Ice Pick vs s0ldier
 

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6 -10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
usual rules

Minimum posts to vote: 120

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 11:44 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

as soon as you spit ill check in and ill check in when ever the fuck i want

OK DUDE

FUCK YOU

I AINT EVEN GONNA BATTLE YOUR FAGGOT ASS

I aint gonna drop and check in and have you DUCK, so either check in in 5 minutes
or i decline this battle,

dude ur a newb im not gonna duck ill check in when u spit cause im not waisting my fucking time waiting for your dumb ass

you know what fine ill check in now but i get 30 minuets after you spit not that i will need that long

dude the rules are preset you fuckin goat

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 11:44 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

those are the FUCKIN RULES

check in or dont or shut the FUCK UP

OK DUDE

YOU HAVNT ACCPETD YET

CLICK THE I ACCEPT BUTTON AT THE TOP OF THE THREAD

YOU HAVE 4 minutes until i decline

s0ldier has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 11:21 AM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 11:25 AM.

Fuck "Bombz" soldier , i just "Need a Knife" to "Tear-A-Wrist(terrorist)"
I'll Cut ya "Tombstone in Half" so U and ya Alias can "Share-the-R.I.P"
U'd wouldnt "Equal One Drop of My Saliva" even if ya had a "Pair-of-SPITS
"Petting Black Dogs" is the only way you'll ever get to "Touch-a-Bitch"
What-a-Prick, make like ya "Selling Bread" and "Deal-Dough"(dildo) like Rubber-Dicks
Why are U Here? How'd U Get your Name? I guess ya flow aint ready for war like ya name PRICK
Stop ya Talking-Pleas(e), Soldier make like "Insect Repellent"..get "OFF-of-Deez"
by" Right Clicking on my Name's" the only way "Ur BOXING-ME"
Fuck this Whore-Anal, shouldnt have "Fucking Called Me Out" like "Porn-Pay-Phones"
You Couldnt "Blow Past Me" if you "Sliced Peaceful Nations" and "TORE-N.A.T.O"(tornado)

This herb battles newbs to be appreciated he’s overrated ill make sure by the end of this battle he’ll be more then hated/
most commonly stated he’s never congratulated cause defeating noobs is a hollow victory find himself wish he had never even challenged me I’ll make his ego degraded/

looking for an easy win but I told ya im a soljah you’re a folder so pack up and leave this place/
this is the point ill roll up my sleeves make this faggot start to believe then he’ll disappear without a trace/

don’t pick your head up im fed up if someone told you I was a newb then bitch you’ve been set up to lose/
this bitch has to pick and chose he’s similar to an alcoholic the way he fills the place with booze/(boos)

I’ll defeat this bitch in 8 and I know this is inconsiderate when I use such big words make his ass look like an illiterate man/
your verse will probably be a filler the way I murder emcee they call me a cereal killer let me drop the mic while I still can/

i posted my shit quick because theres a thunderstorm going on at my house so i wont be on for a while

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Voted For: s0ldier

v/soldier.. ice pick i didnt like the "Tor Na_To" that kinda junk.. u didnt have alota punches...
s0ldier.. had a lotta punches.. i mean it flowed good but now i understand that structure doesnt matter.. i read both out loud and s0ldiers was 4x better...

This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 

Vote:Ice pick took dis easy
Better vocab ,and wordplay,metas
soldier:Need better metas and wordplay...Im sure ive seen dat line about the alcholic nad the booze anyway Ice pick hands down

^^^^^vote dosent count u said minumim posts to vote is 120 and he has 22^^^^^

Voted For: Ice Pick

good spit by both of you guys.....ice pick had way better structure though, soldier you had a good verse but your lines were way stretched....punches are about equal id say so its really just the structure and flow that took this one

v/ice pick

please drop an honest vote on this battle as i have dropped one on yours

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Ill do this by LINES i liked, not just bars.

Ice Pick
Fuck "Bombz" soldier , i just "Need a Knife" to "Tear-A-Wrist(terrorist)"

Fuck this Whore-Anal, shouldnt have "Fucking Called Me Out" like "Porn-Pay-Phones"

You Couldnt "Blow Past Me" if you "Sliced Peaceful Nations" and "TORE-N.A.T.O"(tornado)

Nice Wordplay in those lines, liked those.

Soldier
this bitch has to pick and chose he’s similar to an alcoholic the way he fills the place with booze/(boos)

Thats it, but nice punch. Most of your shit was just multis and shit...so that made it gay...so...

v/Ice Pick

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Voted For: Ice Pick

damn...ice wins this by a longshot...came way harder with those punches and wordplay, flow was there most of tha time, but both verses seemed to be a little stretched in some parts...either way, ice pick gets tha win

Voted For: Ice Pick

ice pick took dis one...he had more punches...more energy and shit...

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Voted For: Ice Pick

This battle is one sided
Icepick: you had better punches and good personals and it was better than soldier in my opinion also you had some good lines nice verse overall good flow all flowed iight and nice strucutre

Solder: you had some ok punches and iight perosnals but ya structre was of and so was ya flow some was wack you need a lil elevating

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