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WiNC vs [~*Lady Fiya*~]
Battle Rules:
20 Lines max. 1 day to check in (24 hours) drop 1 hour after you check in.. No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No B/S No Hate Votes- they will be removed, don't waste ur time.. Post minimum 150.. we'll return favors with no problem.. don't sleep on this! Hey, WiNC, good luck nigga.. Let's do this shit.. ~L F~ Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 08-19-04 at 06:18 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
WiNC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 12:04 AM.
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[~*Lady Fiya*~]
aight get this…. Addin’ a loss to yah record sorry bout that honey… But you smaller then the faces on throwback money… You “softer” then the “fabric” aftah I use “snuggles”… Got you more “tricked” then “magic” preformed on “muggles”… You the discredited “Heavens Angel” merkin you like Yahtzee… Got you more unholy then a “Jew” turned tah “Nazi”… If you “next to my death bed” then you must be homeless… And when the punches hit yah face you left domeless… Like followers tah Buddha my shots praise at yah temples… Hot shellz to the face leave more then just dimples… No need to be strategic with yah like we playin chess… I jump you like checkers keyin punches to tha face that avoid the chest… You couldn’t be on top of the “hill” if you were “cypress”… Should’ve given you a verbal warning, Don’t try this… You claim Lady Fiya my “river” will dowse yah flame… For now on you just lady I took the fiya out yah name… Should’ve “aborted” when you had the chance I took your “right tah choose”… Like George Bush tah Al Gore in this battle I win and you lose… have you shook like when cops follow an excon... real bitches battle, ladies where aprons... Old money = small faces, snuggles = fabric softner, muggles = non-magic on harry potter, river = flow HeavenakaAngel = her aol tag, Next to you death bed = her location, rest should be obvious… aight that's 20 |
[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 03:27 PM.
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this nigga “misses DaTruth”, lost his manhood wantin’ respect?! (sig)*
annoyin’ reject, nigga u just anotha Bentley tryna fit in every set! lol iNC addict saw Lloyd “roll dice”, now you mimic his left hand! (jag off) battle result: his body sparkin’ ashes near empty propane cans! run to his sig, WiNC asking Jadakiss “why” rapping’s not ur gift?! b4 u was just “GAYE”, now you too quick to kiss to my “grits”?! real niggas scratch not wink, “sword-fightin” since u were eight! (dick) rhymes can’t be taken to “heart” if ya drove at mine with “stakes”! feather-weight?! his ‘ass’ ‘WiNC’ cuz he lets them dicks ‘grasp it’.. beat ya ass n stray jackets, u mo’ crushed than hopeless romantics! lol you fuckin’ wit’ a frantic; Fiya left his grill in sets of chipped teeth.. toss this can-opener back in the drawer, you made ya fans fall asleep! lmao while ya plead, Fiya release ya blood from jagged holes n ya temple! vitals (u) drop pitiful, he claim “beatin” never “crosses” his “mental”-> like “exorcist” u elevatin a “bent spine“, this “cripple” gets propped up! (d/r) doctor gave him a “sucker” he ‘came out’ limpin’ & a lil’ knocked up! lol ya muscles too loose to stand, ashamed cuz ya location spelled out: FLaws** rhymes gettin’ lost, ur audience still waitin’ for signals that say “applause”! lmfao expl.: *WiNC lost to DaTruth but he typed in his sig, “misses DaTruth” **FLaws- [location] WiNC’s from: ...Flawda... that's how it's done, VOTE ppl.. will return the favor.. ~L F~ ahhhhhh wun!.. |
Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
real dope battle but i gave it 2 LADY FIYA cuz her verse was full wit metas, wordplay n punches dat hit all da way threw WINC ya verse was tyght torwards da end but da begining i wasn't really feelin still tyght dough v/LADY FIYA vote on my battles DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^ thanx we will return the favor, nice explanation, i'm uppin' the hell outta this shit... word... holla
i mean UP! |
eh fiya clean drop i'ma have tah do somethin about everyone think i'ma a dude cause i'm not i think i need tah put somethin in my sig that says it or somethin this was happenin to the star a lot too...
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^ ma bad, damn.. ey no offense tho, for a girl u brought a good verse, a lotta girls on here just can't flow, period.. that was a nice drop, period.
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nonetaken and thnks fiya
drag i just returned the favor thnks for gettin yah vote on ... |
cool, yea, i hope people don't sleep on this.. fa real.. i returned drag~on's favor too..
