SLicK~SKiLLz vs yung_gun
 

Battle Rules:

5-15 lines
No Crew Votes,hate,dr
No Recycling
No Biting,feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 04:49 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

SLicK~SKiLLz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 04:19 AM.

YuNg_GuN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 04:27 AM.

ayo here we go..

Young u better ~run~ when u see my ~gun~ (his name young gun)
I spit n shoot ~quick~ shootin niggas and missin there ~trick~s (hoes)
but takin the ~treats~ callin u and ur crew out to da ~street~
my flowes hittin u so hard its knockin u off of ya ~feet~ ur rymes are ~weak~ i kill em like these niggas im doin as we ~speak~
my rymes are ~reck-less~ im not even tryin and im ~takin-this~
when i seen u i seen a free ~win~ ~proov-in~ that u suck and u showin no ~competition~
so ill just bring out the ~revolver~ and end this ~now~ get ready to higher a murder ~solver~ cause ~wow!?~
ur dead takin ur bloody carcus and layin it on the ~bed~ thats got white ~sheets~
so all these wanna be mc's rlly knows what happens in the ~streetz~

your skillz aint slick or sick all day they ride dicks
your from hell then bitch go back to hell bitch
get out of RV and and go live in your RV
i'll flip you lie a burger bitch and sprinkle you like sardeens
kick yo mutha fuckin ass day noon and night
try and hit me beat me fucka that aint right
get outta hear and dont miss yo mutha fuckin flight
you'll lose if you chalenge me to a real fight
i'ma fuck yo bitch all thru the fuckin night
go back to the crummy streetz you fuckin hobo
go back to fuckin yo men you fuckin homo
stay there and do that while i take you fuckon hoe whoa
yo nuthin elts to say to this mutha fuckin gay

yo uupin this battle ppl vote for either of us.

Voted For: YuNg_GuN

Yo ma votes gotta got 2 yung gun.......his verse had more personals and cusses and i cud feel how he'd spit it. in parts slick-skilz's verse felt off-beat n he wud hav found it hard to spit dat shit. Although sum of it was pretty sick

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hate voter but anyways lets get some real votes in here~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

Voted For: YuNg_GuN

yung gun won

personals yung gun
rhymes yung gun
punches yung gun
word play yung gun
vocab yung gun
multis none
overall yung gun

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omfg if we get more dumbass voters i swear to god all these fuckin noobs voteing

yo slick dont be jealous that i'm gettin votes you gay mutha fucka bitch stop conplaining bitch you little dick shit i wanna kill your mutha fuckin ass.

bitch wtf you gonna lose ne way man bitch removin my vote i challenge yo pussy ass herb bitch c'mon.. next time yo gay ass is on you gonnabattle me or elts...

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

YO MAYN U GOT DIS HE SAID THA SAME THING ALMOST EVERI LINE..HIZ FLOW WAS WEAK AND IT WAS SHITTY PERIOD

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

slick skillz...took this 1 by a mile...he came with harder punches...his flowed betta...

both had ok structure...but yung gun just had some corny ass punches dat didnt make sense...

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Voted For: YuNg_GuN

Structure- Tie
Punches - yung gun
Personals - yung gun
Opener - yung gun
Closer - yung gun


Ok, Slick kept talkin about guns and shit, yung gun was more creative.. better punchlines and the personals also hit better, the flow was about the same, so was stucture, wordplay also was pretty even.. so based from punches and personals, you get it yung gun

Holla back right here..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146839

and don't hate on my vote like you did the other guy, i'll simply rexplain to strobe himself and tell him to recount it. I really think that he took this, no hate..

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

Aight, No Contest....

SLICK Hands Down...

Slick Ya Had Few Nice Metas n Punches, Nice Structure Too, Easy To Ride n Easy To Catch The Melody...
Improve On Vocab Tho...


your skillz aint slick or sick all day they ride dicks
your from hell then bitch go back to hell bitch
get out of RV and and go live in your RV
i'll flip you lie a burger bitch and sprinkle you like sardeens
^^^^
Da Fuck Is All That About?

Man, That Didnt Make No Sense An With Them 4 Lines I Couldnt Concentrate On The Rest...

Improve On Wordplay n Use Punches An Metas
KEEP ELEVATIN BOTH YA'LL...

Return The Favr n Vote On My Battles

P E A C E

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

Im Votin For SLicK~SKiLLz, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But SlicK Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

aight aight slick owned this shit.....

flow=slick
structure=slick
punches=slick
wordplay=neither


best line for slick

my rymes are ~reck-less~ im not even tryin and im ~takin-this~
when i seen u i seen a free ~win~ ~proov-in~ that u suck and u showin no ~competition~




best line for yung gun..



you'll lose if you chalenge me to a real fight
i'ma fuck yo bitch all thru the fuckin night



nice battle..good try yung gun holla at me if ya wanna battle..

This was feedback posted for SLicK~SKiLLz
 

one sided battle.

punches- Slick
personals- Slick
multis- Slick
multas- Yung (cuz he tried em)
word play- Slick

Slick nice verse. Keep bringin hard punches, u kinda slack off in a line. U may think oo one line, but one line can help u win or lose.

Yung- weak punches, elementary rhymes, im not big on struture but i kno some people r so work on structure. Lotta stretched lines.

Slick:
" when i seen u i seen a free ~win~ ~proov-in~ that u suck and u showin no ~competition~" nice punch.

Yung:
"go back to the crummy streetz you fuckin hobo
go back to fuckin yo men you fuckin homo" not great. talkin bout bein gay, *yawn* notin original.

v/Slick if i could vote

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

nice battle
slick win this 1
mor n better punches
all his verse was better i lyked his better
the other guyz was alright but not as good
click skills wins hands down