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Invader_ZIM vs verbal power
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-21-04 at 05:35 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Invader_ZIM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 05:36 AM.
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listen kid i dont got time for this shit you wanna live alright ill only kill ya a lil bit heres a seat now sit ima show ya how deep this battelin game gose how much yr mom is a hoe and how bad you sux wen it comes to flows ok so step down back the fuck up befor i kill u slut wut how well do u take a beetin cuz im the grim reeper and im reepin i did this while i was sleepin your a lil boy and im the deemin under your bed i haunt you u cant get me outta yr head ima drive ya till yr dead take my advice stop right now if you like ya life
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verbal power has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 01:09 PM.
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as quickly as i bring your detruction you'll think you shyne//
but in reality you'll be just a bitch burried alive// you'll never come back like you got mistreated and abused// you borrowed your wordz and now they've ben misused// put in a place where your death is tha only thing expected// your text will fall like i have antrhax and its ben injected// (stlye change four closing lines) i aleviate burends as if my name wus breast reduction// im get these votes like they were influenced by seduction// your fucking stupid like looking for pencil instructions*// your win collumn is limiteed like toaster functions// |
uppin for votes
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lets get some votes remeber this is my debut battle
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Voted For: verbal power
verbal power: "as quickly as i bring your detruction you'll think you shyne// but in reality you'll be just a bitch burried alive//" Cool "you'll never come back like you got mistreated and abused// you borrowed your wordz and now they've ben misused//" not too good. weak punch. ''put in a place where your death is tha only thing expected// your text will fall like i have antrhax and its ben injected//'' Had potential to be great. As is it's just good. "(stlye change four closing lines) i aleviate burends as if my name wus breast reduction// im get these votes like they were influenced by seduction//" sort of weak. too soft. "your fucking stupid like looking for pencil instructions*// your win collumn is limiteed like toaster functions//" Probably would have sounded better if you flipped the two lines around, but still cool. Invader: "listen kid i dont got time for this shit you wanna live alright ill only kill ya a lil bit heres a seat now sit ima show ya how deep this battelin game gose how much yr mom is a hoe and how bad you sux wen it comes to flows ok so step down back the fuck up befor i kill u slut wut how well do u take a beetin cuz im the grim reeper and im reepin i did this while i was sleepin your a lil boy and im the deemin under your bed i haunt you u cant get me outta yr head ima drive ya till yr dead take my advice stop right now if you like ya life" weakness at its highest. Learn to structure your rhymes. That made it harder to pick up on the flow of it. Plus you came too cliche. Work on it. |
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Voted For: verbal power
Verbal Power came with better structure and flow. None of you had any exceptional punches, but Power's were better. ZIM, elevate bro. I'll battle you, holla back. Vote - verbal power Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: verbal power
Was pretty close.... but I didn't like the fact that invader had a few extended lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to verbal... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho.. v/verbal |
Voted For: Invader_ZIM
yo after you two are done i wanna take a shot at ya both... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for verbal power
Verbal power had a style that was easier to read...and shit drop was just nicer
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Voted For: Invader_ZIM
verbal power takes this one because he had some punches instead of barely any from invader zim.. the flow from invader was good but so was verbal power and invaders spelling is horrible i can barely read that shit VOTE VERBAL POWER Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: verbal power
lol an ass whoopin' opener-verb structure-verb metas-verb punches-verb closer verb |
Voted For: verbal power
ok invader no good punches or disse structure all fucked up and it was just not good but better then your usual a 2/10 verbal good opener with the shyne wordplay good ender too punches were ok as well as disses good structure ok wordplay decent verse 5/10 |
Voted For: verbal power
VOTE 4 VERBAL CLEARLY IT GOES 2 HIM INVADER AINT EVEN MAKIN SENCE WIT WAT HE SAYIN BOTH OF YALL NEED 2 ELIVATE |
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