Twizted vs YuNg_GuN
 

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YuNg_GuN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 05:47 AM.

Twizted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 05:49 AM.

As I slip into the back of my mind,
and thinkin of gettin caught man how could I do the time,
The crime is a murder heard you fuckin with my nig,
The magnum's gonna serve ya, bitch I'm fixin to split your wig,
I'm thinkin out ways to get lose without a trace,
You see without a pistol man they do not have a case,
Erasin Yung gun wait until ya leave the house,
Walkin around ya corner ride by and takin you out,
the box on the blocks police ride up on the scene,
witnesses saw the shots and I know they heard you scream,
Redeem me the testimonies would not even last,
In court because everybody they saw wore a mask,
The blast from the gun was the hollow point tips,
the kind that leave you dead in a damn perfect hit,
I trips off you fool tryin me on the for realla,
You fuckin with a pistol packin, bitch smackin killa,

twizted you life rhymes skilzz and dick is so fucked up
are you done wit mens dick gettin all sucked up
you gonna get some sores and bruises challenging me
you wont survive you see its jus to hard to fuckin beat me
beware of my mutha fuckin greay ass skillz thati spillz
i give men the fist whole and the pistol slug
while i give bitches the best of the best fuckin thrillz
nuthin else to say to you except thet you wont get thru
son quit and you wont die kid face it bitch you jus blew

herse my come back

you aint gonna do shit cuz when i make fun of you
you jus gonna sit ther and take it like a little fag
nigga fuck you dont even make a come back jack
dont fuck wit me and go back to suckin and holdin nutsacks
i aint got no grudges cuz you aint worht it bitch
go home and go to your mommy and be a little snitch

aiight u put ur shit down now lets see wat tha peeps think

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u wanna do a come back aiight ill bring in a come back here it goes

Testin the clan just to see if you can get enough,
You's a foolish man I'll be damned if we don't fuck you up,
So whassup with your posse with your fuckin game punk,
Fuckin with these hitmen you gonna get your ass dumped,
Pop the trunk, get your pump, let's see what you made of,
Watch me kill a bitch with a .38 bullet slug,
Sell your drugs I don't care if you a dope dealer,
Best pack a pistol bitch cause I'm a killer,

Ur done boy just face it ur threw don comeback wit another one haha

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uppin votes shit nice comeback yo man i take back wut i said in the PM shit i jus wanted to battle so bad yo you have some skill would you like to join our crew
Lyrical Masterminds

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Voted For: YuNg_GuN

gota give this 2 young gun..he had better punches an better personals

thanx uppin

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Voted For: YuNg_GuN

I think Yungs got this..... his Flow was much better... i liked his structure.... he had some ok word play.... but i think Yung took this one!

Voted For: Twizted

young no flow pucnches or disses at all no vocab but a ok strcture 2/10
twiizted no punches flow was ok strture was kinda streched ok disses but they was worded bad and your vocab also needs help but not as much as his 3/10
this was a weak battle but twi had better disses and that got him the vote

Voted For: Twizted

well this battle was pretty weak both spits looked like verses that would b on a single not a battle. but twizted gets this because his overall flow was better. Yung gun's flow as too basic. There wasnt much else to judge on this except structure n twizted's was better
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uppin

Voted For: Twizted

give it 2 TWIZTED his flow
was better ya had da same
structure but i felt Twizted's
a lil more Yung's didn't make
much sense 2 me
V/Twizted
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Voted For: Twizted

hahah damn, ima go wit twiztid, im just not feelin yung guns style, doesent even flow that good, at least twiztid can spit some gangsta shit

Voted For: Twizted

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Twis. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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Voted For: Twizted

both came weak.... twisted had more punches not that they hit harder he just had more.... there were no multis....but twisted took metas....yung ur verse would of been str8 if u wrote more.... vote twisted...... \/\/ drop honest vote return the favor