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**FLEx** vs ¥D's Money¥
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 lines Max. No Recycling No Biting no crewvotes no plagarism lets do it Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-15-04 at 11:22 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. Flex DQ'ed for PMing for votes Quote:
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**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 10:40 PM.
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¥D's Money¥ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 10:54 PM.
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White boi u commin at me
u might fuck around and get hung in a tree i spit dat real shit cause i got that flow if ya don't believe me den ask yo ho cause i'm from da VA where dem niggaz dont play hit da wrong punch line and get hit wit da Ak |
Yo Money,
You'll be begging for the coin, to fill your jagged can of coke// cuz your pockets got holes, just like a smokers throat// ill take the horn of a goat, stab your little sister// until she pulls a Happy Gilmour and calls me MISTA-MISTA// like your moms tits and triggars im all about the squeeze// and like your name,your grammar mark is D's,// when i spit, i foam , like hoof and mouth disease// bitch please, I respect the words you be tryin' Ill take you to the zoo, cuz bitch you be lyin'// (lion) |
Voted For: ¥D's Money¥
I gotta give this one to D he had the Ak and play do it up boy |
Look dog you don't know me
i was hopin you would spit back some shit that might shake my homie yo fuckin rhymes are weak like some bad reefer maybe if ya good enough i'll be yo teacher this ain't no lil kid shit so fuck tha zoo u need to stay white and go to school |
wtf? why you spitten again, you stupid fag.......one verse, u trying to get more votes?
u know i killed this fucking battle so fuck off already If you wann vote for this vote begger, then don't even vote at all |
dont get mad u lil bitch
or u will fuck around and be dead in a ditch u lil puss, i'm bout to blow u away like a fart i am da yungest in charge so u take dat shit to heart!!! |
hey yo Flex chill out spit another verse son do it up
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Yo flex i should of known u was a lil bitch at tha start
you wanted to battle and i took that shit ta heart you rhymes are weak like a flat ass if you man enough den spit back dis is like football watch out for dat trap |
alright, yo
i aint spitting again, and i aint hatin', im jst gunna tell you straight up your rhymes are shit, you havent had a good one yet, so before you spit again...... and emabarase your self, just fucking let the people vote. **FLEx** PS. you only got one vote cuz of your one Virginia friend..........Nobodies that stupid you think we couldn't tell. |
well he is tellin tha truth bitch don't hate congradulate
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Voted For: **FLEx**
whack battle. flex got this one for better punches and more creativity. both of yall need to work on your vocab and punches still tho. flex had good structure money had horrible structure and flow (7 syallables in a line wont cut it buddy) but both of yall got a lil elevatin to do. flex u r getting better tho. -1- |
oh and just so yall know the ONLY THING WE VOTERS CAN SEE BEFORE WE VOTE, IS THE ORIGINAL VERSE. SO ITS NO USE TO DO ALL THAT TALKING AFTER YOU DROPPED!!!!
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This was feedback posted for **FLEx**
omg flex took this battle easily....well i vote flex fo a WAY better verse..
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Voted For: ¥D's Money¥
both were kinda weak, BUT u did stay focused on the "battle" and landed more punches... both could use a little improvement but u got my vote jus rewiew a few battles of mine and vote on them shits so I can close em' aight 1 |
also phantom is right stop bickerin like lil bitches let the votes show whats up damn and 1 mo thang Money u need 2 drop more than 6 lines and show ur potential
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Voted For: **FLEx**
ok money no punches or good disses no nothing structure us trash and flow needs work 1/10 flex also weak punches but better then his ok ender it was funny to read good opener 2 nice flow your struture is also good 4/10 |
Voted For: **FLEx**
Flex wins this cuz the other guys verse was basic garbage everything about it was messed up he needs to elevate alot Flex wins all catergories except worst flow. punches were a lil weak tho holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142873 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142845 |
Voted For: **FLEx**
Uh, at least you attempted punches and whatnot. The other guy didn't. Yours also had a better flow, and structure. This battle was pretty weak, but you definitely came harder. V/ Flex |
Voted For: **FLEx**
bettah content bettah structure and nice flow aight wordplay for flex but d's you need some work i think you should try the tutorials and try not to talk about your self and that just attack your opponent... come with metahs and try multis work on more even lines it helps flow no hate guys but vote tah flex stay up stay active VOTE often .... |
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