s0ldier vs System Crasher
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 25

Check in by: 08-19-04 at 09:54 AM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

my bad i fucked up the last one this is the real one

ok 'ill go first

System Crasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 09:56 AM.

ill accept as soon as you spit your verse.........

Mr soldier, lost in exposure, better get you a squirt gun before you fall over,
I will shoot your ass down like You and all your fat bitches playin red rover,

I will make you Scream like your dick ridin boy friendS,
Bitch I'll have you lickin' dicks and men till the very end!

Your rhymes are Dim and regretful like your old station wagon,
Bitch you aint no guy, how come your tits is saggin!

PeAcE ~~~~~~

don't take all day now lol im leaving when i come back you better be done then ill start writing

Dude I am done.....go ahead and post yours!!!!!!!

if your done post it and as soon as you post ill accept battle

s0ldier has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 12:11 PM.

This guy could never win a battle his words sound like a dyslexic read em/he said he was gonna murder me but all they made out was redrum/

stupid bitch thought deodorant was an example of common sense/
must not of read between the lines cause your stupefied by the suspense/

this bitch is done im taking him to the gallows he’s gonna get hung/
your rhymes are hopeless like a gangbang without the tongue/



line 1:((dyslexic is a disease when you read words backwards)

line 2:(redrum is murder backwards)

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Voted For: s0ldier

not bad good verse liked it
had good word play and style in it
holla holla

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Voted For: s0ldier

give it 2 sOldier both
structures were da same but i
liked his flow n da lil wordplay he had
plus dat red rover line from Crasher i
seen b4
v/sOldier
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Voted For: System Crasher

System Crasher wins it easy. Wasnt feelin soldiers verse. Wack punches. Dyslexic punch was stupid cuz you forced the rhyme a little bit. Everything after that was garbage. System came with harder punches and a good opener. System takes it.

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Honest Vote:
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Voted For: s0ldier

got my v/ cause ur shit was pit together proper and was actually understandable, his shit was weak and poorly structured

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Voted For: System Crasher

Vote: System Crasher

Lyrics: even, neither excelled da other
structure: Neither, to short a rhyme battle 4 dis to come into it
Multies: neither
Wordplay:System Crasher
Flow/riff: Soldier
Punches: Systm Crasher took it too him callin him a bitch n he had tits and dik sukkin! lol!
Overall: System Crahser just, always hard to decide in 6 line battles but he just came out on top

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Voted For: System Crasher

ok soldier no real punches or disses first bar was madd straeched and flow was off no wordplay a 3/10
system good ass wordplay and flow structure was very good your punches was also lacking and disses aint hit you win by better structure flow and wordplay4/10

Voted For: System Crasher

ok.....both verses were wack......System Crasher.....nice shit.....you've elevated a lot.....Soldier......you bit off some shit......i can't find the proof but the dislexic and redrum shit......someone has used it against me.....you bitin bitch......you lost me at that line.....Crasher gets it over better punches and wordplay.......way better vocab.......just a more decent verse.....keep elevating......and stop biting shit you no good biting biter.....lol :laugh:

V/ System Crasher

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Voted For: s0ldier

Honest vote, no hate..

Soldier came with some better punchlines and it was more creative, they were just more than disses. no personals, stucture from both was good, but soldier took this to me, no hate..

return with an honest vote in my punchline battle plz..
here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144400

Voted For: System Crasher

damn... this was a worthless battle... you guys brains must be hurting after all the thought that went into these... worst battle i've seen yet... ya both need to grow in every aspect of the game... i can't even tell who was worse! It's like the same person wrote both verses!.... shyt... I guess sytem made a lil bit more sense to me... i ain't understand that deodorant line at all!