intensify effect vs optimized
 

defult rules 10 lines do or die SON!!! do or DIE!!

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Check in by: 08-16-04 at 12:10 AM

Must drop verse in 600 minutes after check in.

haha this will be a snap


so dont front on me now

optimized has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 05:47 PM.

come on kid im ready check-in........................

I.E dont wanna try me
cuz u wont fit the W like shaq shoe size
when i attact u'll die
its only fair i'll bring u a castket in exchange for u'r blue-eyes
when i shot peoples should duck
cause when i bust them slug's the shells will fit ya girls D-cup
if u bet me then u seen luck
because this aint going right like left handed pitcher
ya verse will be soft and ya dick hard
because why put pussys in a male rap-board
i know u like girls but rather have boys
and my verse will make more nose then a baby-toy

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 08:14 PM.

why do u set up battles without the person u battling knowing???

but whatever since u wanna go ahead and set it up i will go ahead and drop clown....

u wont get pass me this time, check how im flowing
u'r skills un-notice, like seting this up without me knowing
why battle when you rhymes are out of perportion
optimized a living reason why more people should be supportin abortion
look,
how hes tryna spit dirty, but yet hes leavin me dirtless
His chance of havin skill is like Hitler doing community service
Everyones knows you got nothing, and i dont think they was talkin bout ya sig,
Because your lines went out of style, about the same time as-big.... *when he died*
don't fuck with me when each bar u spit is like commiting suicide
u'r votes section will be blank like "drive-by" "widout da ride
dog, its like a curse the way i spit a verse and set u in a hearst
and have you stressin u've been fuck like a prostitute in a church

BANG-BANG-EARLy...........

dont ever set up another battle without me knowing.....
only,
i will if its only need it U clown ass bitch........

Voted For: intensify effect

intensify effect won this easily. He came with better structure, harder punches, and some good wordplay. Optimized didn't really have much to his verse, it was quite simple. But with some practice you'll get better man...
Vote - intensify effect

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Voted For: intensify effect

Okay Itwas A 10 LINE BATTLE n Effect Went Over The Limit, But His Verse Was Better Structured n He Connected The Bars Alot Better...
Couldda Hit Harder With The Punches But It Was A Nice Verse

Optimized, You Need 2 Elevate Ya Vocab n Try Diffrent Styles n Addin Humour To Ya Rhymes.....

Nice Battle Tho, Keep Em Comin My Homeboiyz..

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Voted For: intensify effect

I GOTS TO GO WITH I E WITH DIS ONE

HE HAD NICE DATS WHAT WON ME OVA
AND DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD
WORDPLAY I LIKE THAT BAR THAT STARTS WITH "DONT FUCK"

OP

U HAD GOOD FLOW BUT WORK ON DEM PUNCHES AND YO WORDPLAYS

BUT OTHER THAN THAT NICE SPIT

OP IF U WORK ON DEM PUNCHES U'LL GET BETTA

YO I E RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN DA SIG MAYNE

Voted For: intensify effect

optimize...this verse was not bad but more bad then good...
flow kinda good but punches were not...u had metas but i didnt like them...pick up ur content n u should do betta...no hate...

I.E....
i c ur doing better...i liked tha word play on dat first bar...
tha one about abortion is played but u brought it original so i was feelin that...but tha rest was kinda off tho it has a good flow...its like it rhymes n sounds good but it just aint hittin as hard as u could. so bring it!

i.e. got this for flow, content n punches...

advice::u both should've came out harder...
FUCK OPTIMIZED...FUCK I.E....IM OUT!
PEACE...

^^^ thanks..............

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Voted For: intensify effect

both verses were good but effects stood out.....he took all cats flow was good structure was tyte....wasnt too predictable his verse made me laugh and it also made me think i like the he came wit good solid punches.....and pretty much just came harder then optimized in every aspect of the battle....much props to both battlers but my overall vote goes to.........

Vote: Intensify effect

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