Ghost354 vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:
5 Lines minumum
12 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-19-04 at 10:02 PM

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Ghost354 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 08:04 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 08:16 PM.

Explanations in order my flow uncharterized
Saying his oppoisition is restitance apperantly lies
I see through ya transparent lines
Ya 360 fucked up ya square off side(1)
In rap im on track everything that you lack boy
My verse to ''GHOST''s is like Dan Acroyed(2)
Ya best bet to check for a exit
Cuz ill scar ya faceyou can be the best rapper rapping in texas
(3)
Lyrical GOD you just focus and praise
Cuz you can never elevate like helichopters with broke blades
Dont know why you called me out nobody respects ya
Log out and sign back in get rid of ya fucked up record(4)



1)360 is a cypher a square is 360 degrees his rap square is off line outta focus basically
2)Dan Acroyed played in Ghostbusters the movie
3)hes from TEXAS Scarface is too so since he thinks hes nice ill cut his face and he can say hes scarface from Texas
4)hes 7-10 nobodys gonna respect a score like that i told him rerigister with a new name and get a 0-0 record its better then his shit now

empire just fake watch em split an brake...
cuz lyke elephant beastiality im just way to Big-to-take
claim underground status like a hidin arab...
but u like Dexter's parents u aint neva been in da lab
I'll sweep your future lyke a cleaning-career...
leave u a distant memory lyke marriage in itz senior-yearz
need so much work wit ya flow start holding signs..
or im just gonna start callin ya bars un-employment lines
ur a FABLE, a MYTh not a LEGEND..
now that u de-feet-ed show ur friends where ya LEG-ENDS

Voted For: Empire

this was a close tight battle.....

flow: tie
punches: ghost
personal: empire
diss: empire

vote: empire he just edge it out with personals and disses but tight battle N nice punches ghost
....

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Voted For: Empire

Im gon have to give this one to .....
Empire had a good structure
good punchlines and a sweet flow
That helicopter line really killed him
Ghost had an ok drop
nice flow but I didnt catch many punchlines
nice try though
v/Empire

Voted For: Empire

YO THAT SHIT WAS SICK GOTTA GIVE IT TO YOU
GHOST GOT SMASHED ON EVEN THOUGH HES DEAD ALREAD
RETURN THA FAVOR GO VOTE

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Voted For: Empire

chose winners verse....

overall wack battle....

Explanations in order my flow uncharterized
Saying his oppoisition is restitance apperantly lies
ok punch....not much english on it 6/10
I see through ya transparent lines
Ya 360 fucked up ya square off side(1)
aight punch....nothing too special 5/10
In rap im on track everything that you lack boy
My verse to ''GHOST''s is like Dan Acroyed(2)
decent punch....nice wordplay 6/10
Ya best bet to check for a exit
Cuz ill scar ya faceyou can be the best rapper rapping in texas
(3)
basic punch....you could tell it was a filler 5/10
Lyrical GOD you just focus and praise
Cuz you can never elevate like helichopters with broke blades
nice punch.....direct hit in the face 7/10
Dont know why you called me out nobody respects ya
Log out and sign back in get rid of ya fucked up record(4)
normal closer....should of made it more interesting 5/10

v/empire

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143293
return the favor^^^

Voted For: Ghost354

i think ghost354 won this 1 he ha a betta flow and punches

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yo
 

yo ghosts you should return da favor by putin an honest vote on $~Big~Bonks~$ vs rymhereaper

Voted For: Ghost354

ghost354 i like your rhymes..........pretty good 8.5/10

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those are both dr votes obviously he asked those niggas to vote for him anyways uping

Voted For: Empire

props to both battlers for this, but here's the verdict.
both were fairly neck and neck but what's with me, is that i don't like corniness. And it seems ghosts was very much rife with corny punch lines

but u like Dexter's parents u aint neva been in da lab

i'm nearly mad i got that punch line. I like battles to be more intense, but everybody spits a whack line or verse here and there, can't be mad at ya.l

empire's was on a more complex level, and left me in the dark a couple times, but the post script was nice though, the explaining things. So his comlexity won this one, against ghost's corny punches, no diss of course.

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This was feedback posted for Empire
 

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Voted For: Empire

Empire wins this one here. Nice punches and some decent wordplay. Wasn't your best, but was enough to put away GHOST. Nice battle.

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Voted For: Empire

empire got this with better wordplay, and structure...his punches were coo(some of them) and his personals(only a couple) that he had were str8...

ghost, wasnt too much feeling yo flow, it was predictable as far as rhyming goes, but you had some aight punches in there, simple, but worded str8...good flow

overall-my vote goes to empire becuase his all around flow was better



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Voted For: Empire

give it 2 Empire his wordplay was better
2 me it hit harder Ghost had wordplay but
it wasn't all dat good nice drops dough give
a honest vote on da battles in my sig i voted
on ya battle

Voted For: Empire

punches: empire
personals: empire
wordplay: ghost
multis: none
metas: empire

vote: empire

he came harder and connected with punches....ghost ya shit was str8 but empires was a likel bit better....no beef \/\/ return favor hit up mah battle drop a vote or 2.....[honest]