aberrant vs Word processor
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 is a KO

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-20-04 at 03:13 AM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

aberrant has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 09:54 AM.

Process my words, type them up and print them off
So you can feed off my rhymes like a pig from a trough
You’re a lonely computer nerd, your penis is flaccid and unused
Like Iraq’s destructive weapons when they were wrongly accused
Its unlucky for that Bush found no weapons there in Iraq
Coz that’s your only chance of staging a decent attack
Lose the front Yank, like a woman’s failed test on the smears*
Ill come at you like Tyson but bite off BOTH your ears!
After this battle ill be with you, no matter where you lurk
Cause my actions are more messed up than a 2 year olds artwork
You have only one fan, its electrical and blows air in your face
I just diminished your grace and CLOSED your UK hate case!!

*(Front=Breasts, failed smear test can = breast removal) hope u get it lol

Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 12:37 PM.

i aight ima crush you right quick with lyrical swiftness
your boyfriend gave you aids now think you got sickness*
well ima administer the verbs that bring loses with quickness
my scriptures flippin' ya text up and down like switches
your username means you left tha path of wuts right
your flow is irrelevant like being blind in tha night
this win will return to me faster than tha speed of light
my flow is like all your closths way to tight
~closer~
im 10 levels above so you will never beat me
like walking to tha sun in your life time you can't reach me

uppin #1..........................................

a yo good battle aberrant i have alot more respect for you know
but i wanted to make this a 2 verse battle so im gona open a another one call me vs. u round 2 aight

Voted For: Word processor

ya beginner and closer did him in
aberrant good verse but try to throw more personals in there
and more vocab
word ya verse just needs a little more multi's and harder punches but you got this one
return favors
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This was feedback posted for Word processor
 

dammmm

uppin #2.............................................

Voted For: Word processor

chose winners verse....

i aight ima crush you right quick with lyrical swiftness
your boyfriend gave you aids now think you got sickness*
nice punch.....made my laugh 7/10
well ima administer the verbs that bring loses with quickness
my scriptures flippin' ya text up and down like switches
aight punch....kinda played..but good wordplay 5/10
your username means you left tha path of wuts right
your flow is irrelevant like being blind in tha night
decent punch....nothing to special 5/10
this win will return to me faster than tha speed of light
my flow is like all your closths way to tight
good punch....direct hit 7/10
im 10 levels above so you will never beat me
like walking to tha sun in your life time you can't reach me
basic closer....you could tell it was a filler 5/10

v/word processor

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143293
return the favor^^^

Voted For: aberrant

those punchlines were nice and your flow was sick all together it was nice

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Voted For: aberrant

You have only one fan, its electrical and blows air in your face
dat won ABERRANT da battle dat was tyght
real close but he won it wit dat line
both had structure n flow n a lil wordplay
but it came down 2 da closer n dat was tyght
v/ABERRANT
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uppin #3..............................................

upppppppppppppppp.................................

Upinnnnnnnnn...................................... ......

uppin, leave ya links n ill vote on your battles......

come on man, some1 please vote, this as bin slept on 4 tooooo long

Leave ya links to Audio, open mics, battles, poetry or whatever and i promise good feedback andfair votes.......

Voted For: aberrant

u got my v/ cause of lack of repetativness WP's shit didn't hit me real hard when I read it and I like the line bout bitin off both of his ears, that shit was funny as fuck. n e how u had better punches, flow, structure, open, and close u took this battle hands down

uppin.............................................

Voted For: aberrant

Nice Vocab From The Both Of Ya'll....Better Punches From ABERRANT, But the Structure On WORD PROCESSORS Verse Was Better, I'm Feelin The Wordplay Of ABERRANT THo, So He Got My VOTE

uppin plz.........................................

uppin.............................................

Voted For: aberrant

aight abberant took this with more complex punches n a flow that delivered them well,structure was better also.some filler lines to me but they were good setups for the punch ...
words...way too simple srry man but alot of your punches missed in my eyes n your flow was off on your opener i think you forgot a word n that threw me right off in the beginning,
also the lil~finisher~qoute was annoyin jus thought id tell ya for future battles it throws off the flow n doesnt go well in a verse....................

Voted For: aberrant

Aberrant had more punches that came just a little harder. Both of you had good structure, so no complaints there, but Word did you underestimate this cat? 'Cuz I've seen some of your other battles and you've come way harder than this. o hate though, keep bangin'...
Vote - aberrant