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Soulless vs Kid Charlemagne
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding No Bullshit votes Goodluck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-15-04 at 06:04 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Kid Charlemagne has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 05:37 PM.
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Soulless has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 05:38 PM.
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Ok check it,
I'll 'insert my name' wherever you want boi...... even on your autopsy form*... I'll leave you 'know-less'(no less) as if you were Einstein caught in an icestorm... Part of the council I never knew they let in ppl that wack... But maybe its cause they think Avanish will never be back**... I guess I am the source of life,if you consider me 'sunned'***... And if your skill had to match your avy....you'd simply have none!***... K theres my drop. I usually dont explain my shit bu here it goes: *-His sig says-'wins'-in insert your name here. **-Avanish is a member who left the site who was on The Council (a crew),which is in his sig. ***-His skill also says he'll leave people 'sonned',and 'sunned' means The Sun. ****-He doesnt have an avatar. |
~~had this verse done for like 20 min….. just ate…*blah bah*.~~
--- Explainations * his sig says fuck all u hater or some shit like that… ** DaTruth beat him and gave him the record or 0-1 *** look how he puts numbers after all of his bars…. Your record is 0-1...shit im already doubting-this-dude…. Why u say “fuck the haters” when man no ones even hatin-on-you!!!!* …Charlemagne…your names even to damn long-to-flow U ain’t sick-no-more…Allergy season was a month-ago!!! you poutin-about, …when Da truth knocked-you -out..** Ya wack just like ya bar length and how u count-it-out!!!!!*** Sonned!!! |
um i dont really understand where you got the pouting part from but whatever...
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well in ya last battle u put numbers after your bars...
soo.... considerin that... vote it up........ drop a link.... |
ummm....
[quote]I'll leave you 'know-less'(no less) as if you were Einstein caught in an icestorm...[quote] how would Einstien..... know less...or have no less if he was in a ICE STORM... what would a ice storm have to do with my knowledgeor what i have.. lol herb... dont try to sway |
what the fuck does that have to do with me pouting?lmfao.
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it has to do with u swayin............................
not poutin...... ...well to prove my verse right... ur poutin rihgt now.... w/e just let the people vote...... |
pouting? do you even know what the word means? Bust a dictionary homeboiy cause u using it at wrong times.Ill give u the right definition of Pouting right here:
pout1 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (pout) v. pout·ed, pout·ing, pouts v. intr. To exhibit displeasure or disappointment; sulk. To protrude the lips in an expression of displeasure or sulkiness. To project or protrude. Am i doing any of those right now? rofl. |
To exhibit displeasure or disappointment; sulk.
^ is that not what you are doin right now.... ...smh...i hope your not thinkin your more educated than me... because your fightin a losing battle.........."homeboiy"< rofl.... ----chill out let the people vote.....---- |
whatever I aint starting beef,*hands out hand so you can shake it then move on*.
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Voted For: Soulless
even tho this isnt the best ive seen from him Soulless he still gets my verse for just being that much better. kid, work on the punches (reall weak) but the personals are ok. i think what happened is that you tried to get the personals in there and if just left your punches lifeless. Soul, just a lil bit weak but it was still Soulless material, funny.opener was pretty damn close to bein supa weak tho. no hate. return the favor. (links in tha sig) |
*** ain't for shore**...(shakin your hand....lol)..
it just makes me mad when people say somthin to disprove their verse.... right after the person drops... ---aint no more postin by us------ |
Voted For: Soulless
ok: soulless~ya verse was good,nice punches and personals, ya flow was good and structure, i think you had the stronger overall verse here,nice name diss and opener....good job charlemagne~ya verse was good too, you had some punches in there as well and ya flow and structure was good this time,but i don't think ya punches were a sstrong as soulless".. VOTE:soulless |
uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, drop a link
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Voted For: Soulless
As few punches as there were in this battle, Soulless' were harder and connected, I was feelin' that allergy season line. Chrlemagne, just elevate bro, you need some practice...Einstein caught in an ice storm? What??? No hate though... Vote - Soulless Return the favor w/ an HONEST vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142280 |
uppin....
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This was feedback posted for Soulless
tight battle both of you.
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uppin.. lets close this!!!!
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Voted For: Kid Charlemagne
Ha..Lmao..Nyce Drop From Charm..that last bar was pretty nice made me laugh.. Punches- Charm.. Personals- Charm.. Werdplay- Charm (had 1 weak one..but had it..) Flow- Both Were Good.. Complex- Charm.. Vote- Charm.. Additional..Soulless That Was An Ok Verswe, But It Be Better If You Made It More Complex, Some Of The Punches Seemed Simple.. |
Voted For: Soulless
both of you were iight and you both came close on this battle ima give this to Soulless for a better verse overall with better lines. i felt that he had better punches and his personals were good i also liked his flow and structure. Kid, your was iight but improve more on your punches vote? Soulless please vote in this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142877 |
Voted For: Kid Charlemagne
to son someone, is to treat them with the tough hand, 0f a father. discipline them like they are your son, or punk them like a father would do a son, reduce them to the level of your son, because they are too scared not to do what you say. IT's basically punking someone, or making them look stupid. that's why many cats say, only cat that can son me is my pops. lesson learned. charle-good opener diss, nice flip, good persy. kinda left in the dark on the second one though. this battle came to, none of you had raw material on each other, so you had to go with small stuff, that didn't make much difference in terms of a hard diss. both of these verses needed help. but i felt charle's verse more because of the start. soulless, came out too friendly on the second line i think, i get what you were trying to say, but it just sounded to friendly for a battle. good persy usage though. |
uppin for votes...
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Voted For: Kid Charlemagne
soulless that was weak no good punches or disses but a decent flow and strcture still you need to work on vocab 3/10 kid this was good nice flow and vocab was decent the avay line was slick good disses overall nice 5/10 |
makus vote was hate cuz i am merkin him in our battle..........
uppin.. for honest votes ^^all my votes are from good textcees not wack newbs..... |
Voted For: Soulless
this was a wack battle pesonals soulless multies soulless punches soulless flow soulless vocab soulless wordplay soulless structure niether creativity soulless overall soulless |
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