Trooper vs intensify effect
 

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Check in by: 08-17-04 at 10:40 PM

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Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 10:43 PM.

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Understand your "Intensity Effect" Is Non Existent, Up ya Spirit
Lay Corspe Ova ya Bars & u still wouldnt have Death Difying Lyrix

Your Lyrical Alliance is the Opposite of ~"Penis" Pussyfying Raps
U Defeatin me is Un heard of like a Parapalegic doin Hand Clap's

Flamabile Liquids Will Delete ya ~"Significance",My name Sticks
You couldnt spit~ "Sik"~~ if you had "Chlamidia" On your Lips

Its Different,If your an ~"Effect" it wasent in my Rememberance
If u had "Einstein Cerabelum"u still wouldnt come wit Intelligance
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 11:29 PM.

u'r 20-1 but u'r chances of wining its plenty to none when faceing da best
spit that fire that'll burn ya face like ya avator cuz im the nightmare in text
See, I’m the reason that they make plenty coffins
While you’re known to take second quicker than Kenny Lofton
Plus when I'm readin votes, u won't see me frown
Cuz ur chances are so remote, they could turn tha tv down
Yea, I'm splittin ur breast, shots'll injure ur chest
Cuz my arrows hit close to home, like hittin refresh

BANG-BANG-EARLY.....

Uppin

peep whos talking...

U Defeatin me is Un heard of like a Parapalegic doin Hand Clap's
^^ that punch has no effect since being parapalegic has noting to do with ya hands since they still have movement ..... weak punch....
You couldnt spit~ "Sik"~~ if you had "Chlamidia" On your Lips
^^ thats so played and un-original......

i could go on about ya verse but i'll leave it at that....

upp'in this battle N enough talking shit bitch....

i figuer i aint need much agenist someone so lame who use played punches.....

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

nice verses all around

structure:ie
flow:ie
vocab:troop
punches:ie
persies:troop

ie took this one, because his flowed better. Troop was over on ie on vocab, i liked his punches, but he just had problems in flow and rhyming, on the last two lines, those don't rhyme.

ie's closer was nice, the beginning was stretched.
but close battle though

^^^ come on man u dont need to drop feed-back just drop a vote.......

^^^^ how i suck when ua int got no vote or feed back???

dont try to sway votes clown......

u trying to make a joke outta something u'r not to sure about so hold u'r head hommie......

upp'in for more votes...

Voted For: Trooper

WOW!!! I havent seen a battle this good in a long time, word up. Godd fuckin flow. Ya'll on each others level, thats wut i like. I gave my vote to trooper only because he was hard from start to finish. I.E. had a hard flow also, but you started out wack, and that was the only reason i couldnt give it to you. I seen mad punches and personals in this battle, but i think Trooper had more personals. Elevate though.

Drop votes on the below battles people

Voted For: Trooper

One Sided Battle
Multi's- Trooper
Punchers - Tooper
Personal - n/a
Enjoyment - Trooper
overall Trooper

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u'r 20-1 but u'r chances of wining its plenty to none when faceing da best
spit that fire that'll burn ya face like ya avator cuz im the nightmare in text

^^ that was a personal automatic.... and he switch hes avator to make the diss weaker CLOWN...... what kids would do to win a battle online..... hahaha....

Voted For: Trooper

aiight.. trooper got this.. better structure, it wasnt a compleate knock out, intensity had some alrite rhymes, but basically there was better flow n punches in troopers verse..

vote- trooper

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upp'in for FULLY EXPLAIN VOTES AND NO DICK RYDERS PLEZ.....

im not saying u is but u never know........

Voted For: Trooper

First off big ups to both of ya for takin the time to post ya verses. First off I come to flow and structure, the flow wasnt too bad from intensify but the structure was here and there. Trooper you had a nice flow and good structure to compliment it as well. The punches from both were decent, I noticed off the bat intensify tried to get personal but it was a lilttle more self glorification. Trooper took the battle straight to him with his punches and was prepared to win. Trooper came out on top in about all of the categories.

v/Trooper

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143655

Voted For: Trooper

this was a one sided battle trooper took this in every topic..intensify you need to elevate cuz you ain't gonna win againt me like this.....good battle

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Face it bitch u still goin 2 lose lol

Uppin this shit

Leave an explained vote so he wont get hiz panties in a bunch

Voted For: Trooper

Both had aight structure, but Troop came with harder punches and better flow. i.e your first 2 lines were dragged out a little too long to keep the flow going. No hate though, good battle...
Vote - Trooper

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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

nice battle tooper

Uppin

Voted For: Trooper

Trooper had the whole nine.. better rhymes, stucture and punches.. the structure was flawless and the punches connected, intesify had a couple of stretched lines, not too bad, but you had more complex language also, better vocab, overall your verse hit harder..

returbn favor right here cuz, thx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411

Voted For: Trooper

you came hard with the vocab i was feelin it......you already no wat your doing you dont really need work with anything....effect you was coo but need to come a lil harder...