raw killa vs intensify effect
 

Battle Rules:

5 bars(10 lines)
No Crew Votes
No Hate or Dick Ridin votes
No Biting

N since ur so bitch 2 go first tryin 2 say i had 2 go first....u go first pussy
take or choke out bitch

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-19-04 at 07:22 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

raw killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 07:23 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 07:35 PM.

my battle verse 2 I.E.

-intro-
(ME)-yo sou wanna do a callabo I.E.?
(I.E.)-yea n can i b in yo crew on RA?
(ME)-sure nigga....
ya kno i take sum time off from dis site 2 work on my otha site n this starts tlkn shit after askin 2 do a callabo n 2 b in my crew on dis otha site let me put dis fake 21 yr old bitch in his place....:laugh:

dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/

time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)

tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/

i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/

n its like dat bitch i leave rapverse 4 a few days 2 work on my shit in rapaddiction n yo bitch ass starts tlkn shit bout my crew while im gone...jus face it ur track record worse than mine u a bitch admit it pussy.....tlkn all dat bullshit on how u wanna do a callabo wit me n join my crew on RA than u tlk shit behind my back.....n oh dat shit aint hatin...dat shit is blasphemy pussy fuck u n keep my name n crew's name n every1 in outta ya mouth...im back bitches...ha ha:laugh:

hurry n post ur verse pussy.........u got only a few more hours 2 do so faggot.....
n if u people dont undastand my punches or personals...im sry but ur retarded...
shit is self explained dis bitch a snake n calls himself "intensify effect"..ha ha:laugh:
good luck pussy

u bitch cuz i backed down for a wack ass lame site with 10 memers on it only.... u a sad bitch N ya crew lame why would i join with u??? fuck it now its a wrap....

here comes da pain.......

ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*

if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head

this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes

N bitch,
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!

u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...

BANG-BANG-EARLY.....

ITS OVA CLOWN GET OVA IT AND SEND YA WHOLE CREW THEY'll ALL GET IT THE SAME WAY BITCH....

thats gotta b da worse verse ive eva seen in my life 4 a battle nigga u ass u might as well make ur losses 13 bitch u couldnt murk in ya dreams busy im takin ova y rabid ass mind u finally show up n drop yo bitch u betta of no showin...ha ha pussy i been gettin pussy b4 u can bust nuts nigga......ive been spreadin kids u still growin up bitch 21 yr old my ass dis niggaz a pussy....lol:laugh: n dats da truth bitch good luck you'll need it......lmmao uppin dis bitch 4 votes....wun luv niggaz holla back

^^^^ hahaha u know whats sad u actully think ya verse is hot HAHAHAHA u suck....

upp'in 4 votes.....

shit betta than ur wack ass shit n i got all dick ridin bitches n hataz towards me like u blacklisted so only real votes will b givin bitch i kno my verse betta than urs pussy uppin dis bitch fuck dis pussy

upp'in for votes plez..............................

upp'in 4 votes man.................................

upp'in 4 votes man.................................

upp'in 4 votes man.................................

c'mon can people plz vote in dis shit so it'll get closedshit a good battle n my shit tlkn b4 n afta my verse was all truth......we all kno who had da betta verse so close dis up c'mon vote dis shit n ill return da favor wit an honest vote holla back uppin dis shit^^^

This was feedback posted for raw killa
 

hahahahahhahahaahhahahahahhahahaaahahahah yo raw got u son!!!!!

^^^ shut the fuck up'''''' i'll murda u as-well...............

upp'in for votes...

will return the favor....

upp'in...........................................

i will return the favor of a vote......

upp'in..........

will... return da favor.......

u aint gettin no 1 2 vote for jus cuz u vot for them fcuk da shit i see dat crap ill get it dq'd pussy...c'mon rv uppin 4 honest feedback n votes no hatin or dick ridin jus honest shit peace

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

nice beef battle.lmao.funny stuff.................
im not gon vote,

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

rawkilla You were trash talking alot in some of ya verses some punches were nice, ok formula, and style.. but it's sorta average.

intensify had good wordplay, punches were packed and formula is unique,ok flow.. nice.

i think Intensify got this

Voted For: intensify effect

IE: You had better punches, well not really, but the "steps on ya head" was decent...but that was the only good thing in the verse...and it was stretched...The other lines were...blah as fuck...flow was off in places...and structure is wierd lookin...

Killa: Wack shit, no punches i liked, ya flow was bad...structure was messy, and to top it off, the talking part wasnt entertaining...the best line was "..."...lol, weak drop...

v/intensity effect

upp'in for votes what the fuck????

forget about the feed back we need votes.....

upp'in for votes


leave a link so i can drop a vote as-well

u aint gettin dat half ass vote....dat shit is not explained enough or even done i should say it da right way.....ill have dat shit removed......fuckin prick......and e-stle w/e da fuck ya name is u retarded if u thought n e of my verse was whack or didnt undastand n e of my punches.......n dont try tlkn shit back cuz ya battle record is worse than mine....lol....lmmao....:laugh: fuckin losers vote the right way if ur gonna vote u look like a vet u should kno dat by now retard

^^^ stop complaining bitch-ass sore loser.......

there will be meny more......

upp'in....

drop link

and i will return

da favor of a vote...

Voted For: intensify effect

Elevation Celebration, < I don't understand that either

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^^^oops that was supposed to be feedback, o well it'll be dq'd due to inadiquate feedback

upp'in this bull-shit i know he sucks but lets just end this man........

get it rite pussy u suck u wanna b faggot....uppin 4 honest explained none hatin or dik ridin votes....uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^

CANNNNNN
WEEEEEE
ENDDDDDDD
THISSSSSSS
PLEZZZZZZZ........

i will return the favor of a vote..........

Voted For: intensify effect

yo i gotta go with this boy he has better stucture and flow and vocab but he dont got good punches rawkilla had nun on him it was a ok battle
v/ IE

Voted For: raw killa

my vote goes to raw killa

breakdown:
ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*

wordplay was alright not the best onpener though.

if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head

this was a weak bar punch didnt move me.

this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes

i like this bar pretty good.

N bitch,
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!

iight this bar was alright kinda on the weak side.

u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...

personal punch pretty good closer.


dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/

like the wordplay alright opener.

time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)

pretty good punch kinda short though messed up the flow.

tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/

weak bar i didnt feel this.

i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/

good closer i like the wordplay and usage of his name.

well i think raw killa won this battle even know both the verses werent that good he still came harder.

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Voted For: intensify effect

intensify effect

ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*
^lol

if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head
^omg overstretched like a motherF*cka
this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes
^ha damn. even though stretchedlines

N bitch,
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!
^not registering for me.

u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...
^decent

raw killa


dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/
^cool opener

time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)
^some choppy bs man.
tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/
^um...so!
i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
^oh man you lost steam after that opener.
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/
^omg I don't know what to say.

Hell raw killa you need work on consistency. You can't come out with one decent bar and just ban all structure for the rest of your lines.

Wasn't feelin' either a whole lot. intensify was ok with his stuff but damn raw killa jus became some wack rookie after that opener. vote intensify.

upp'in

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up up up and away.........................................

upp'in this battle yet again to close this once and for-all..................

upp'in this join to be ova.............................

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upp'in this plus i will retunr the favor of a vote......