SLicK~SKiLLz vs Elusiv G
 

Battle Rules:

5-15 lines
No Crew Votes,hate,dr
No Recycling
No Biting,feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 11:32 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

SLicK~SKiLLz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 11:03 AM.

Elusiv ~G~ dont u ~see~ u choose the wrong ~enemy~ when u choose ~thee~
ur spittin blank ~shell~z u gotta ~yell~ ur verse for anyone to pay ~attention~
you got such lack of skills u should get a ~suspention~
spittin ~flames~ as quick as u can switch ~names~ to vote for ~urself~
im ill when i spit got u sick loosin ~health~ give u a quick execution and then stab u with my ~stealth~
got u runnin to save ur ~record~ lock u up in a wooden ~checkerd~ casket with a black n ~decker~
guy says hes got big ballz with a lil ~pecker~
u can tell this guys gay cause he cant get no ~pussy~
and playa urself dont count u fuckin ~wussy~
~pick-n-choosen~ ur the one lossen ~give-n-losses~
from all the bosses ~take-n-wins~ comittin ~sins~
from schoolin ~mc~'s when they choose to accept to battle vs ~me~
give it up ~now~ so i can rake ur dirty ass up with a ~plow~

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 11:25 AM.

this is me
 

Slick skillz wants to battle me cos he thinks he's ill
Well he should be runnin bfor his back feels a chill
From the lyrically phenomenal, rhyming sentinal
Thats comin for him with blows to his abdominal
Cos slick skillz is gonna get Quick Killed
In this battle of newbies its me whos real
Cos from him i got tha vibe of a faker, he shud be ashamed
Cos look at how hes damaging the game
With his wack ass verses
And lyrical attempts
If u were in court you'd be held in contempt
For even opening ur mouth and stepping to the plate
Cos i hate to burst ur bubble but u aint nuttin great
Its great for me to end this right here right now, without me recieving a scar
So Slick Skillz bend over and take it up the ass like the bitch you are

Slick skillz wants to battle me cos he thinks he's ill
Well he should be runnin bfor his back feels a chill
From the lyrically phenomenal, rhyming sentinal
Thats comin for him with blows to his abdominal
Cos slick skillz is gonna get Quick Killed
In this battle of newbies its me whos real
Cos from him i got tha vibe of a faker, he shud be ashamed
Cos look at how hes damaging the game
With his wack ass verses
And lyrical attempts
If u were in court you'd be held in contempt
For even opening ur mouth and stepping to the plate
Cos i hate to burst ur bubble but u aint nuttin great
Its great for me to end this right here right now, without me recieving a scar
So Slick Skillz bend over and take it up the ass like the bitch you are

upp for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hey yo, dis battle weren't even funny. Can y'all vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want........like deres options. Peace and luv

Check my other battles:
Elusiv G vs. Invader_Zim
Elusiv G vs. Mc Merc
Elusiv Gvs. Demon Pyrokronix

Hey yo, dis battle weren't even funny. Can y'all vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want........like deres options. Peace and luv

yagga y'all, watup vote on dis shit so it can finally be finished. Proper votes only!

vote, vote, vote!!!!! andmake em good votes aight. Peace

vote vote y'all, up n uppin, gd votes only dnt want no dq'ds

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

Cant stab someone wit stealth dawg, u use stealth, then use a knife to stab dawg, so that didnt make sence, some shit wuznt that creative...the shit bout gay ppl...structure isnt aligned right eitha

This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

give it 2 Elusiv G cuz his
flow was better n i didn't really
like SLicK's structure so u might need
2 change it but ok
but i cant vote yet so as soon as i get enuff
post i'll be bak 2 vote so vote on my battles
in my sig

Hey yo, dis battle weren't even funny. Can y'all vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want........like deres options. Peace and luv

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

structures were both fucked!!!..............

exclusiv g was tite but u rappin about shit that dont make sense and that dont belong in a verse to dis some1

slick's structure was only fucked at the very end and he had better content....... thowin out real lyrical punches......


voted for slick skills...................1

Hey yo, dis battle weren't even funny. Can y'all vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want........like deres options. Peace and luv

Hey yo, dis battle weren't even funny. Can y'all vote ( in detail so not retracted). Vote for who u want........like deres options. Peace and luv

Voted For: Elusiv G

ill give G this one tha other nigga had some corny words in his rhymes this got more diss

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin uppin 4 votez, uppin uppin yall vote and voe in detail.Peace

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

Battle was ended in like the first few lines. Hands down you won this battle. Had da punches, structure...you got this battle. I didn't see much hard hitten punches from the other guy. Keep it up...though and you'll elevate.

yagga y'all, watup vote on dis shit so it can finally be finished. Proper votes only!

uppin 4 votes yall. ................................

uppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnn for votes..................

this battle open for almost amonth.........uppin dis y'all come on vote....

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

SLicK~SKiLLz -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Elusiv G -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

uppin uppin upin..................................

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

PUNCHES=Slick
WORDPLAY=Slick
STRUCTURE=tie
METAS=Slick
PERSONALS=SLICK(Some)
MULTIS=SLICK

SLICK PUNCHES WAS HARDER HE HAD A DECENT WORDPLAY THA STUCTURE WAS GOOD HOT SHIT MAYN