INFALLIBLE vs FLiP AkA JR
 

Battle Rules:EVERYTHING GOES I'M NEW SO LETS GET THIS SHIT STARTED

6 - 16 lines MaX
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Check in by: 08-17-04 at 07:18 PM

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INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 06:49 PM.

FLiP AkA JR has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 06:54 PM.

Ok so u think u got what it takes 2 battle me kid?
I'm bout 2 eat that ass up overstand, underdig?
I'm a real life gangsta and this kids is a phony
wanna battle me huh... cuz u'ont even kno me
I'll break u off real proper...and I'ma do it thug style
Cause I got the game chained up and I ain't lettin u out
U think cause u a newbie too, that u can just merk me out cuz
do u even realize u fuckin wit a real life thug?
Dogg... I don't think u do cause I'll body u kid
or make u shoot urself wit ur own gun, like Cheddar Bob did
when I read ur first bar I'ma have ur personals
in the mean time I bet ur rhymes, IS submersible
I'm just goin finish u off quick, cause u ain't on my level fam
u couldn't burn me if u approached wit a live grenade nya'hand

Inflammable? Nah I smoke his “L" got him lookin “infammible,”
Tried to Eat my rhymes, but my punch line hit and blew this cannibal//
My rhymes flow like Air that keep my throat from chockin’,
You smoke puffs through ya asshole to get ya rhymes smokin’//
My punch lines protect Real Mc, seein me Gettin' no hits by his hit,
You Stick ya “rhymes back in your asshole” becuz you say the “Same-shit”//
Cloths wearin red white and blue thrown in the air like An American flag
Blast rhymes hard, Got his Heart runnin for his life like a heart-attack//
I battle Face to Face wit rhyme ready to shoot personals,
His crew blew like his Team-rocket away, now got him seein “Double-trouble”!//
My rhymes to intense while I think what I write, got my computer to overload,
Put “propane in his head” while he “light the stage up,” now watch him “Explode”//
I stress wit no sleep, mind wit ease got my eye to see pinkeyes,
While I Stuck “rifles in his heart” to get him “feelin'” what he’s “aiming in life”//
You couldn’t bite my rhymes, so here pay-it-off, it’s a dolla-a-track,’
I’m from “holla-front.com,” last line so I’ll fare-a-well you wit a “Holla-back”//

nice drop infammible.....i mess up dat punchline........its suppose to say

you "smoke puffs through ya asshole" to get ya "shitty rhymes smokin"

ight well uppin votes i guess.....

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I'll give u the fact that u got a few punches on me but thats it
Then u lost ur flow in the middle, c'mon this is some bullshit
And the name's "INFALLIBLE!!!) u illiterate ass nigga
Which means I'm perfect cuz, just put me up there wit Jigga!

hahahah oh daymit, well i think datz a BIG BOO BOO fo me....daymit!! :O well dat fuck my personal line up my bad... shit

y0 infallible, why can't i see the feedbacks of other peoples thread?

4 r battle or 4 other ppls battles?

never mind infammible. i got it lol just mess around on this website till i get da hang of it thks anywayz...

just to let cha know, i'm still here wating for votes come out...

uppin votes still, upin votes still...........................

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

Vote: Infalliable

Lyrics: gots to got him cos dey more complex and actually make sense

Structure: his lines are obvious direct and parralell. He'd b able to spit dis easy

Personals: hes got a few but flips got mo even if dere a bit used and weak

Other: A lot of flips shit was off-beat and wud sound crap. B interestin to try and hear him spit this and stay on beat

So in conclusion infalliable wins he ripped flip keep trying got a long way to go. L8r peace

Check my battles:

Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM
Elusiv G vs. Slick Skillz
Elusiv G vs. Mc Merc

omg your suck an idiot this text battling man, this is not a audio track battle! omg wtf... get da difference?

uppin votes........................................

Voted For: FLiP AkA JR

ok infall no punches or good disses but a ok verse with a nice flow but wheres your battle heart at?that wasnt a battle verse 2/10
flip good vocab and punches it fell off in certain spots but overall it was nice with placed diisses that hit 5/10

thk you empire mostly appreciated :D at least you understand this is a text verse instead of an audio battle :D thks again empire.

ight uppin for votes still..................................

still waiting for votes................................

still uppin for votes shss.............................take a while :O

Voted For: FLiP AkA JR

i think flip won dis it was a close battle but flip jus got dis he had a lil bit betta flow n tha rhymes were iight, tha vocab was tight jus needs sum werk on tha punchlines

ight much appreciated certifiedthug.....uppin fo mo votes y0

This was feedback posted for INFALLIBLE
 

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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

INFALLIBLE
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

FLiP AkA JR
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was lack'd
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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This was feedback posted for FLiP AkA JR
 

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Voted For: FLiP AkA JR

Flip's definately made more sense. He had better personals, punches, vocab, wordplay, better structure all the way through to keep it flowing.
My rhymes to intense while I think what I write, got my computer to overload,
Put “propane in his head” while he “light the stage up,” now watch him “Explode”//
That line was definately the best... Overall good battle on both parts, but FLiP's did it for me.
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