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
winc- your verse was full of could be knock out punches that just werent delivered the right way.decent wordplay and metas but ur tructure was a lil streched in some places.6/10 lady fiya- great punches and wordplay. much more complex verse than wincs and the structure was nice also. probably the best verse ive ever seen from you.8.75/10 rtf with my battles in the sig! v//lady fiya Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: WiNC
i liked both verses but miss fiya u still a homegurl but damn u spoke bout dis dude bout bein a fag more than n e thing so it wasnt nuttin 2 creative nice punches but same shit different use.....i liked u punches n multi's n metas in ur verse winc both had good structure n flow n vocab but i give my vote 2 winc since mami u tlkd bout nuttin but gay disses bout him...lol still all love though i kno u got skills good luck 2 both of ya peace out holla back n return da fava wun luv Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thnks fah votin people honest votes have already been returned....uppin this..
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votes needed on this battle up...........................
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Voted For: WiNC
Gotta give this vote to WinC because he had better wordplay, and structure. He also had better Punches and Personals. Although you started your flow wack, but you picked it up near the middle to the end. Lady- Nice flow, Nice punches, some didnt make too much sense, and that's why i couldnt give this one to you. You had poor structure on this one...but you did have a couple personals. And you fell off near the end. elevate on that part overall: need to start to have a consistent flow(tight from beginning to the end). yall also need to work on structure and try to add more personals, cause that's wut will give it to you. drop votes on the below battle...I return all HONEST votes....holla |
^uppin' 4 some honest explained votes... up this beeotch.. lol
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
Good shit good shit... I think you got this battle for real nice job you stretched ya bars a little 2 much tho. Some nice wordplay in here. Now the other dude up there had some nice punchlines but wtf was that Harry Potter shit? c'mon man grow up lol this is rap not Great Britten.... Uhh well i think you got this battle nice job! |
Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
this was the best battle because it was all down to decent punches and thats exacly what she managed to pull off. She had the better flow aswell. Only bad thing was the structure which wink won on da but everything else was ladys good spit both of ya. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
Haa Haaa cant vote cuz baby girl in my crew
but good battle ya~Nice drop 4rm both of u Rep the Fam Fiyah~~ |
uppin this will return all the votes in a min...
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
nice battle, you took this with wordplay, flow and punches, nice personals too, foreal gurl, harder and stronger disses then winc,i liked your opener, you stayed on with the flow of this throughout ya verse, didnt fall off one bit, your closer was funny as hell, nice job winc, ya verse was good too, just not as strong as hers man, but overall good job both vote:lady fya for personals and strong punches |
uppin this shit more explained votes ...
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This was feedback posted for WiNC
wow these drops were crazy and they bot females...id be scared to battle these ladies. IF i could vote though id prob go with winc she was just an edge better and like from the start her shit just came straight ill
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yea, uppin' this people plz explain ya votes so this shit can close sum time soon, fa real... EXPLAIN ppl, explain, lol
UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN' ~L F~ |
explain dah votes...
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This was feedback posted for WiNC
you know if i didnt have to explain it so much id prov vote more often...but I think WINC took this one. (Mind you this is just feedback so dont try to DQ it!!!!!!)
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
Ight, coo battle but this is how it goes, play by play style... Addin’ a loss to yah record sorry bout that honey… But you smaller then the faces on throwback money… 7/10 - Punch was ok but not good for an opener You “softer” then the “fabric” aftah I use “snuggles”… Got you more “tricked” then “magic” preformed on “muggles”… 8/10 - Good punch but the snuggles line wasn't good You the discredited “Heavens Angel” merkin you like Yahtzee… Got you more unholy then a “Jew” turned tah “Nazi”… 9/10 Real tight punch and hardhitting If you “next to my death bed” then you must be homeless… And when the punches hit yah face you left domeless… 7/10 - You sit it up with a tight beginning, but punch wasn't hard hitting Like followers tah Buddha my shots praise at yah temples… Hot shellz to the face leave more then just dimples… 8/10 Really good stable punch No need to be strategic with yah like we playin chess… I jump you like checkers keyin punches to tha face that avoid the chest… 7/10 Punch was stretched; to avoid that, try using metaphors to shorten it down You couldn’t be on top of the “hill” if you were “cypress”… Should’ve given you a verbal warning, Don’t try this… 7/10 - Once again, set up was good but not hard hitting You claim Lady Fiya my “river” will dowse yah flame… For now on you just lady I took the fiya out yah name… 9/10 Really good punch and use of metas Should’ve “aborted” when you had the chance I took your “right tah choose”… Like George Bush tah Al Gore in this battle I win and you lose… 6/10 Probably the worst line in your spit, punch was soft have you shook like when cops follow an excon... real bitches battle, ladies where aprons... 