emcee_shadow vs Twizted
 

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6 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Check in by: 08-18-04 at 11:45 PM

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Twizted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 11:51 PM.

Don't let your mouth write a check that that ass can't cash,
Don't let that finger pull the trigger and that ass get blast,
Don't let them niggas pump your nuts and now you thinking you bad,
Don't let me run up on yo ass and you end up in the past,

I know this nigga and he always be talking that bullshit,
But little do he know he gon suffer a wig split,
Like fucking with the realest the illest will fucking kill him,
A straight up headbuster and also a real nigga,
There's gon be consequences so niggas just run in here,
I'm unloading the tone and popping an extra clip,
A bitch nigga talking is something I can't stand,
Or every last will pick up the mess that's gonna land,

emcee_shadow has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 03:40 AM.

it's almost vicious how i inflikt it kid in a grip and twist it apon the unTWIZTED/i'll pick it up and spit it, just a misfit in the wrong distrikt with his a mic n slit wrists/
so inferious it's mysterious like me havin sex wit gurl on her periods/ putin the fear in kids this michael jackson is as queer
as he spits/
u wanna debate, im hate, here to eliminate your fate like service on a dinner plate/ just to participate this is real hip hop you couldn't live one day/
even if it came down to spitten free's, u couldn't be sik if i gave you a disease/ katz like that extras cheese and they're vitamin s,t and d's/
so while we all laugh at this singer, point fingers/ i hope u had great fun, hun, with your fake gun and plastic trigger/

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aiiight thats was pretty good i guess but why did u come up n call me "hun" in ur shit i aint ur wife or nethin dude u got lots to learn but lets see wat everyone thinks of who won

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This was feedback posted for emcee_shadow
 

OHHHH FUCKKKKKKKK, dope drop bro.......dope drop...

yo hun
 

hahahaha don't cry baby, all i could smell was that pussy between ur legs hun.
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Voted For: emcee_shadow

week but better than his so ima go ahead and vote yrs ieght

invader ur a dick rider get ur shit off here u chinsy bitch

Invader......... battle me then homeboy i'm weak, any time brotha

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Voted For: emcee_shadow

Vote: emcee shadow

Lyrics: shadow on anotha level
Structure: twwizted took it just on structure cos his flow was easier to follo and understand
Multies: shadow took it here he had quite a few and J-DOt had none
Wordplay: draw
Punches: twizted took it with punchlines

Overall: Emcee shadow took it with multies as his flow was more intellectual rather than jus hittin' hard.

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Peace.

This was feedback posted for emcee_shadow
 

Twizted: Weak verse, first four lines where weak as hell, not fun to read. Some didn't even ryhme and I don't dig people who say nigga nigga nigga 24/7 because they can't come up with decent verses.

Emcee Shadow: Awesome man, great verse, great to read. Punches where solid as bolders.

No vote, just feed. If I wasn't in Shadows crew I'd vote him straight out...

Voted For: Twizted

yo man ima have ta go wit twizted i mean his ryhmes was iight his flow was tight n punch lines was good

Voted For: emcee_shadow

lol wha the hell is the other guy doing hes wack haha punches es and flow to the other guy metas no one and vocab white won him the battle es
v/E.s
return the favour in the battle against dapunchlineking thanks peace its in my sig

Voted For: emcee_shadow

tons more punches and everything else word play , word choice was better, hot drop ,ha had me laughin at some points

twizted i liked you stuff but it didnt all rhyme but yea jus keep workin peaceout

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Voted For: emcee_shadow

emcee_shadow
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Twizted
Punches were good too not as hard as emcee_shadow's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...