MC RaBbIt vs BANG
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickridin
No Feedin



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 02:30 PM

Must drop verse in 100 minutes after check in.

MC RaBbIt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:52 PM.

BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:52 PM.

you dumn fukin herb acceptin a battle by me, you call yourself "bang",
you think you can rap, just coz you in a gang, but you can't, i'm gonna leave you to hang,
one of these days your just gonna have to admit,
that you've got a better chance of winning when you don't even spit,
i gave 100 minutes to drop, and thats still not enough time for your preparation,
you aint got a clue about battlin, you don't no what to do,you got no interpretation,
see, you acctually think you're a good emcee, but you can't make big words rhyme,
the only way you could go on-stage to rap, is if you learnt how to mime,
look at your record, isn't that a sign? obviously not, so i'm gonna have to brake your spine,
ok, now i think it's time for you to resign, coz you've got no talent, it's the end of the line.

Its probably been played but i had to do it.

"Everybody from the USA put ya hands up if you aint come to play(repeat)" Notice he didnt put his hands up.... Na LOL im fuckin wit you.

I been rippin open mics but im back with a vengance
Im hittin full contact so take bitch off the lesnse (Glasses)
Overseas tryin hard to rap like the best of U.S. (us)
keep if real playboy you not like the rest of U.S.
So dont come hard thinkin you really be testin U.S.
We been doing it far longer so dont think ahead of U.S.
Got a simple question to ask why you fuckin suck
is it you think you fast but you walk like a duck
Its just tha facts playboy you can smile you can cry
its that simple bitch you can ride you can die
Dont take me serious -this is a fuckin Game to you?
We'll see how serious when them missles aim and BANG at you
Cheerio

uppin for votes on this shit. good luck.

yea yea uppin for votes. This cat can not be serious.

lmfao at this bitch, least i don't have to rhyme US 4 times in a verse! lmfao! uppin for votes.. . .

Voted For: BANG

this wa san ok battle and also it was kinda close
ill give it too BANG for a better verse with better punches and personals but this was closebattle you had good structure and flow good verse

MC rabit: try harder dawg you juss need a lil elevating and work on ya punches


vote : BANG

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This was feedback posted for BANG
 

ummm dude you rhymed U.S with U.S 4 times....cheerio

exactly^^^^^^. uppin for votes. . . .will give honest opinion on your battles, just leave a link

uppin for votes. come on people vote on this shit.

This was feedback posted for BANG
 

I been rippin open mics but im back with a vengance
Im hittin full contact so take bitch off the lesnse (Glasses)
Overseas tryin hard to rap like the best of U.S. (us)
keep if real playboy you not like the rest of U.S.
So dont come hard thinkin you really be testin U.S.
We been doing it far longer so dont think ahead of U.S.

Fuckin hell man that was wack as fuck! You ryhmed for lines with US, if I wasn't in Rabbits crew I'd vote for him just for that reason man.

Got a simple question to ask why you fuckin suck
is it you think you fast but you walk like a duck
Its just tha facts playboy you can smile you can cry
its that simple bitch you can ride you can die
Dont take me serious -this is a fuckin Game to you?
We'll see how serious when them missles aim and BANG at you

Whoa now I wouldn't wanna be a duck. lol. Weak as well man.

Rabbit I liked your verse, you had some good punches in there and a better flow. But more importantly you didn't ryhme 4 lines with the same word.

I hate when cats talk about the end of a rhyme. To me that shows your lack of skill and intelligence. U.S. is compared to us as in a country na mean if you dont then whateva. uppin on them fagot ass bitches and if you think you got me then call me out and quit talkin shit.

uppin for votes on shit, come on vote vote vote !

will someone please vote on this bitch of a battle pleeeeeaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee

uppin for votes on this shitty battle, fukin vote pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee :gfy:

Voted For: MC RaBbIt

I vote for rabbit cos his lyrics were mo complicated and jus betta, his hit wud sound hectic when sum1 spits it. bang's verse was aight but jus average no bits were brers wud've been going ohhhhhhhh! neither really used personals it seemed to b mo bout rhyming and rabbit took it

thanks for the vote. uppin on this shit. . . . . .

uppin for votes

uppin for votes on this bitch

Dont mistake simpleness for creativity my people. If you actually read my flow you would see the personalls. uppin on this faggot ass bitch.

Voted For: BANG

Rabbit - you had bad structure, ok disses, np punches really, no personals either, vocab was off, rhyme scheme was ok, but basic.. - 5/10

Bang, your rhymes were better, a few punches were in there, your stucture was better, no real personals though, but in all you get 7/10

so bang you get my vote, retutn the favor with a drop in my thread will you..
heres the link.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143508

Voted For: MC RaBbIt

ok bang that u.s shit was whacked and your punches lacked the only good one was the lenses and you aaint word that right si it aint hit no flow and bad strture3/10
rabbit not much better but you had a few ok punches your flow is also too streched that mime shit was whacked it dont make sense you had good vocab while bang only had good vocab on the first bar 4/10

uppin for votes

uppin for votes so this gay battle can close.

Uppin on this shit aight. like i said before to confuse simplicity with creativity.

come on. votes on this so it can finally close. don't just sleep on this shit. VOTE !

Sure I will, I ain't scared ofyou dawg, callin me a cat, acting like your da man. Rabbit ripped you, no contest man. Just accept it...

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Bitches Bitches Bitches. Yall see how bitches like to talk and shit just cus I was giving my opinion. Now he mad cus he know i was right. Bitch ass hoe.

Stop talking shit man just battle me.

10 lines

All house rules

1 hr to spit after check in

uppin for votes so this bitch can close finally.

uppin for votes on this bitch...

Voted For: BANG

wack wack wack wack wack battle

mc-damm dog get off the simple shit...everything in your verse was generic..you had 2 big words in your whole verse man...you dont really put your shit together all that well...structure was ok...punches and personals were weak...you had 1 good line which was

one of these days your just gonna have to admit,
that you've got a better chance of winning when you don't even spit,

but agin that was played

BANG- first of all what the fuck were you thinkin namin yourself bang....that dont make sense whatsoever especially when you suck as much as you do...dude your whole verse was wack as fuck your 4 play meta on U.S. was ok...but dont change is from U.S. TO us..if your goin to try and rhyme 4 times cause that was stupid

best line you had was your closer and that was wack

V/MC for no reason really except he wasnt as wack as "BANG"

what the fuck i voted for MC.........not bang..........


Switched

ah ya dumb ass bitch. I can tell you a newb cus you cant even post right. uppin

uppin for votes on this gay ass battle.

Voted For: MC RaBbIt

aight mc rabbit? hint of 8 mile? hahah, but all is good, ya verse was better structured n had humouress puches where as bang was trynna hit hard, real close battle.....

structure was good on both verses, Rabbit Juss Had The Humour n Thats Always Important In My Opinnon, I Luv Homouress Well Worded Verses...

Nice Battlin, Both Need 2 Elevate n Up Ya Vocab, An Try Hittin With Harder More Personal Rhymes...

Nice Tho'
Good Lookin

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Voted For: MC RaBbIt

Battle was aight I think MC rabbit was a lil more consistent even though he needs to work on his structure a bit. The flow wasnt too bad, but it woulda been better if the syllales were better.

Bang i dunno bout the whole U.S thing I wasnt feelin it too much. Your structure was tight though, didnt feel ya metas too much either man. You a straight emcee though no beef or nuttin just you aint come that hard this battle.