7/10 Ok closer, lack good punch total = 85 % this nigga “misses DaTruth”, lost his manhood wantin’ respect?! (sig)* annoyin’ reject, nigga u just anotha Bentley tryna fit in every set! lol 9/10 Hahahaha, funny punchline and good opener iNC addict saw Lloyd “roll dice”, now you mimic his left hand! (jag off) battle result: his body sparkin’ ashes near empty propane cans! 9/10 Really good punch and use of rhymes with metas run to his sig, WiNC asking Jadakiss “why” rapping’s not ur gift?! b4 u was just “GAYE”, now you too quick to kiss to my “grits”?! 7/10 - OK line, punchline but needed to word the opener real niggas scratch not wink, “sword-fightin” since u were eight! (dick) rhymes can’t be taken to “heart” if ya drove at mine with “stakes”! 9/10 Unbelievable use of rhymes and metas again feather-weight?! his ‘ass’ ‘WiNC’ cuz he lets them dicks ‘grasp it’.. beat ya ass n stray jackets, u mo’ crushed than hopeless romantics! lol 8/10 - Good stable spit punch you fuckin’ wit’ a frantic; Fiya left his grill in sets of chipped teeth.. toss this can-opener back in the drawer, you made ya fans fall asleep! lmao 8/10 Really good punch while ya plead, Fiya release ya blood from jagged holes n ya temple! vitals (u) drop pitiful, he claim “beatin” never “crosses” his “mental”-> 7/10 Ok punch, just try re-wording it like “exorcist” u elevatin a “bent spine“, this “cripple” gets propped up! (d/r) doctor gave him a “sucker” he ‘came out’ limpin’ & a lil’ knocked up! lol 8/10 Hahahahahaha, real funny punch line ya muscles too loose to stand, ashamed cuz ya location spelled out: FLaws** rhymes gettin’ lost, ur audience still waitin’ for signals that say “applause”! lmfao 7/10 Ok closer, you already used the audience joke previously, dont try to repeat yourself next time total = 92 % Overall, very good spit by both, but you know what to work on... v - LF |
uppin' to close the hell outta this shit.. thanx good feedback..
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uppin for votes yea good explanation...
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
decent battle pretty nice punches here and there. the flow was a little off everyone in a while (on both verses) overall: i think [~*Lady Fiya*~] took this one.her punches hit harder and it kept me interested (somewhat) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin' fa this shit to close, damn one vote.. explain ppl i'm tired of deleted votes, shit should be over and done with damn..
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yea lets get some explained votes i hate bein the person tah get shit dq'd be damn some people just come with weak ass bullshit for votes win or lose i want some feedback thats real...
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^it's coo, WiNC i feel ya EXPLAINED votes ppl... up! Goddamn!
drop the votes people... ~L F~ |
it's all about the FEEDBACK ppl let's get some
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Voted For: WiNC
You claim Lady Fiya my “river” will dowse yah flame… For now on you just lady I took the fiya out yah name… ....Damn son, that shit is real sick... your puches hit alot harder, were easier to follow and made more scince. You had a few multis, and alot of personals. Overall you get my vote..nice shit nigga. Fiya...U had some real good punches towards the end but u wasn't fluent wit em. Like ya personlas 2 but WINC's hit harder. Good battle...but this might be an "L" 4 you ma, and I aint talkin bout blunts. |
uppin for dem votes it's all about the feedback...
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
YO NICE DROP FROM BOTH OF YALL LADY FIYA -PUNCHES 10/10 (DAYUM) - WORDPLAYS 9/10 - STRUTURE 9/10 - PERSONALS 10/10 -FLOW 10/10 -48 WINC PUNCHES 9/10 WORDPLAYS 10/10 (NAZI LINE HA HA HA) STRUTURE 10/10 PERSONAL 7/10 FLOW 9/10 -45 CLOSE BATTLE BUT DA PUNCHES AND DA PERSONALS CAME HARD WITH LADY ~PEACE~ YO LADY RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG GIRL |
uppin' to close this shit, enuff explainin' and removin' goin' on, sum one close this shit, my goodness!! UPPIN'.........
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
lady fiya.......ima have to give you this one even tho i like both verses.....i like the way you used metaphores in here....not directly sayin what your talkin bout but describin shit that made u think....ya wordplay was decent..prolly coulda been betta...ya opener was good...i like dat closer too...dis was a good verse from you.. Winc...you had a good verse too.....it was kinda hard to decide but i had to go wit that fact that all your punches really hit hard in the beginnin of ya verse..it seem like you fell off at the end to me....ya opener was ok too...closer just seemed like u got lazy lol...but like i said it seemed like you slacked.... Lady fiya took this becuz of her clever use of metaphores...and she stayed strong throughout her whole verse.can yall hit up my battle against mic-wrecker in elevated plz.. i took the time to vote in yall battle so do the same for me holla |
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