$ik vs Verbal Abuse
 

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Check in by: 08-19-04 at 04:23 AM

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$ik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 01:25 AM.

Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 01:46 AM.

Tell Me Not To Fuck with Ya Fam But Truth Is, Ya Mom Done Been Piped
Verbal Talks Shit Like His Rectums Connected To His Fuckin Wind Pipe//1
Yo My Nine Flash More Than Tourist Folks, Your Now Exposed Like Nudist Folks
Verbal Reminds Me Of A 'Rabbi' Walkin Into A Bar..He's Just A 'Jewish' Joke//2
You Could 'Tri' To Run 'Circles' But Homie You Would Never Win This 'Round'
Ima Leave Yur Echo Jealous, Cuz Im The One It Cant Even Mimic Now//3
Now You Started Yur Own Beef Yo, Ima Let The Chrome Heat Blow
Cuz $ik Is Strapped With More Hammers Than The Damn Home Depot//4
And Your 'Fit' To Lose, Verbal's In 'Good Shape'
From 'Stretching' The Truth
Put You In The Basement Til You Bring Some Heat Like Your Fetching The Booth//5

you on the garbage end of the scale, your records one past a dasaster. (9-11)
pap's life seemed faster, verb's rhymes the reason you' a bastard.
this like the second chapter, lucky he was crushed by dem towers. i was the tragic shock after.
i wRAP your whole life's moments like hackers.
dont gotta tamper with fillers just to hype folks laughter.
lackin materials of a rapper, you dont got the heart.
we joined the same month, you must have hip hopped the start.
struggles to shun depart, must choke the lyrics from beneath your throat.
until teeth eloped, your wack n all. just a see through joke.
wants what comes from his mouth to be sick, runs to catch some mono.
dance studio n condo, the only place he found it. and it came in a combo.
no need to over due it, hes already been murdered in last.
to sick to have a counter attack, this cowards even alergic to grass.
predict this MC's, a froder with community service.
soon to be furnaced. mama jokes? your humor seems herbish.

Voted For: $ik

yo good battle.

verbal-your whole verse was just okay overall but ur structure was off. you need to come with harder punches than that cuz ur just not that hot wit this verse...6/10

$ik-ok dont count out ur bars ever again. other than that ok drop. u talked about guns and shit too much so it lost u a lil bit of points. nice personals and punches..i actually laughed at that "jewish joke" line lol. good job .....7/10

v//$ik

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Voted For: $ik

i honestly think sik took this one...V.B. had a NICE flow also, this was close,but the reason why i say sik is cause he had better and more punches...his shit was "sik"...lol...i liked his intro in this flow, but his exit wasnt all that...V.B. had a wack beginning, but in the middle to the end he started comin hard, but i think it was too late...not too many personals in this one to be directed to competitor only, but then again this is the net...good shit people

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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

aight this was an aight battle but didnt see anything i liked...im not gonna write a essay but....i think VB took this...
Sik ur lines seemed stretched and that kinda fucked up ur flow...ur wordplay was ok...and i didnt really c any personals....most of it seemed like filler...ovrall id say 6/10
VB u basically won this cuz u had personals and better punches...ur flow was fucked in the begining but it got better in the end....and ur wordplay was gud...overall 7.5/10
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

o.... my... gosh!!!

Can u say MERKED? Verbal smashed this kid in everyway possible. punches were harder... flow was better... liked the vocab a lot... had some multiples... not too complex but multi's none-the-less... nice read 7/10

$... I don't know man... momma jokes are played and ya started off with one... ya flow was just too simple to compete... gun talk ain't gangsta... everyone has one and everyone talks about it... try using a little more originality... liked the wordplay in the first line of the last bar but it wasn't a good finisher... 5/10