vote but i think your in Genius???

fluidmoon 08-17-04 09:24 PM

shit, i pressed the wrong button..................

fluidmoon 08-17-04 09:36 PM

nevermind, my vote counts, you not in genius, in fact i got you mixed up with another gurl,ok:
manipulation: your verse had nice flow, and structure, i liked your punches they were strong, i liked your wordplay as well and the opening lines, you had some funny lines in there as well, so you got my vote for the overall stronger verse, goo djob

Desipher 08-19-04 12:39 AM

uppin

Desipher 08-19-04 03:16 PM

uppin from some experieced voters

Desipher 08-20-04 12:53 PM

uppin

Desipher 08-27-04 11:12 AM

uppin

MaNiPuLaTiOn 09-03-04 08:25 AM

banned for cheating eh??????.................jus as i expected....

the wins mine then.i`ll tell strobe.......

keen2B 09-03-04 09:03 AM

Voted For: Da Prodigy

desipier took this
-longer and better kept the flow
-better punches(sons of nuns)
7/10

keen2B 09-03-04 09:06 AM

manipulation check out my rap on open mike it was the one i was goina spit agaisnt u but ran out of time im a slow wrighta
its called the rap that never was check it out and holla bck

SoLe 09-03-04 09:22 AM

Voted For: Da Prodigy

manipulation......

good overall verse u had some weak vocab tho....ur flo and structure were ok.....didnt have any real hard punches or nice metaphores.....ur verse was pretty basic...neither verse showed ne signs of multies.....ur verse lacked creativity....everything was original kinda made me tired after readin it.......

Desipher......

your verse wasnt much better....u had better vocab and u stayed on point despite the length of you verse...you had some nice punches but some didnt really make much sence.....the stretched style wont really get you ne wear in you....it makes it sound bad when u read it and the voters dont like that...your verse was structured poorly it looks almost as if you bit it.....but besides that i think you took this battle simply based on punches and vocab....my vote Vote:desipher
Sole*


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