..::ingenius mind::.. vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Topical=write about prison or being locked up

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-20-04 at 10:36 PM

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..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 10:39 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 10:41 PM.

Dont floss you might get ripped for ya chain
Pop off fuck waiting for shift change
You soft you know how they do fags
Sodimize and tie you up with ya doo-rag
No fair ones you getting hit with the rachet
Beat down and lift for ya package
Fucked in the shower
And you bout to parole in a couple of hours
Its real hard as a coward
Waste of strenghth hitting them weights
We got icepicks and razors in electrical tape
Dont be stressing them calls
Poking ya chest out will get you killed in the messhall
Wether big or small we alldealing with time
And half the population still dealing with crime
Thers homos,thugs and plenty of ganstas
Plenty of anger and thats why theres plenty of bangas
Plenty of bars
Cantops if you aint got money for gemstars
Muslims and Gods gangs is overly active
And drugs get flipped more then gymnastics
No mail no package
Extortions the deal
Cuz it was real since the first day you came here

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This was feedback posted for ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
 

merk fest! empire you sucked fat booty cheeks in topical anyone can write about that aspect to it. what u need to do in topicals is put a lot of imagery, something u didnt do. i mind that was sick and i felt like i knew that person for the longest wit all that imagery and depth in ur verse. if anyone votes against you they should be hung.

This was feedback posted for ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
 

she got u beat empire and also
wasnt u reppin yo crew so your
weak and yo crew got its first lost
by
Low Ryders Inc.

ahahahahahahahahaha
u got wooped hahahahahaha
so stop posting in our forum

damn guys..dont go too hard on dis guy!!! Hey where's my 200 u have to give me??? lol

This was feedback posted for ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
 

uppin

1 her shit is whacked it sounds like a fucking poem 2 stop freeposting in this thread i already told strobe your wasting threads and nobody can see what you say assholes freeposting will get you banned uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppin

how iz mine wack?????lmao...lets change that bet to 700 now dat i saw urs...lol.. u shouldn't back out since u think mines wack..lmao

Voted For: Empire

real nice flow and u stayed on the topic a lot better u explained jail a lot better in ur verse

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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..


Ok this was a decent battle

Ingenoius........good imagery, and vocab was pretty good, flow was great and structure was on point throuhout..good storyline as well, I could picture your situation through your words...good drop

Empire.....your magery was poor you didn't let story develop you jumped right into the middle of the story instead of opening and then getting into the experiences of a convict which is what hurt you in this battle....your flow was a lil off as well as ya structure...gotta elevate

Vote: Ingenious

^^yo this nigga vote aganist me in all my battles and he only has like 10 posts a day blacklisted as of now fucking homo anyways

Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

iNgEnIuS got this one..personals were good in there..the wordplay & vocab was good also..and the flow & structure was also nice in there..so iNgEnIuS gets my vote cuz basicly..he had a better verse

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Yo are u serious?.....I don't even know who the fuck you are but on first impression you looked wack...I can't hate on someone dat I don't know cuz honestly you are too far beneath me for me to pay you any attention...your topical was wack deal wit it and when you lose I'll be back to ask you what happened

Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

ok to break it down.. there was times i was feeling minds verse.. he put more feeling into his work which is usually the best way to go about topicals. not to mention he had a pretty good structure and kept with it, a clean verse with no real problems.

Empire, ok, your ideas for this verse were pretty good but where u failed was in your rhyming and structure. there were a few bars that didnt connect and some lines were really small which doesent look good when working with text.

so my vote is going to mind... decent battle tho..

thanx alot...uppin

^^thats a fair vote respect poet triple you fucking homo all that nigga do is go vote aganist me i never vote on his whacked ass battles and i never speak to this lame but he try to vote aganist me on all my shits i beat niggas 5-1 he be the only vote aganist me straight sucka shit but mind i respect the other 2 votes :thumbup: uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp in

Empire com down
aight just becuz u
losing dont meant
nothin

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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

both came off fairly well in this battle, both had punches and personals, both had good structures. hard to vote on this but i'll give it to ingenius mind for having a better overall flow. no hate. return favours.

Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

my vote goes to i mind because i felt his shit more den empire empire didnt sound entertainin to me i mind was much more deeper den empire so my vote goes to i mind