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DRAG~ON vs emcee_shadow
Battle Rules:
CREW BATTLE 10 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 08-19-04 at 02:51 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 10:53 AM.
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n diss rap game u under me like u suppose ta
im like a glass u more like a coasta* following behind me n jocking my every move cant be mad dats wut a SHADOW suppose to do from da 'L'ittle 'I'ntelligence crew n now i see why cuz u wouldn't kno a "punch" line if it "hit" u n da eye callin yo self a EMCEE more like femcee 2 da rest thinkin u Phat more like obiese dawg look at ur breast wit a name like dat dey kno u casted off by my lime light dat u aint light or white dat yo ass is black as night so stay da fuck away from -[P-S-A]- 4 we -SMOKE- dat ass my -ALLIANCE- will put yo ass n a -POT- 2 boil 4 cookin class * just n case a coasta is under a glass 4 ur table |
yo hurry up n accept
n spit ya verse dawg damn vote on deez battles DRAG~ON VS ecko(crew battle) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463 thanx 1 |
emcee_shadow has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 03:34 AM.
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yo i'll battle your crew till they're black and blue, past confused in paragraph abuse/ smoke the pot about as much as you blow the cock, i'll leave you crack induced/
another tag-along, just for cock smokers alliance i'll pack the plague in your bong/ fags that 'Drag-On' leave while they bleed like your mom haven to use her rag as a thong/ it's as easy as one, two, let me show you/ i'll grow threw, and choke this pussy with his own philopium tubes/ it's risky to battle in a misty shadow/ diss me and i'll take your virginity for colladeral/ don't deny it, be silent, open your eyelids to they're widest/ i place a virus inside pupils till they find a loophole to your iris/ for all wraggety du-rags, village pimps and his other two fags/you get clogged and cleaned like the cottage cheese in your mom's maggity doosh bag/ so grasp what you still have left, cause money can't buy skill or respect/ i'll leave you barely kicken it like an aborted baby struggeling fer it's last gasp of breathe/ |
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thanx 4 ya vote i will
definatlly return da favor uppin 4 votes |
haha, this is serious right?
sorry if ma flo's to complex fer small mindz, haha try speedin up n read mine, this is weak fer real, need sum serious votes from sumone who knowz hiphop from they're own pinner diks, striaght up. one |
Voted For: emcee_shadow
nice nice well see whos up just lokking psa is already up 2-0 anyways so i wanna see this battle |
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^^strobe remove i meant to post feedback drag is in my crew take this vote away Removed |
yo we still uppin 4 votes
so give us a honest 1 ya |
Voted For: emcee_shadow
emcee_shadow-yo punches were good..they landed..nice flow..fix ur structure..too strech'd~out..nice wordplay DRAG~ON-don't space yo shit out..u had a some punches in there...and good structure tho.. Overall-emcee_shadow gets my vote..had a little~harder~punches than DRAG~ON.. |
I vote for EMCEE Shadow.. His verse was better to me,nice punces n the thong line was good to.
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yo we still uppin 4 sum honest
votes so vote post a link n we'll get bak at ur battles 1 |
cum on ya we still uppin
4 sum honest votes so cum n vote |
Voted For: emcee_shadow
Wow Mayn, Both Were Alittle Weak... Im Hoping This Was A Freestyle... But Lemmy Break It Down For Yaaaaa... Punches: ES... Wordplay: ES... Flow: ES... Opener: Drag... Closer: ES... Vote= Emcee Whatever (Forgot The Last Name)... Go Return The Favor By Checkin My Open Mic... Called "Ironies Battlefield"... .One. |
Voted For: emcee_shadow
village got this 1 fo sho...better punches that hit hard...and rhymes were tight...you structure was wack but u didnt strch ur lines like drag on...drag was focused on vilage's name that made his shit stretched and dat gave him a minus...cool battle.... |
fuck i misteked name not village but *emcee-shadow...my bad
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had me trippin there i was fina say
im fina get dat vote removed she trippin |
yo we still uppin 4 sum honest
votes ya so cum vote |
This was feedback posted for emcee_shadow
hahahahaha damn solid drop bro........you merked this cat
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Voted For: emcee_shadow
emcee shadow had a preety good flow, punches was ok .... creativeness was decent all around it wasnt a bad verse but could of def hit harder with punches 7.0 drag-on u had a decent flow punches was lack'in besides the costa but the rest wasnt effective... creativeness was ok but u could of focused alot more it seem like u sorda rushed it and aint put no effort in it... 6.0 |
Voted For: emcee_shadow
This goes to emcee shadow... nice punchlines...10/10 you have terrible structure and flow... 3/10 2/10 you had good eveything elts... dragon you had weak ass punches homes...2/10 structure and flow were good... 5/10 5/10 personals sucked...0/10... so emcee wins this... |
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