CODEE vs Sonofisis#1
 

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CODEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 12:08 AM.

ok its my time here we go
aight u say ur name is sonofisis #1
but on me u ain't gonna score a point
not even if u go to the arcade and steal every fuckin coin
its my time and its not yours
so go back home and do the chores
I'm just tellin u somethin right now mista
life is a fuckin bitch and so is ur sista
I'm throwin all kinds of shit caus I'm a lyrical twista(tornado)
when u reach in ur pocket all u feel is lint
and from that dick last night in ur head is a dent
I'm so heavenly I'm like a miracle sent
ur dick is so small u piss on ur balls is that a hint
I'm the sharpest arrow u just comin up fresh flint
I done did this verse and I'm the best already
I'm cuttin u up u the forest and I'm the machete
and at this rap I'm eatin u alive like spaghetti
and in Nascar u would b Jeff Gordon while I'm Richard Petty

Sonofisis#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 12:38 AM.

Yo, I Wet Nerds as I Spit Select Verbs to Served U
U're just a Wigga who wants to be "black", So I "Burned U"
You're a "Bitch", U would prolly look nice in a Skirt
Twurp, the first battle I read on here was of u gettin Merked
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142734
You're just etable, Yo Cheesey ass will get ate like Nacho's
Can't "Kick" a "Hot Verse" if u stomped out a burnin 2Pac Poem
I'm quick to Rush em, Cus, Fus em out and Bust Em
But when "Beef" comes yo way, you avoid it like a Muslim
Just Shut him up ya'll, I didn't say that this Punk Could Speak
What He Writes is just "Bullshit", like he uses Cow Dung For Ink

Voted For: CODEE

Aight C u had betta punch lines so i am going to give you this one

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i don't see how?

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uppin 4 votes let's see'em gotta get'em comin' in here

Voted For: Sonofisis#1

codee''lifes a bitch and so is your sister''lmao that was funny as fuck but you need to work on your punches and disses your wordplay and vocab is getting much better though still you need more practice 3/10
son this was aight good opener second bar was funny as fuck lmao that shit is real your last 2 bars was whacked but ok still 5/10

u voted for sonofisis man whats up with that I thought u was gonna vote for me

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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

got my vote cause u speakin the truth bout this nigga right here, he ain't comin wit nothin, YET, hes improved a lil but still needs Hella work on his flow, and ur shit seems 2 b developed way stronger.
better punches, more flow,better structure u had it all includin open and close

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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

breakdown:

Sonofisis#1-nice creative punches and metas "Cow Dung For Ink" that was nice. and ur structure was on point. i see the personal (wink wink) lol anyways nice drop but i dont see how "nachos" and "poem" rhyme homeboy....7.75/10

CODEE-bad punches and structure and horrible flow. you have a lot of things to work on. even tho it was bad it got a lil better as the verse went on. work on structure, flow, and punches for now and you gotta throw in some personals too...4/10

v//sonofisis#1
rtf(links in the sig)

Voted For: Sonofisis#1

heres ur vote......................................

Voted For: Sonofisis#1

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Sono.. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

Sonofisis#1:

opening lines(1-4) were decent,had some comedy...
after that your rhymes just died.

comments:your wordplay was alright,structure was lacking here. your flow was decent, punches were good in beggining and washed up towards the end.Nice opener, was your best line. Closure was not good, only thing you need to work on is the consistancy of a good verse.

vote:Sonofisis#1