paramik vs e-dubz
 

Battle Rules:

1 bar
no crew/hate or d/r votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 07:38 PM

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Did not meet 6 line minimum.. battle closed

e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 07:10 PM.

is this a fun battle????

Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 07:21 PM.

parmik bout to get a ‘lyrical on slaught’ he’ll get owned
the only way u'll get a double U (w) is if u get cloned

lyrical on slaught was his name before

Your Lines capitalize the L in your Lyrics and you receive the L in your records.
Couldn’t cure the Lness (illness) if you prescribed medicine from Eckerd’s.

iight then let the peeps vote
good bar

Voted For: e-dubz

v/ e for the harder httin punch reuturn the fav on future battles

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umm ya ok.... hm.....
upping...hm.......

il vote once ya get a battle.........hm....

uppin..

Voted For: e-dubz

hmm..

par:your first bar was very strethed in comparison to your second.. which totally kills your punch.. you had a chance if it flowed better...

edubz: you had name play, wordplay, and a little bit of a played punch, but it was deecent... enuff to bag a win..

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uppin...

uppin..lets get some votes on this shit

yes i agree it is too streched...

BUt please honest votes

uping

Voted For: Paramik

Paramik-yo punchline was aight...it landed..and the flow was good..

e-dubz-yo punchline was good also but not as hards as Paramik's

Overall- my vote goes to Paramik is becuz he had a harder punchline than e-dubz had...

vote= Paramik

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Voted For: Paramik

Paramik Took This In My Eyes...

Just A Better Punch and WordPlay..

Vote - Paramik

~R~

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uppin..

Voted For: e-dubz

ok there isnt much to say in a punchline battle but vote to dubz cuz his was a better punch. paramik, urs was kinda repetitive wit the "L"'s and shit and the line is kinda streched. paramik had the better vocab tho. e-dubz the punch was coo but the way u used the personal could have been done better. u know this isnt a hate paramik lol -1-

v//e-dubz

uppin..

up..

uppin..

Upping for honest votes please don't DR

This was feedback posted for e-dubz
 

check'n this out.

Voted For: Paramik

this was aight...e-dbuz i wasnt too much feelin, and it didnt make since, creative and punch, but the way you worded it was poor

paramik had a nice bar also...it couldve been better, but it was a harder punch, and made more since...good flow

overall-keep practicing and, good flow, but try to be more creatvie and use bigger words(enhance your vocab)

i drop all HONEST votes, even if i get voted against...good flow...no hate e-dubz on your flow either dubz

drop votes to the below links...

Voted For: e-dubz

wow...both played as fuck, but the "ill" shit is super played
v/edubz

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I would vote if i could, but i can't because of my limited posts, one question though, why in the fuck do people judge flow in a damn punchline battle, i thought that you were supposed to judge the punch?

Voted For: e-dubz

one bar?... not too much feed back but e got this for better word play