saaran vs L.I.
 

Battle Rules:

1:30 verses max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-19-04 at 08:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 09:00 PM.

saaran has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 10:09 PM.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/l...insanemusic.htm

word!

Voted For: L.I.

Nerdy voice. Sorry. But your flow'd nice. Just turn ur volume up. The lyrics I think were better also.

You need to show emotion tho.

Voted For: L.I.

saaran in trash hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha pussy

umm...DQ that vote...Carson's is cool though...

Yeh DI has to learn how to vote.....

fuck carson............................................ .........pussy

pussy? why am i pussy? explain?

because I already agreed to battle you moron....

Voted For: saaran

my vote goes to saaran. his punches were nice. i liked the beat, even tho that has nothin to do with it. L.I's was nice. but saaran had me when he first started

so wazz good ///////////////////////////(audio)....................u first.................dont back down now

Voted For: saaran

Beat was ill. Love Swizzy. Saarans flow had more emotion. Punches were nice on both - L.I. seemed to flow aight, but emotion just wasnt there. L.I. you mos def improving - but still not enough to win this i aint think. Saaran - ya lines were about the same as L.I.'s, but you really spit like you was in a battle. L.I. - I didnt like the back and forth fade - good effect, but didnbt fit the battle. Overall Saaran had me feelin he won this.

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

Saraan.....you forgot the flow. What the fuck happened? Did you change the beat at the last minute or something? Punches weren't all that great either. Could hardly hear your voice too.....

L.I.....Voice was too low. Quality needed a little help. Voice changing back between the speakers was killing me. Punches were a little better than Saraan's but you quality was also as crappy.

Since L.I is in my crew, I won't actually vote on this, but I think that both MCs could have done a lot better :thumbup:

Voted For: L.I.

both kinda lacked quality here- but w/e... as far as punchlines go L.I made me laugh with that saraan rap line- and when you were like 'I suck in audio, but whats worse is Im beatin you"- lol a lil clowny but funny... Vote. L.I

word..thanks for feedback yall...:)

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

i don't know what think///////////////////////////

Voted For: saaran

saaran wins. both need SEVERELY to work on delivery, but saaran had some nice lines. Both need to work on that voice.

Voted For: saaran

im gonna have to give this to you dawg i was just feelin you more...you had more punchlines that i was feelin...you guys both came with some ill lines and shit but i was just feelin you more...both of you guys need better mics tho

bizzupm

yo up this shit man...get it over

Voted For: saaran

lol L.I. you suck at audio yer voice is fucked right up man and so is saarans but saaran you got a ok voice you need a deep voice not a squiky voice maybe change the effects but saaran you get this vote because of the more of a punchlines in yer song but the start kinda sucked saaran but the end you took it to him lol he sucked so bad you took it to him so hard he ended up in his mothers bed fuckin here lol gross hhaa but still ya